Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理，避免语法错误和冗余。先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态一致（一般现在时描述习惯），以及固定搭配（e.g. go there, eat food, skyscraper）。避免重复“new”。

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a very tall shopping mall near my home. It opened recently and looks like a skyscraper. I often go there with my friends to eat and shop.

Gợi ý: 保持简洁并使用更地道的表达。注意可数名词复数（photos, videos）、动词形式（take photos, record videos）和连贯连接词（because, so）。可以给出具体例子说明为什么喜欢拍照或拍哪些角度。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos and videos of interesting buildings because I find their architecture beautiful. For example, I like capturing the façades and night views, then I share them on Instagram and WeChat.

Gợi ý: 回答要明确并且时态使用正确。先直接回答是否想去，然后说明原因和计划。避免混用过去式和现在式。提供时间或细节会更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City again. I have been there briefly before, but it was too crowded, so I plan to go with a friend next summer when we have more free time.

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并纠正词汇和结构（e.g. "live in a tall building", "an apartment on top of a shopping mall", "enjoy the view"）。说明具体原因（convenience, view）并用连接词衔接观点。避免不准确的词如"sands scenery"，改为"city skyline"或"scenic views"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building in the city center. An apartment above a shopping mall would be convenient, and I would enjoy the beautiful city skyline from the windows.

× Yeah, a new shopping mall.

✓ Yes, there is a new shopping mall.

原句缺少动词和完整句子结构，应该使用存在句表达“有...”。建议在此类陈述中使用“there is/are”来引出存在的事物。

× It's new, opened near my home.

✓ It's new; it opened near my home.

原句中两个独立信息之间缺少连接，且表示过去的动作“opened”需要和主语连用。建议用分号、连词或把动词和主语连在一起，保证时态一致。

× It's a very tall building and looks like a sky creeper.

✓ It's a very tall building and looks like a skyscraper.

“sky creeper”不是正确单词，应使用“skyscraper”。注意词汇使用错误属于形容词/名词搭配或单词选择的问题。

× I always with my friends, went to there and eating food.

✓ I always went there with my friends and ate food.

原句缺少动词/连词顺序混乱，动词时态不一致且介词位置错误。建议按主语+动词+宾语顺序，保持时态一致，并将介词放在正确位置（went there）。

× Yes, I always snap photo and videos for the buildings.

✓ Yes, I always snap photos and videos of buildings.

“photo”应为复数“photos”，并且需用介词“of”而不是“for”。此外可不加定冠词“the”除非指特定建筑。

× I always snap photo and videos for the buildings.

✓ I always snap photos and videos of buildings.

原句中“photo”单数与“videos”复数不一致，应使用复数“photos”。

× It looks very beautiful and fancy.

✓ They look very beautiful and fancy.

若指“photos and videos”应使用复数主语“they”并将动词作相应改变。若指单数某一建筑则原句可保留。说明：根据上下文前文提到photos and videos，应与复数主语一致。

× I always take photos with my friends and share online like Instagram and WeChat.

✓ I always take photos with my friends and share them online on Instagram and WeChat.

“share online like Instagram and WeChat”中需指明分享对象“on Instagram and WeChat”，并加上宾语“them”。建议使用介词“on”来表示在某个平台上分享。

× Yeah, I actually I walked visited the Forbidden City.

✓ Yes, I actually visited the Forbidden City.

原句“walked visited”有重复动词且结构错误。只需用“visited”来表示过去参观的动作。

× You know, Beijing is always crowded place, though I don't have leisure time to visit it.

✓ You know, Beijing is always a crowded place, though I didn't have leisure time to visit it.

“crowded place”前需不定冠词“a”。另外说过去参观（visited）与“don't have leisure time”时态不一致，若表达过去无法参观应使用过去时“didn't have”。根据上下文选择时态保持一致。建议使用相同时间参照。

× I want visited with my friend in summer holiday.

✓ I wanted to visit with my friend during the summer holiday.

“want visited”时态混合错误。若指过去想做某事，应用过去式“wanted to visit”；动词“visit”需用不定式。并使用介词“during”更自然。

× Yeah, I like the city center, especially in tall building like the apartment on the top of the shopping mall.

✓ Yes, I like the city center, especially tall buildings like the apartment on top of the shopping mall.

原句中“in tall building”冠词和单复数使用不当，应使用复数“tall buildings”或在单数前加冠词；“on the top of”冗余，通常说“on top of”。建议调整冠词和名词单复数一致。

× And I think living tall buildings can view the beautiful sands scenery.

✓ And I think living in tall buildings allows you to view the beautiful sandy scenery.

原句中“living tall buildings”缺少介词“in”，名词搭配不当；“sands scenery”用词错误，正确应为“sandy scenery”。同时句子需要明确主语（allows you）或改为“It offers a view of...”。建议使用“in tall buildings”以及形容词“sandy”。