Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, phát âm và mạch câu; trả lời trực tiếp rồi cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Hạn chế tiếng lấp đầy (uh, um) và sửa lỗi cấu trúc như "I live in the center of the city", "there are many tall buildings", và "they serve as offices, shops and company headquarters". Giữ độ dài trong tối đa 4-5 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, such as, and).

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city center. For example, most of them are office towers and shopping centers. They house a variety of companies and shops, which makes the area very busy during weekdays. I like the convenience they provide.

Gợi ý: Nâng cao tính tự nhiên và chính xác của cấu trúc câu, dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn (e.g., skyscrapers, modern architecture, how they are constructed). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi nhỏ về trật tự từ và chia thì. Sử dụng liên từ (because, so, for example) để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially skyscrapers and modern architecture. I enjoy this because I'm curious about how they are constructed and how designers use materials and light. For example, I like to capture different angles to show unique facades and structural details.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (I am always curious, the way it was constructed, to capture different views) và trình bày ý mạch lạc hơn. Tránh dùng 'uh/umm' và hoàn thành câu. Nên nêu câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do và mô tả chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ vị trí, đặc điểm bạn muốn thấy). Giữ 3–4 câu và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Landmark UH-81, which is the tallest building in Vietnam. I'm very curious about how it was constructed and its architectural design. For instance, I'd like to see the observation deck and photograph the building from different viewpoints to capture its scale and structure.

× Definitely yes, because I live in a center of city, so around my home, uh, have a lot of two buildings.

✓ Definitely yes, because I live in the center of the city, so around my home there are a lot of buildings.

The student omitted definite articles 'the' before 'center' and 'city' and used an incorrect phrase 'a lot of two buildings'. Use 'the center of the city' to refer to a specific area and 'there are a lot of buildings' for plural existence. Also add 'there are' for grammatical completeness.

× Uh, they always, uh, service for workplace or service skin or pads or a, a lot of companies.

✓ They are always used for workplaces, service shops, offices, and many companies.

The original sentence lacks subject-verb agreement and uses incorrect nouns. Use 'they are' to agree with plural 'they' and plural nouns for places ('workplaces', 'service shops', 'offices'). Replacing unclear items with appropriate nouns clarifies meaning.

× Definitely yes. I enjoy taking photos of buildings, especially sky, skyscraper and modern architecture.

✓ Definitely yes. I enjoy taking photos of buildings, especially the sky, skyscrapers, and modern architecture.

Plural and article errors: when listing general categories, use plural 'skyscrapers' and include 'the sky' if referring to a specific element. Maintain present simple 'enjoy' for habitual action.

× I'm always curious about they are constructed and about their design so I like capturing different angles and details.

✓ I'm always curious about how they are constructed and about their design, so I like capturing different angles and details.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they are' after 'curious about'. Use 'how they are constructed' to form a noun clause. Also add a comma before 'so' for readability.

× Umm, definitely, yes. I want to go to landmark UH-81, the highest, uh, building in Vietnam.

✓ Umm, definitely yes. I want to go to the Landmark UH-81, the highest building in Vietnam.

Use definite article 'the' before a named landmark and remove extra commas. 'Want to go to' correctly expresses future intention; ensure proper noun capitalization 'Landmark UH-81'.

× I always curious about, uh, the way they constructed and, uh, and about their design.

✓ I'm always curious about the way they are constructed and about their design.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present simple continuous state 'I'm always curious'. Also use passive 'they are constructed' to describe construction and remove duplicate 'and'. Keep present tense consistency.

× So I like umm, to capturing different.

✓ So I like, um, capturing different angles and details.

After 'like' use the gerund form 'capturing', not the infinitive 'to capturing'. Also complete the object ('angles and details') for clarity and remove filler repetitions.