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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, there had a lot of tall buildings near my home because my city is a very busy city. They have a lot of apartment or the office or the shopping mall.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

I'm not very interesting for taking photos of buildings. I'm more like taking photos to the animal, to the people or the nature.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Well, I don't think there has some buildings I'd like to visit because I don't have the enough interest to visit a building. I prefer to climbing a mountain or swimming in the beach.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 注意动词时态和主谓一致,避免语法错误和不自然表达;回答应更简洁并包含一个主题句和最多两句支持细节,使用连接词使句子连贯。比如把“had”改为“are”,并把“they have”改为“there are”或用从句连接。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because my city is very busy. For example, there are numerous apartment blocks, office towers and shopping malls, which makes the skyline quite dense.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 注意词汇搭配和表达习惯,使用正确的形容词和介词(例如“interested in”而不是“interesting for”),并用连词给出对比。回答保持三句以内并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: Not really — I'm not very interested in photographing buildings. I prefer taking photos of animals or people, for example when I visit parks or family gatherings.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 注意句子结构、冠词和动词形式(如“there are”而非“there has”,以及“enough”前不加定冠词);用一到两句清楚表明观点并给出具体替代活动作为支持,使用连接词如“because”或“so”。

Ví dụ: I don't really have a particular building I want to visit because I'm not very interested in architecture. Instead, I prefer outdoor activities like climbing mountains or swimming at the beach when I have free time.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, there had a lot of tall buildings near my home because my city is a very busy city.

Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because my city is a very busy city.

原句使用了過去式 had,但說話內容是在描述現在情況(家附近是否有高樓),應該用現在式 are。另外“a lot of”後接可數複數名詞“buildings”,句子需保持主謂一致。建議使用現在簡單時表示習慣性或長期存在的狀態。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× They have a lot of apartment or the office or the shopping mall.

There are a lot of apartments, offices, and shopping malls.

原句中“a lot of apartment”中的 apartment 應為複數 apartments;並且列舉多個可數名詞時每項需用複數形式且用 and 連接,而不是重複定冠詞“the”。同時更自然的句型是用“There are”引出存在多個建築物。建議學習可數名詞單複數和列表連接詞的用法。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm not very interesting for taking photos of buildings.

I'm not very interested in taking photos of buildings.

原句把形容詞 interested 寫錯為 interesting,且介詞搭配錯誤:be interested 應接 in + 動名詞。此外“interesting”是用來描述令人感到有趣的人或事,與主語感受不符。建議記住固定搭配 be interested in + V-ing。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm more like taking photos to the animal, to the people or the nature.

I prefer taking photos of animals, people, or nature.

原句中“more like”搭配不自然,應用 prefer 或 like ... better;介詞應為 take photos of,而不是 take photos to;名詞複數形式 animals/people 更合適,nature 不需要定冠詞 the。建議學習 prefer 結構以及 take photos of 的固定搭配。

There be issue

× Well, I don't think there has some buildings I'd like to visit because I don't have the enough interest to visit a building.

Well, I don't think there are any buildings I'd like to visit because I don't have enough interest in visiting buildings.

原句使用 has 與 buildings 搭配不當,存在句型錯誤。表示“我認為沒有建築物”應用“There are no/any buildings”或“I don't think there are any buildings”。此外“the enough interest”中 the 為多餘,應為 enough interest;動詞 visit 與 interest 搭配時常用 interest in + V-ing。建議用否定存在句型和固定搭配:enough interest in + V-ing。

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer to climbing a mountain or swimming in the beach.

I prefer climbing a mountain or swimming at the beach.

原句中 prefer 後接不定式和動名詞混用且結構錯誤:要麼用 prefer to do,要麼用 prefer V-ing。此處使用 V-ing 比較自然,因此改為 prefer climbing ...。另外介詞應為 at the beach 或 on the beach(根據語境常用 at the beach),而不是 in the beach。建議統一 prefer 的用法並注意介詞搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
InterestingAbsorbing
TallIn height; Demanding
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