Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, send), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say whether tall buildings are nearby, then explain why and give a brief description of your surroundings.

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. Because I live outside the city center in a rural area, my house is surrounded by rice fields and trees, which makes the area quiet and green.

Gợi ý: Be clearer about frequency and reason. Use a simple linking phrase to connect your main point and the reason, and avoid repetition. Give a concise example of when you take photos.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I visit the city center. I usually photograph tall or historic buildings because I find their architecture beautiful, for example, I took many photos of a modern skyscraper last time I visited the city.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct answer naming the building and then provide a reason with specific details. Use linking words (for example, because, such as) and correct grammar when mentioning the city and the feature you like.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the National Museum in Phnom Penh. I want to see its traditional Khmer architecture and the carved decorations because they reflect Cambodia’s history and art.

× Send I'm living in a developing country and especially where I live is not in the city center so there is no tall building nearby.

✓ I live in a developing country, and I don't live in the city center, so there are no tall buildings nearby.

The original sentence has extra filler 'Send' and an awkward structure. Combine clauses clearly: use simple present 'I live' for a general fact and plural 'tall buildings' to agree with 'no'. This fixes word order and subject-verb clarity. Suggestion: remove fillers and split into clear clauses.

× My house umm my house is only umm near with the nature, the rice field.

✓ My house is near nature, next to a rice field.

'Near with' is incorrect; use 'near' or 'next to'. Repetition 'My house' and fillers 'umm' are unnecessary. Use 'nature' without 'the' in this context or say 'the rice field' if referring to a specific field. Keep short: 'near nature' or 'next to a rice field.'

× Most of the time I take photo of the building especially when I get to visit the city center.

✓ Most of the time I take photos of buildings, especially when I visit the city center.

Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' when speaking generally (quantifier issue). 'Get to visit' is wordy; simple present 'visit' is natural for habitual action. This aligns tense and plurality.

× Umm the tall building is very beautiful so I can umm stop myself from taking pictures so that I can go back to see all the beautiful.

✓ The tall buildings are very beautiful, so I cannot stop myself from taking pictures because I want to come back to see all the beauty.

Use plural 'buildings' if referring generally; 'the' may be retained if specific. 'Can stop myself' is the opposite of intended meaning; use 'cannot stop myself'. 'So that I can go back to see all the beautiful' is ungrammatical: use 'because I want to come back to see all the beauty.' Also remove fillers.

× Yes, I do have a building that I would like to visit in the future, especially in the city centre located in Phnom Penh.

✓ Yes, I have a building I would like to visit in the future, especially a building in the city centre of Phnom Penh.

'I do have' is acceptable but wordy; simple 'I have' is more natural. Clarify location: 'city centre of Phnom Penh.' Avoid stacking modifiers awkwardly. This fixes 'there be' style awkwardness by using clear noun phrase.

× Phnom Penh, Cambodia is what the capital city because the architect of that building is very beautiful.

✓ Phnom Penh, Cambodia is the capital city, and the architecture of that building is very beautiful.

'Is what the capital city' is incorrect structure; use 'is the capital city.' 'Architect' refers to a person; use 'architecture' to describe the building's design. Link ideas with 'and' to form a grammatical compound sentence.