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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yeah, actually my home is not in the CBD of Beijing, but there also have lots of tall buildings nearby my home, such as the center of node, if you know.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yeah, actually I often take photos for the tall buildings near my home because in some time of the day, such as the sun sight, they will reflect a very pretty scenic. Yeah, so I have a lot of photos about it.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Actually I'm not very like to visit their place because the tall buildings means the busy business and I don't like the busy work. So maybe I don't. I will never have the chance to visit them, but it is good.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 首先要直接回答考官的问题并用更准确的语法表达地点关系。避免口语填充词(如 actually)过多,改用简洁的主题句并补充一两句具体细节(例如大楼类型或位置)。注意动词和名词搭配(e.g. "there are" 而不是 "there also have")。此外,控制句子不超过5句,逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes. My home isn’t in Beijing’s central business district, but there are many tall buildings nearby, especially around the local shopping center. For example, several residential towers and office blocks line the main road about ten minutes from my apartment.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅且用词更自然。开头直接肯定或否定,然后用一到两句具体说明拍摄的原因和时间(例如早晨或黄昏),并用连词(because, so, when)连接想法。避免不准确的表达(如 "sun sight"),改用 "sunlight" 或 "sunset"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph the tall buildings near my home because their glass facades catch the sunlight at sunset. As a result, I’ve taken many pictures showing colourful reflections and long shadows.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接回应是否想参观并给出明确理由。术语和语法需改正(如 "I don't really like visiting them","busy business" 改为 "busy atmosphere" 或 "crowds")。避免矛盾表达(先说不喜欢再说可能不会有机会又说 "it is good")。可补充具体偏好或替代选择(例如喜欢安静的历史建筑)。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t enjoy visiting very tall office buildings because they tend to be crowded and too business-like for my taste. I prefer visiting older, quieter buildings like museums or historic houses instead.

Ngữ pháp

There be issue

× Yeah, actually my home is not in the CBD of Beijing, but there also have lots of tall buildings nearby my home, such as the center of node, if you know.

Yeah, actually my home is not in the CBD of Beijing, but there are also lots of tall buildings near my home, such as the Central Node, if you know it.

错误类型:使用了不正确的“there be”结构。应使用“there are”来表明复数存在(lots of tall buildings)。另外,nearby 通常用作副词或形容词,改为“near my home”更自然;“if you know”前加上宾语“it”。建议牢记:’there is/there are’根据后面名词单复数选择。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yeah, actually I often take photos for the tall buildings near my home because in some time of the day, such as the sun sight, they will reflect a very pretty scenic.

Yeah, actually I often take photos of the tall buildings near my home because at certain times of the day, such as at sunset, they create a very pretty scene.

错误类型:介词和短语使用不当。'take photos for' 应为 'take photos of';'in some time of the day' 应为 'at certain times of the day';'sun sight' 不地道,意指日落可用 'sunset' 或 'the sun's light';'reflect a very pretty scenic' 语序和词类错误,应为 'create a very pretty scene'。建议多背常见固定搭配:'take photos of', 'at sunset', 'at certain times'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, so I have a lot of photos about it.

Yeah, so I have a lot of photos of them.

错误类型:代词和介词搭配不当。'photos about it' 不自然,应使用 'photos of them' 指代前文的 tall buildings。建议注意 'photos of' 用法以及代词复数与先行词一致。

Incorrect use of verbs / Verb form and structure

× Actually I'm not very like to visit their place because the tall buildings means the busy business and I don't like the busy work.

Actually I don't really like visiting those places because tall buildings mean busy business and I don't like busy work.

错误类型:多处动词和句子结构错误,需对应题表中的多项(更贴合为句子结构错误/动词形式)。原句 'I'm not very like to visit' 不正确,应使用 'I don't really like visiting'(动词+ -ing 或不定式结构);'their place' 指代不清,改为 'those places';'the tall buildings means' 主谓不一致,复数主语用 'mean';'the busy business' 和 'busy work' 表达不自然,简化为 'busy business' 或 'busy work'。建议:注意动词搭配(like doing)、主谓一致及更自然的名词短语。

Future tense issue

× So maybe I don't. I will never have the chance to visit them, but it is good.

So maybe I won't. I will probably never have the chance to visit them, but it's fine.

错误类型:将来时表达不准确。'I don't' 用于一般现在时,不符合想表达的将来可能性,应使用 'I won't';'will never have the chance' 可保留但用 'probably' 更符合不确定性;'it is good' 改为 'it's fine' 更自然。建议:表示将来否定用 'will not/won't',表达可能性时可加 'probably' 或 'maybe'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
TallIn height; Demanding
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