Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, prepositions) and avoid repetition. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a row of modern apartment blocks stands across the street, and I often sit on my balcony to admire their architecture. Because they are well lit at night, they create a pleasant view from my flat.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a clear reason with specific details. Use correct tense and articles, and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating information from previous answers unless adding new detail.

Ví dụ: Not often, but I do take photos sometimes, especially when there is an event on a rooftop or the sunset looks beautiful. I usually photograph the skyline from my balcony because it provides a wide view of the nearby buildings.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then describe the building with specific details and reasons for your interest. Use correct possessives, articles, and verb forms. Keep to 2–3 supporting sentences and use linking phrases like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit my neighbor's apartment on the tenth floor. It looks very modern and well organized, and I want to see the interior design and the view from that height because it must offer a great panorama of the city.

× When I can get enough time, I spend my quality time in balcony and see there are a number of tall building and I follow the structure and the beauty I really.

✓ When I have enough time, I spend my free time on the balcony and see that there are a number of tall buildings, and I really admire their structure and beauty.

Plural nouns must agree with context: 'building' should be 'buildings'. Use correct articles and prepositions: 'in balcony' -> 'on the balcony'. 'When I can get enough time' is unnatural in present habit; use 'When I have enough time'. Include conjunctions and words for clarity: 'see that there are' and 'admire their structure and beauty'. Improve word choice: 'quality time' -> 'free time' and remove redundant 'I really' position.

× Yeah, there are a number of tall buildings situated in my residential house.

✓ Yes, there are a number of tall buildings near my home.

'In my residential house' is incorrect for nearby buildings; use 'near my home'. 'Residential house' is awkward. 'A number of' is acceptable for quantifier but preposition must be corrected.

× When I can get enough time, I spend my quality time in balcony and see there are a number of tall building and I follow the structure and the beauty I really.

✓ When I have enough time, I spend my free time on the balcony and see that there are a number of tall buildings, and I really admire their structure and beauty.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'When I have enough time, I spend' rather than 'When I can get'. Maintain consistent tense throughout the sentence.

× Not often but sometime I take photo because when any occasion situated on the building rooftop.

✓ Not often, but sometimes I take photos when there is an event on the building's rooftop.

Pluralize 'sometime' -> 'sometimes' and 'photo' -> 'photos'. Use 'event' not 'occasion situated' and include 'there is' for existence. Use possessive 'building's rooftop' or 'the building rooftop'.

× Not often but sometime I take photo because when any occasion situated on the building rooftop.

✓ Not often, but sometimes I take photos when there is an event on the building's rooftop.

Missing 'there is' to indicate existence of an event. Use 'there is an event' to form correct 'there be' structure.

× Usually I spend my quality time the on balcony and see different type of view around the house.

✓ Usually I spend my free time on the balcony and see different types of views around the house.

Preposition and article order incorrect: 'the on balcony' -> 'on the balcony'. 'Different type of view' should be plural 'different types of views'.

× My neighbor house is the tall building and his house situated in the 10th floor and his house is very organized and apartments look likes modern.

✓ My neighbor's house is a tall building on the tenth floor; his apartment is very well organized and the apartments look modern.

Use possessive 'neighbor's house' not 'neighbor house'. 'His house situated in the 10th floor' requires verb and correct preposition: 'is on the tenth floor'. 'Look likes' is incorrect; use 'look' or 'looks' depending on subject; here 'the apartments look modern'. Also clarify singular/plural: 'his apartment' vs 'the apartments'.

× My neighbor house is the tall building and his house situated in the 10th floor and his house is very organized and apartments look likes modern.

✓ My neighbor's house is a tall building on the tenth floor, and his apartment is very well organized; the apartments look modern.

Third person singular requires verbs like 'is' and 'is situated' but better 'is on'. 'Look likes' wrongly combines forms; use 'look' for plural 'apartments' or 'looks' for singular 'apartment'. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× And I, I if I get enough chance for visiting, I don't miss this opportunity.

✓ If I get the chance to visit, I won't miss the opportunity.

Use infinitive 'to visit' not 'for visiting'. Clean up filler 'And I, I' and use future intention 'I won't miss' for a likely future event.

× And I, I if I get enough chance for visiting, I don't miss this opportunity.

✓ If I get the chance to visit, I won't miss the opportunity.

Express future intention with 'will' or 'won't' rather than present 'I don't miss' when referring to a future possibility. Also use 'the chance' and infinitive 'to visit'.