Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và tính tự nhiên; trả lời nên trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc (tối đa 3–4 câu). Tránh từ sai hoặc phát âm khó hiểu (ví dụ “skydrappers”, “Siri umm” không rõ). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vị trí, tầm nhìn, cảm xúc). Sử dụng từ nối đơn giản nếu cần.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I can see a cluster of modern skyscrapers from my window, especially in the city center about two kilometers away. I often enjoy the view in the evening when the buildings are lit up because it looks very impressive.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác hơn; tránh câu dài rối rắm. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (loại tòa nhà, cảnh chụp, thiết bị). Dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings as a hobby. I especially like photographing historic and modern architecture because I want to remember interesting details. For example, I recently took pictures of a downtown cathedral to capture its ornate façade and stained glass.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời cụ thể (nói rõ tòa nhà nào hoặc loại nào) và nêu lý do cụ thể, tránh cấu trúc mơ hồ. Dùng câu chủ đề rõ, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với chi tiết như vị trí, tính năng kiến trúc hoặc hoạt động bạn muốn làm. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “never have to experience”.

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would love to visit a famous modern skyscraper, such as the Burj Khalifa. I want to see the observation deck and admire the city view from above, and also learn about its unique design and engineering.

× Definitely yes. As a person who living in the whole demon city, whenever I look out of the window I always enjoy the beautiful Siri umm of skydrappers. So I find so and why and enjoyable.

✓ Definitely, yes. As a person who lives in the whole Demon City, whenever I look out of the window I always enjoy the beautiful sight of skyscrapers, so I find it very enjoyable.

The relative clause needs a finite verb: 'who lives' not 'who living' (subject-verb agreement and clause formation). 'Demon City' is a proper noun and should be capitalized. 'Siri umm' appears to be a misheard word and should be 'sight'. 'skydrappers' is misspelled; correct form is 'skyscrapers'. The phrase 'So I find so and why and enjoyable' is ungrammatical; replace with 'so I find it very enjoyable' where 'it' refers to the view. Suggestion: ensure relative clauses contain a verb, check noun capitalization, use correct vocabulary, and use a pronoun like 'it' to refer to the preceding clause.

× Of course, this is my favorite hobby whenever I can have a chain to visit a tomb building because I want to recap my memory of the beauty of Sky Rapper that I have enjoyed is I quite very interesting.

✓ Of course. Taking photos of buildings is my favorite hobby whenever I have a chance to visit a notable building because I want to record my memories of the beauty of skyscrapers that I have enjoyed; I find it quite interesting.

'whenever I can have a chain' is incorrect—use 'whenever I have a chance' (modal/ability phrase). 'tomb building' is likely wrong word choice—use 'notable' or 'interesting' building. 'recap my memory' should be 'record my memories' (correct collocation). 'Sky Rapper' is misspelled; use 'skyscrapers'. The clause 'that I have enjoyed is I quite very interesting' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'that I have enjoyed; I find it quite interesting.' Suggestion: use correct expressions for ability/opportunity ('have a chance'), choose accurate nouns, and separate clauses properly with punctuation.

× I will say that whatever I have a chance to visit any building, it would be a modern and gorgeous building that I never have to experience so I can enjoy more beautiful building in my life.

✓ I would say that if I had the chance to visit any building, it would be a modern and gorgeous one that I have never experienced before so I could enjoy more beautiful buildings in my life.

Mix of conditional and future forms is incorrect. Use second conditional to express hypothetical desire: 'if I had the chance' and 'it would be'. 'never have to experience' is wrong; use 'have never experienced before'. Use 'one' to refer to 'building' and plural 'buildings' at the end. Suggestion: use correct conditional structure (if + past, would + base), and match articles and pluralization for nouns.