Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
There aren't 2 buildings near my home because I uh, live near the historical buildings. Uh, there are limited heights of the UH neighborhood for protection.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, I take photos of buildings if I capture some beautiful scenery of urban urban blocks. And because I'm a student of architecture, uh, I would like the details of buildings.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to visit the famous building, uh, designed by the Spanish architect named Gaudi is so uh, awesome.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 内容清晰但表达不够自然且有重复与犹豫。建议:1) 开头直接肯定并给出一两句简短原因(避免“uh”与重复词);2) 用更准确的词汇(例如“few tall buildings”而不是“2 buildings”);3) 使用连接词使句子更流畅;4) 控制在3-4句内。示例句型可练习发音与流利度。
Ví dụ: No, there are few tall buildings near my home because I live in a historical district. For conservation reasons, building heights are strictly limited, so most structures are low-rise and well preserved.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答有内容并提到个人背景,但存在重复("urban urban")、犹豫词和句子结构可更紧凑。建议:1) 避免重复词与填充词(uh);2) 用连词将原因连接起来;3) 提供一两个具体例子(如喜欢拍立面细节或拱形窗)。保持在三句以内以更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially when I find an attractive urban scene. As an architecture student, I focus on details like facades and ornamentation, which help me study different styles.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答表达兴趣但语法不完整且有大量犹豫词。建议:1) 用完整的句子先直接回答并说明是哪座建筑;2) 给出具体理由(如独特的曲线设计或色彩);3) 避免感叹词替代具体描述;4) 可补充如何计划参观。这样更符合题目要求并更有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit La Sagrada Família in Barcelona, designed by Antoni Gaudí. Its organic shapes and intricate façades fascinate me, and I want to study how Gaudí blends structure with natural forms.
× There aren't 2 buildings near my home because I uh, live near the historical buildings.
✓ There aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live near historical buildings.
原句中“There aren't 2 buildings”使用了数字“2”与语境不符,面试回答应说明“没有高楼”,而非精确数量。应使用复数或不定代词(any)来表达“没有……”。另外“the historical buildings”在此语境下不需定冠词,改为“historical buildings”。建议:当表示不存在时用“there aren't any + 复数名词”;描述一类建筑时可省略定冠词或用不定冠词。
× Uh, there are limited heights of the UH neighborhood for protection.
✓ Uh, there are height restrictions in the neighbourhood for protection.
原句中“limited heights of the UH neighborhood”结构不自然,且“the UH”疑为打字或发音误写。应使用固定搭配“height restrictions”表示“高度限制”。同时“for protection”位置可保留但更自然地放在句末。建议:使用常见短语(如“height restrictions”)来表达政策或限制。
× Yes, I take photos of buildings if I capture some beautiful scenery of urban urban blocks.
✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings when I capture some beautiful scenery of urban blocks.
原句中“if I capture”表示条件,语义上更自然的是“when I capture”(当……时)。此外重复单词“urban urban”为口误或笔误,应删除重复。建议:区分if(条件)与when(时间/常态发生),并注意不要重复词语。
× And because I'm a student of architecture, uh, I would like the details of buildings.
✓ And because I'm a student of architecture, I like the details of buildings.
原句“I would like the details of buildings”中“would like”表达愿望或请求,不符合陈述习惯。此处想表达因专业兴趣喜欢细节,宜用一般现在时“like”。此外“the details of buildings”可改为“the details of buildings”或更自然的“building details”。建议:用一般现在时描述职业/兴趣的常态;区分“would like”(想要/请求)与“like”(喜欢)。
× Yes, I would like to visit the famous building, uh, designed by the Spanish architect named Gaudi is so uh, awesome.
✓ Yes, I would like to visit the famous building designed by the Spanish architect Gaudí; it is so awesome.
原句为句子结构混乱,把定语从句和感叹句混合在一起且缺少连词或标点。应把“designed by the Spanish architect Gaudí”作为定语从句修饰“the famous building”,然后另起一句或用分号连接表达“it is so awesome”。建议:当一句话包含定语从句和独立评价时,用适当的标点或连词分开,保持主语和谓语一致;避免口语填充词影响句子结构。