Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 지리 관련 사실을 바로잡고 문장을 간결하게 말하세요. 예를 들어 도시 이름과 나라를 혼동했으며, 관사 사용과 복수형, 단어 선택에 오류가 있습니다. 또한 한두 문장으로 주제를 명확히 제시한 뒤 구체적 예시(예: 쇼핑몰, 오피스 빌딩)를 덧붙이세요. 연결어를 적절히 사용해 자연스럽게 답변하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in Guangzhou, which is a large city in China, so there are many office towers and shopping malls nearby.

Gợi ý: 감정 표현과 시제·문법을 자연스럽게 고치고, 구체적 이유와 상황을 추가하세요. 'when I saw' 대신 현재 습관을 나타내는 표현을 쓰고, ‘very excellent’ 같은 중복형용사는 피하세요. 이유와 함께 장소나 빈도를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. I find interesting architecture beautiful, so whenever I see an impressive building—especially in the city center—I usually take a few pictures to remember the details.

Gợi ý: 답변 처음에 간단한 주제문을 쓰고, 이유를 논리적으로 정리하세요. 중복된 표현을 줄이고 구체적인 특징(예: 특정 층, 카페, 전시 공간)을 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 연결어로 이유와 결과를 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the large department store near my home. It has many clothing and shoe shops, accessory stores, and a movie theater, so I often go there to shop and watch films with friends.

Gợi ý: 간단한 주제문 뒤에 구체적 이유와 빈도나 조건을 추가하세요. 'in night'는 'at night'로 수정하고 'gorgeous' 대신 자연스러운 형용사를 선택하세요. 또한 장단점을 함께 말하면 답변이 균형 잡혀 보입니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy the city view at night. The lights are beautiful, and living high up would give me a peaceful feeling, although it might be more expensive than a low-rise apartment.

× Yes, there are many tall buildings around my home because I live in a Guangzhou, which is the city of Korea.

✓ Yes, there are many tall buildings around my home because I live in Guangzhou, which is a city in China.

The use of the article 'a' before the proper noun Guangzhou is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also the sentence incorrectly states Guangzhou is in Korea; the correct country is China. Use no article before most city names and use 'a city in [country]' for description. Suggestion: Remove the article before Guangzhou and use 'a city in China' for accurate description.

× So there are a lot of business or department store like that.

✓ So there are a lot of businesses and department stores like that.

The original uses singular nouns with 'a lot of' and the conjunction 'or' incorrectly (Grammar Problem Type 16 and 1). When saying 'a lot of' followed by countable nouns, use plural forms. Also 'or' implies exclusivity; 'and' is correct to list multiple types. Suggestion: Use plural nouns 'businesses' and 'department stores' and connect them with 'and'.

× Actually yes, because when I saw tall buildings or very excellent architecture, I feel it is very gorgeous.

✓ Actually yes, because when I see tall buildings or very impressive architecture, I feel they are very gorgeous.

The sentence mixes past tense 'saw' with present tense 'feel' (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 5). Maintain consistent tense: use present tense 'see' to match 'feel'. Also 'very excellent' is unnatural; use 'very impressive'. Replace 'it' with 'they' to agree with plural subjects 'buildings' and 'architecture'. Suggestion: Keep present tense and ensure pronoun agrees in number.

× So I usually take photos of buildings.

✓ So I usually take photos of buildings.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'photos of buildings' correctly uses plural. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× Yes, I like to visit department store near my home because there are a lot of clothes, shoes and some accessories and there is a movie theater so I usually go there.

✓ Yes, I like to visit the department store near my home because there are a lot of clothes, shoes, and accessories, and there is a movie theater, so I usually go there.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'department store' when referring to a specific store near the speaker (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also punctuation and conjunctions need improvement: add commas to separate items and use 'and' properly. Suggestion: Use 'the department store' for a particular place and add commas for clarity.

× Yes, because I like city view, especially in night.

✓ Yes, because I like the city view, especially at night.

Missing definite article before 'city view' and incorrect preposition 'in night' should be 'at night' (Grammar Problem Type 17 and 11). Use 'the' for a specific view and the standard preposition for time expressions is 'at'. Suggestion: Use 'the city view' and 'at night'.

× The view of the city is very gorgeous and I like the bright light.

✓ The view of the city is very beautiful and I like the bright lights.

'Gorgeous' is acceptable but 'beautiful' is more natural here; however the main grammar issue is singular 'light' when referring to multiple lights in a city, so use plural 'lights' (Grammar Problem Type 13 and 1). Also consider smoother adjective choice. Suggestion: Use 'beautiful' or 'gorgeous' and pluralize 'lights' to 'bright lights'.