Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha yapılandırılmış ve akıcı olmalı. Konuya doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ile başlanmalı, gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu ifadeleri çıkarılmalı. Ayrıntı verirken nedenlerini ve bir örneği belirt (ör. hangi tür binalar, nerede yoğunluk var). Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri mantıksal sıraya koy (ör. "because", "so", "for example"). Ayrıca dilbilgisi hatalarını düzelt: "there'll be" yerine "there are" veya "there used to be" gibi uygun zamir/çekim kullan.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home, mainly shopping malls and apartment blocks. For example, the central avenue has several multi-storey malls that provide shops and restaurants, so most services are within walking distance.

Gợi ý: Cümleler kısa ve net olmalı; dolgu sözcüklerinden ("umm") kaçın. İfadenizi daha doğal hale getirmek için olumsuz bir cevap veriyorsanız sebebini açık ve akıcı bir şekilde söyleyin ve bir alternatif sunun (ör. başka tür fotoğraflar çektiğinizi söyleme). Dilbilgisine dikkat et: "I do not interested" yerine "I'm not very interested" veya "I don't take photos of buildings because I don't know much about architecture" kullanın.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I'm not very interested in architecture. Instead, I prefer taking pictures of people and nature when I go out.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve mantıklı yapın: önce açık bir konu cümlesi, sonra sebep ve bir örnek verin. Bilimsel bir kavram (dopamin) kullanacaksanız bunu kısa ve doğru anlatın. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve bağlaçlarla mantık akışını sağlayın (ör. "because", "so"). Dilbilgisini düzeltin: "I also have a recent research about it" yerine "I've recently read about the dopamine effect" gibi.

Ví dụ: I don't have a particular building in mind, but I enjoy visiting shopping malls because I like shopping and socializing. For instance, I recently read that shopping can trigger dopamine release, which makes spending time in malls more enjoyable for me.

× Yeah, there's a lot of tall buildings in my town because, you know, there'll be a lot of shopping malls in there, so we can access everywhere in the tall buildings. New to my home in my town also.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall buildings in my town because there are many shopping malls, so we can access many places from those buildings. There are also new buildings near my home.

'There be issue' (ID 3): Original uses 'there's' which contracts 'there is' and is incorrect with plural 'a lot of tall buildings'; use 'there are'. 'There'll be' (there will be) sounds like future but context describes current features, so use present 'there are'. 'In there' and 'in the tall buildings' are awkward preposition choices and unclear; 'from those buildings' or 'in those buildings' is clearer. 'New to my home in my town also' is ungrammatical sentence structure; rephrase as 'There are also new buildings near my home.' Suggestions: match 'there is/there are' to singular/plural, keep tense consistent with present descriptions, and use clear prepositions and sentence structure.

× No, I do not because I think I do not have that architecture culture and I do not have the aesthetic, umm, information about what I'm going to do. So I do not take any photos of it because I do not interested a lot.

✓ No, I do not because I don't have that architectural culture and I don't have the aesthetic knowledge about what I would do. So I don't take any photos of buildings because I'm not very interested.

Incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and related word forms: 'that architecture culture' is incorrect—use adjective form 'architectural' and 'culture' is unclear; 'the aesthetic information' should be 'aesthetic knowledge' or 'sense'. 'What I'm going to do' implies future action; 'what I would do' or 'what to photograph' is better. 'I do not interested' is ungrammatical: use 'I'm not interested' or 'I don't find it interesting.' Suggestions: use correct adjective forms (architectural), use 'interested' with 'be' verb, and choose appropriate noun (knowledge) instead of 'information.' Keep contractions consistent.

× There is not a specific building that I like to visit but I love being inside of the malls because of the shopping often and is I also have a recent research about it because of the dopamine effects. So yeah, I like inside of the malls but I do not have any specific building for it.

✓ There isn't a specific building that I would like to visit, but I love being inside malls because I like shopping. I also did some recent research about the dopamine effects of shopping. So yes, I enjoy being inside malls, but I don't have any specific building in mind.

There be issue (ID 3) and tense/structure issues: 'There is not' is acceptable but 'There isn't' is more natural; 'that I like to visit' should be 'that I would like to visit' for preference. 'Being inside of the malls' is awkward—use 'being inside malls' or 'inside the malls.' 'Because of the shopping often' is incorrect adverb placement and word order; use 'because I like shopping' or 'because I often shop there.' 'Is I also have a recent research' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I also did some recent research' or 'I also have recent research' depending on meaning. 'Dopamine effects' needs article and clearer phrasing: 'the dopamine effects of shopping.' Final sentence simplified for clarity. Suggestions: use natural collocations (do research, enjoy shopping), correct tense for past research, and arrange adverbs correctly.