Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 발음, 구체성에 초점을 두어 개선하세요. 문장에서 단수/복수 일치("many tall buildings"), 관사 사용(“the center of the city”), 숫자 단위(‘meters’), 건물 이름의 발음과 철자, 그리고 어색한 표현(“center of the sun”)을 바로잡아야 합니다. 또한 말할 때 망설임(uh)과 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 한두 문장으로 명확히 답하세요. 예: 주제문 + 구체적 정보(높이, 위치) + 간단한 이유/특징.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home in Busan. One of the tallest is the Haeundae I'Park, which stands about 115 meters high in the city centre. It’s easy to spot from the beach because of its glass façade.

Gợi ý: 문장의 구조와 연결어 사용을 개선하세요. 질문에 바로 답하는 주제문을 먼저 말하고, 필요하면 이유와 구체적 예를 덧붙이세요. 문법적으로는 전치사(‘depends on the building’), 동사형(‘take photos / take photos of buildings’), 어순과 표현(‘the photo harmonies’ → ‘the photo looks harmonious’) 등을 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 문장은 2–4문장으로 간결하게 구성하세요.

Ví dụ: It depends on the building. I usually photograph buildings that I find visually striking, especially when they are surrounded by nice scenery. For example, I like taking pictures at sunset because the warm light makes the whole scene look more harmonious.

Gợi ý: 건물이나 장소 이름을 정확히 말하고 문법을 교정하세요. 응답은 주제문(예: Yes, I would like to visit...) 후 구체적 이유(위치, 분위기, 활동)를 포함해야 합니다. 어색한 표현(‘that I must be reset me’)을 자연스럽게 바꾸고 망설임을 줄이세요. 한국어로는 장소의 특징과 이유를 구체적으로 설명하라는 점을 권합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is. I would like to visit Hanok Village (or the Hanok tea house) which I’ve heard about. It’s supposed to be a peaceful place where I can sit with a cup of coffee or tea and relax, so I think it would help me feel refreshed.

× Yeah, there are many tall building in Busan.

✓ Yeah, there are many tall buildings in Busan.

The noun 'building' is countable and the phrase 'many' requires a plural noun. Use 'buildings' after 'many' to agree in number. Suggestion: Use plural form for countable nouns after quantifiers like 'many' (many books, many cars).

× One of the tallest building is located on the center of the sun called F IBIFC.

✓ One of the tallest buildings is located in the center of the city called F IBIFC.

Errors: 'One of the tallest' requires plural 'buildings' (singular/plural issue) and 'on the center of the sun' is incorrect use of preposition and noun. Use 'in the center of the city' to indicate location. Also 'sun' is wrong word; likely 'city'. Suggestion: Use 'in the center of' for locations within an area and ensure the noun is correct (city, town).

× It's over, uh, 115 millimeters.

✓ It's over 115 meters.

Millimeters is an inappropriate unit for building height; a tall building is measured in meters. This is a vocabulary/word-choice error that affects sentence meaning; treat as sentence structure/meaning correction. Suggestion: Use appropriate units (meters, feet) when describing building height.

× It depends on building.

✓ It depends on the building.

The phrase 'depends on' requires a determiner before the noun when referring to a specific noun class. Use 'the building' or 'the type of building'. Suggestion: Use 'the' before nouns when speaking about a specific or previously mentioned thing: 'depends on the weather', 'depends on the building.'

× What is the building? And the building is very impressive to me and I like to photo with many beautiful scenery.

✓ Which building? If a building is very impressive to me, I like to take photos of it with many beautiful scenes.

Several issues: 'What is the building?' should be 'Which building?' when choosing from options. 'I like to photo' is incorrect verb use; use 'take photos' and 'of it' to show object. 'Many beautiful scenery' is wrong: 'scenery' is uncountable, use 'beautiful scenery' or 'many beautiful scenes.' Suggestion: Use 'take photos of' for photographing something; use 'scenery' as uncountable or 'scenes' as plural countable.

× Sometimes when it's sunset, the photo harmonies for the background.

✓ Sometimes at sunset, the photo blends well with the background.

'When it's sunset' is better phrased 'at sunset.' 'The photo harmonies for the background' is incorrect verb and preposition; use 'blends well with the background.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'at sunset', 'blend well with', 'the photo blends with the background.'

× So I like to that at the time.

✓ So I like to do that at that time.

Missing verb: 'like to that' is ungrammatical. You need 'do' as the verb: 'like to do that.' Also 'at that time' is clearer than 'at the time.' Suggestion: Ensure an action verb follows 'like to' (like to do, like to visit, like to take photos).

× Yeah, definitely. The many times I like to visit umm called Hanoka Peko Damnaru.

✓ Yeah, definitely. Many times I like to visit a place called Hanoka Peko Damnaru.

'The many times' is incorrect; use 'Many times'. Also 'visit called' needs a noun: 'a place called...'. Suggestion: Use 'many times' for frequency and include a noun after 'called' if introducing a place: 'a place called...'.

× It's a quiet place to relax and uh, I just sit with coffee and that I must be reset me and refresh me.

✓ It's a quiet place to relax and, uh, I just sit with a coffee, and that helps me reset and refresh.

Multiple errors: 'sit with coffee' is acceptable but 'sit with a coffee' is more natural. 'That I must be reset me and refresh me' is ungrammatical; use 'that helps me reset and refresh' to express effect. Also remove redundant pronouns. Suggestion: Use 'help' + base verb to express benefit ('helps me relax'), and use 'a coffee' for a single cup. Maintain subject-verb structure: 'that helps me reset and refresh.'