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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite food?

Thí sinh

My third food is a chocolate cake. I have a sweet tooth and I think chocolate fruit are very perfect for birthdays or other celebrations.

Giám khảo

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Thí sinh

I like eat fast food when I was a kid, such as hamburgers and pizzas. I think they were my favorite food and I often liked going to the fast food restaurant with my friend.

Giám khảo

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. For example I liked it hot pot and some soup in winter because I think they can keep me warm. But in summer I like eat some cold food such as ice cream and watermelon.

Giám khảo

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Thí sinh

I think my favorite food hasn't changed. For example, when I was a cat I really liked to eat chocolate food, but I'm still like it now.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

What is your favourite food?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 句子有多处语法、用词错误且表达不够自然。建议用一句主题句直接回答喜欢的食物,然后用一到两句具体说明原因和场景,注意名词和形容词搭配以及单复数。可以使用连接词(because, so, especially)使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: My favorite food is chocolate cake. I have a sweet tooth, and I especially enjoy chocolate cake at birthdays because it tastes rich and festive.

What kind of food did you like when you were young?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 时态和动词形式使用错误,句子略重复且细节不够具体。建议用一两句清楚交代过去的喜好,使用过去时,并加上具体原因或记忆(who, when, why)来丰富内容。可用连接词(because, so, when)保持逻辑。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved eating fast food like hamburgers and pizza because it was convenient and tasty. I often went to the local fast-food restaurant with my friends after school and we would share fries.

Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 总体回答清楚但有语法和搭配问题,部分时态和词序需调整。建议先给出直接回答,然后分别说明冬季和夏季的饮食偏好,使用连接词(for example, in winter, while)并给出具体原因或习惯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. In winter I usually eat hot pot and soups because they keep me warm and comforting. In summer I prefer cold foods like ice cream and watermelon to help me cool down.

Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 含有明显用词错误('cat')和语法问题,表达不够自然。建议直接回答是否改变,并用一两句说明原因或举例,注意使用正确的人称和时态,避免拼写或词汇错误。

Ví dụ: No, my favorite food hasn't changed. I liked chocolate treats when I was a child and I still enjoy chocolate cake and other chocolate desserts now because I have a sweet tooth.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× My third food is a chocolate cake.

My favourite food is chocolate cake.

句子中的句意是表達最喜歡的食物,原句“My third food”使用不正確。這屬於形容詞/副詞或表達方式錯誤(應使用‘favourite’或‘I like’),因此改為“My favourite food is chocolate cake.”。建議:使用正確的描述喜好短語(e.g. “my favourite food” 或 “I like”)。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I have a sweet tooth and I think chocolate fruit are very perfect for birthdays or other celebrations.

I have a sweet tooth, and I think chocolate desserts are perfect for birthdays or other celebrations.

原句中“chocolate fruit”搭配不當(水果不應與“chocolate”直接組合表達甜點),且“very perfect”冗餘(perfect本身已是最高程度)。屬於形容詞/副詞使用錯誤。建議:使用合適名詞(desserts)并避免冗餘修飾(remove “very”)。

Present tense issue

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I like eat fast food when I was a kid, such as hamburgers and pizzas.

I liked to eat fast food when I was a kid, such as hamburgers and pizza.

這句混用了現在時“like”與過去時間狀語“when I was a kid”。根據時態一致性,應使用過去式“liked”。另外,動詞結構錯誤,“like eat”應為“like to eat”或“liked eating”;pizza常用不可數形式或單數集合形式,改為“pizza”。建議:保持時態一致並使用正確不定式或動名詞結構。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think they were my favorite food and I often liked going to the fast food restaurant with my friend.

I think they were my favourite food, and I often liked going to the fast-food restaurant with my friends.

原句中“friend”與上下文不符,應為複數“friends”或明確單數。此處因談論習慣性活動,使用複數更自然。屬於主謂/數一致錯誤(複數名詞)。此外“fast food restaurant”在作為複合形容詞時通常寫作“fast-food restaurant”。建議:注意名詞單複數與固定搭配拼寫。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× For example I liked it hot pot and some soup in winter because I think they can keep me warm.

For example, I liked hot pot and some soups in winter because I think they can keep me warm.

原句“I liked it hot pot”結構不正確,應直接說“I liked hot pot”。“some soup”可改為複數“some soups”或保持不可數“some soup”,與“hot pot”並列時改為“some soups”更自然。屬於形容詞/表達使用錯誤和句子結構不當。建議:去掉多餘代詞“it”,並保持並列項目形式一致。

Present tense issue

× But in summer I like eat some cold food such as ice cream and watermelon.

But in summer I like to eat cold foods such as ice cream and watermelon.

“like eat”缺少不定式“to”,且原句使用現在時描述季節性習慣,此處使用現在時“like”是可以的,但動詞結構需修正為“like to eat”或“like eating”。另外“cold food”更自然用複數“cold foods”。建議:使用正確動詞搭配“like to eat / like eating”。

Past tense issue

× I think my favorite food hasn't changed. For example, when I was a cat I really liked to eat chocolate food, but I'm still like it now.

I think my favourite food hasn't changed. For example, when I was a child I really liked to eat chocolate treats, and I still like them now.

原句把“child”誤寫為“cat”,屬於詞彙錯誤(但按給定列表屬於時態/句構類別,這裡同時更正為合適詞)。此外“I'm still like it now”動詞使用錯誤,應為“I still like it/them now”。“chocolate food”不自然,改為“chocolate treats”。建議:檢查拼寫並保持代詞與先行詞一致(it vs them),時態搭配應用恰當。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ColdChilly; Unfriendly
CreamLotion; Best; Off-white
FastSpeedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
PerfectIdeal; Flawless; Exact; Absolute; Improve
SweetSugary; Fragrant; Dulcet; Pleasant
WarmBalmy; Heated; Thick; Friendly; Heat (up)
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