Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, use correct singular/plural and prepositions, and avoid irrelevant or garbled phrases. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences and add one specific detail about where tall buildings are located relative to your home using linking words (e.g., “but,” “however,” “near”).

Ví dụ: No, there are not many tall buildings near my home; the neighbourhood is mainly made up of low-rise residential houses. However, if you go toward the city centre, you can see several skyscrapers and high-rise apartment blocks.

Gợi ý: Focus on correct word choice and fluency. Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific examples of the types of buildings you photograph and why. Avoid filler sounds and incorrect words; replace unclear nouns with precise vocabulary (e.g., “ornamentation” instead of garbled words).

Ví dụ: Occasionally I do. I am especially drawn to buildings with distinctive architectural or historical features; for example, I like photographing old colonial facades for their ornamentation and modern glass towers for their reflections and clean lines.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the building, then give a reason and a specific detail (when or what you expect to see). Keep it to two sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City. I want to go up to the observation deck at night to enjoy a panoramic view of the city skyline and see the lights from above.

Gợi ý: Clarify your stance and provide structured reasons. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating whether you would or would not want to live in a tall building. Then give two concise reasons (one positive, one negative) with specific details, and avoid unclear or invented phrases. Use linking words like “however” and “because.”

Ví dụ: I have mixed feelings about living in a tall building. On the one hand, a high floor would offer breathtaking views and a peaceful atmosphere; however, I would be worried about evacuation and safety during emergencies, which makes me hesitant.

× Not particularly in my neighborhoods mostly consist of lowest rice residential houses.

✓ Not particularly; my neighborhood mostly consists of low-rise residential houses.

The original sentence has run-on structure and word choice errors. 'neighborhoods' should be singular 'neighborhood' to match speaker's reference, and 'lowest rice' is incorrect for 'low-rise'. Use a semicolon or separate clauses and ensure subject-verb agreement ('neighborhood mostly consists'). Suggestion: separate ideas, use 'low-rise' to describe buildings.

× However if you hate toward the city center which injuries astounds throw away, you'll see quite a few ports of sky scrappers and high rise apartment.

✓ However, if you head toward the city center, you'll see quite a few skyscrapers and high-rise apartments.

Many incorrect words and prepositions: 'hate toward' should be 'head toward', 'which injuries astounds throw away' is gibberish and removed, and 'ports of sky scrappers' is wrong — use 'skyscrapers'. Use plural 'apartments' and hyphenate 'high-rise'. Add commas for clarity.

× Occasionally, yes. Umm, especially draw to buildings with unique, uh, architectural, stylish or historical significance.

✓ Occasionally, yes. I'm especially drawn to buildings with unique architectural style or historical significance.

Wrong verb form 'draw' should be passive 'drawn' with 'be' (I'm drawn). 'Architectural, stylish' is awkward; use 'architectural style' or 'architectural design'. Maintain present tense 'I'm especially drawn' for habit.

× I find that capturing the intricate details of an owl cathode or a modern glass tower can be quite satisfying.

✓ I find that capturing the intricate details of an old cathedral or a modern glass tower can be quite satisfying.

'owl cathode' is a misrecognition; intended phrase is 'old cathedral'. Replace incorrect words with appropriate nouns. This corrects meaning and preserves parallel structure between 'old cathedral' and 'modern glass tower'.

× I've always been curious about landmark.

✓ I've always been curious about a landmark.

Missing article before 'landmark'. Use 'a landmark' for a non-specific singular noun. Alternatively 'the landmark' if a specific one is meant.

× UH-81 in Ho Chi Minh City is an iconic structure and I've loved to visit the observation deck to enjoy a panoramic view of the entire city skyline at night.

✓ UH-81 in Ho Chi Minh City is an iconic structure and I'd love to visit the observation deck to enjoy a panoramic view of the entire city skyline at night.

Tense/mood error: 'I've loved to visit' is incorrect for future intention; use 'I'd love to visit' or 'I've always wanted to visit'. This matches the speaker's intention to express desire.

× To be honest I have a mix feelings about it while living on a high floor, offers break taking views and applying atmosphere.

✓ To be honest, I have mixed feelings about it: living on a high floor offers breathtaking views and a pleasant atmosphere.

'mix feelings' should be 'mixed feelings'. Sentence fragments and awkward phrasing 'applying atmosphere' are incorrect. Use colon to introduce explanation, 'offers breathtaking views and a pleasant atmosphere' is correct.

× I'd be a bit concerned about evacuation.

✓ I'd be a bit concerned about evacuation procedures.

The sentence is understandable but vague; adding 'procedures' clarifies the concern. This isn't a pronoun error per se but clarifies noun usage.

× Producer produced during amateurs and emergencies or?

✓ I would also be worried about how evacuation would be handled during power outages or emergencies.

Original is unintelligible. Rewritten to express probable meaning: concerns about evacuation during power outages or emergencies. Use conditional/modal 'would' and clear nouns 'power outages' and 'emergencies'.