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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center. There are shopping malls and office buildings.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel to new places because I enjoy documenting my life and I share these photos with my friends.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is very famous and I think it is a romantic place.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息相关,但可以更自然并加入连接词与具体例子以丰富内容。注意避免重复“there are”,可用更流畅的句型并补充一两个具体建筑或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in the city center, so the area is dominated by high-rise buildings such as shopping malls and corporate offices. For example, the Riverside Mall and the new finance tower are just a five-minute walk from my flat, which makes the neighbourhood feel very busy and convenient.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 86.0

Gợi ý: 回答清晰且自然,但可以更具体说明拍摄风格、频率或拍照目的,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。例如说明喜欢拍哪类建筑或用什么方式分享。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, particularly when I travel to new cities. I tend to focus on architectural details and street scenes, and I usually post my favourite shots on Instagram to share my travel experiences with friends.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁但略显笼统。可增加具体原因或期待的活动(如登塔、夜景)来丰富内容,并用连接词衔接理由与感觉。

Ví dụ: Yes, I’d love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it’s an iconic landmark. I want to go up to the viewing platform to see the city skyline and especially to see it lit up at night, which many people say is very romantic.

Ngữ pháp

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× Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center.

Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center.

原句主语和谓语在人称与数上保持一致(there are + plural),语法正确,无需修改。

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× There are shopping malls and office buildings.

There are shopping malls and office buildings.

原句为完整的陈述句,结构正确,符合上下文,无需修改。

6

× Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel to new places because I enjoy documenting my life and I share these photos with my friends.

Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel to new places, because I enjoy documenting my life and sharing these photos with my friends.

问题类型 6(现在时)和 8(动词 + -ing)相关:原句中两个并列动词短语“enjoy documenting my life and I share these photos”在结构上不平行。建议将第二部分改为动名词形式以与“enjoy documenting”保持一致,或重写为两个独立的并列句。中文解释:句子中并列部分的动词形式不一致,造成语法和表达不平衡。建议把第二个动词改为动名词形式(sharing)或改写为两个独立句子,例如“...because I enjoy documenting my life, and I share these photos with my friends.”两种方式均可,但保持形式一致更自然。

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× Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is very famous and I think it is a romantic place.

Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is very famous and I think it is a romantic place.

原句使用条件式/愿望表达(would like)与现在时描述reason(is, think)搭配正确,语法无误,无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FamousWell known
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
TallIn height; Demanding
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