Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g. "uh," "about"), correct prepositions, and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I live in the capital city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there are office towers and residential high-rises, and they serve different purposes like housing, businesses and shopping. Overall, the skyline near my home is quite developed.

Gợi ý: Use natural vocabulary and clear phrasing. Avoid awkward expressions ("eye catchy", "pitch of eye present of eye") and repetition. Provide a concise reason and a brief example, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings because their architecture is interesting. For instance, I like to capture unusual facades or historic details when I walk around the city, so I sometimes share the photos on social media.

Gợi ý: Be specific and correct word choice. Begin with a clear statement, use correct prepositions ("near my home"), and give a brief reason with one or two supporting details. Replace vague words like "conservations" with "conversations" or "events."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a nearby building called RAWA Club, which is very close to my home. It hosts parties and community events, and I’m curious to experience the atmosphere and meet people there.

× Ah definitely, because I live in the city and it's the capital of my country.

✓ Ah, definitely, because I live in the city and it is the capital of my country.

No major subject-verb error here; corrected contraction standardization and added comma. Keep 'it is' to match formal spoken answer. Suggestion: keep punctuation to clarify pauses.

× That's why there are a lot of tall buildings uh near about my home and they are constructed for different types of purposes.

✓ That's why there are a lot of tall buildings near my home, and they are constructed for different purposes.

Removed redundant 'about' and 'uh near about' and corrected 'different types of purposes' to 'different purposes'. Use plural 'buildings' correctly; simplify phrase for natural English. Suggestion: avoid filler words and redundant prepositions.

× Yes, I usually do because the infrastructures of these buildings are more eye catchy and it gives it gives me a pitch of eye present of eye.

✓ Yes, I usually do because the infrastructure of these buildings is very eye-catching and it gives me a pleasant impression.

'Infrastructures' is uncountable in this context so use 'infrastructure' (singular uncountable) and agree verb 'is'. 'Eye catchy' is nonstandard; use 'eye-catching' (hyphenated adjective). Removed repeated 'it gives' and replaced unclear phrase with 'pleasant impression'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and avoid repetition.

× That's why I take photos sometimes of these buildings.

✓ That's why I sometimes take photos of these buildings.

Word order is awkward. Place adverb 'sometimes' before verb 'take' for natural English. Suggestion: follow standard adverb placement: subject + adverb + verb.

× I would like to visit a building which is near about my home and the building is called RAWA Club.

✓ I would like to visit a building near my home called RAWA Club.

Removed 'which is near about' (redundant and informal) and simplified clause. 'Would like to' correctly expresses desire (conditional/future-in-meaning). Suggestion: use concise relative clauses: 'a building near my home called X'.

× Basically it's a club where people gathered for any kind of party or conservations and I really like to visit that building.

✓ Basically, it is a club where people gather for parties or conversations, and I would really like to visit the building.

Changed past 'gathered' to present 'gather' because the club is generally used (habitual action). 'Any kind of party' better as 'parties', 'conservations' incorrect word — use 'conversations'. 'I really like to visit' adjusted to 'I would really like to visit' to match earlier 'would like' desire. Suggestion: match verb tense for habitual actions and use correct nouns.