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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Not really because I live in a small town so that the tall buildings are not common in my home.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like to take photo of buildings because I think it is beautiful and unique, especially, uh, modern architecture or historical building. I and I often share the photos on social media.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

I want to visit the Opera House in Sydney because it is very special designed and I want to know the details about the architecture in it.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并修正语法错误,避免冗长的连接词。可以用一至两句说明原因并补充一处具体细节以显得自然。例如说明你家乡的规模或典型建筑高度。

Ví dụ: Not really. I live in a small town with mostly two- or three-storey houses, so tall buildings are quite rare here.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅、修正语法和停顿,避免重复(如“I and I”)。增加具体细节(拍摄风格、常用角度或拍摄目的)并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I find both modern and historical architecture beautiful. For example, I usually focus on interesting angles and details, and I often share the best shots on Instagram.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并修正语法,提供更具体的原因或期待(比如哪些建筑细节吸引你,或计划如何参观),用连接词使表达更完整。

Ví dụ: I'd love to visit the Sydney Opera House because of its unique sail-like design. I'm especially keen to learn about the construction techniques and see the interior foyers and concert halls in person.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Not really because I live in a small town so that the tall buildings are not common in my home.

Not really, because I live in a small town, so tall buildings are not common where I live.

问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句中“so that”用法不当,且“in my home”表达不自然。应该用“so”表示结果,并用“where I live”或“in my town”来指代居住地;同时需要适当的标点分隔从句,语序更自然。建议:用“so”连接结果,改为“where I live”或“in my town”。

Incorrect use of quantifiers / Incorrect use of nouns (implicit)

× Yes, I like to take photo of buildings because I think it is beautiful and unique, especially, uh, modern architecture or historical building.

Yes, I like to take photos of buildings because I think they are beautiful and unique, especially modern architecture or historical buildings.

问题类型:复数/单数及代词使用混合错误(1 与 12/13)。原句中“take photo”应为复数“take photos”;形容词搭配主语时需用复数代词“they”;“historical building”也应与前文一致用复数。建议:将“photo”改为“photos”,“it is”改为“they are”,并把“historical building”改为“historical buildings”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I and I often share the photos on social media.

I often share the photos on social media.

问题类型:代词/主语错误(12)。原句出现多余的“I and I”重复主语。只需保留一个主语“I”。建议:删去重复的“I”,保持句子简洁。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / Verb form

× I want to visit the Opera House in Sydney because it is very special designed and I want to know the details about the architecture in it.

I want to visit the Opera House in Sydney because it is very specially designed, and I want to learn about the details of its architecture.

问题类型:形容词/副词使用及动词形式(13 与 8/9 的混合)。原句“very special designed”中“special”应为副词形式或使用被动短语“specially designed”或“specially designed”更自然;此外表述“know the details about the architecture in it”不地道,应改为“learn about the details of its architecture”或“know more about its architecture”。建议:使用“specially designed”或改为被动结构“is specially designed”,并将后半句改为更自然的“learn about the details of its architecture”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
ModernPresent-day; Fashionable
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
TallIn height; Demanding
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