Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and organize ideas: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (e.g., 'urban area' vs 'suburban' and 'too much far' → 'too far').

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my house. I live in a suburban area, and most of the nearby buildings are low-rise houses and small apartment blocks, which are quite far from my home.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, use precise vocabulary, and reduce fillers. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific example and reason using linking words. Replace informal words like 'photaholic' with 'I love photography' and remove filler 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love photography, and I often take pictures of interesting buildings. For example, when I visited Dubai I photographed the Burj Khalifa because its design and height are striking and make great photos.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one clear reason and a specific detail. Correct grammar (e.g., 'visit the Burj Khalifa' not 'visit to the Dubai'). Avoid vague phrases like 'watch on my phone'—say 'seen photos/videos online'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because I have seen impressive photos and videos of it online. If I go there, I would take photos from the observation deck and admire the skyline views.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer, state the reason clearly, and avoid repetition. Use correct expressions for fear (e.g., 'I am afraid of heights') and provide a contrasting detail if necessary using linking words like 'however'.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. However, I might visit and stay one night with friends to enjoy the views if I felt comfortable.

× No, there is no tall building near my house because I live in the urban area and also the buildings are literally too much far from my house and also there are so much flats but that's so far from my house.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my house because I live in a suburban area; the buildings and flats are quite far from my house.

Multiple errors: 'there is no tall building' should match plural 'tall buildings' because later 'flats' is plural and general location implies plural; use 'are' not 'is' (there be issue + subject-verb agreement). 'Urban area' contradicted by 'far' — likely 'suburban area' fits; 'literally too much far' is incorrect: use 'quite far' or 'very far' (incorrect use of quantifier/adverb and word order). 'so much flats' is incorrect quantifier for count nouns; use 'many flats' or rephrase. Suggestions: ensure 'there is/there are' agrees with noun number, use appropriate prepositions and adverbs ('far from'), and use 'many' for plural count nouns.

× Yes, I am a photaholic person and also I would like to take a pictures of the tall buildings which is very beautiful like uh whenever I go to Dubai I can see uh Burj Khalifa which is a tall building like uh. So that's why I would like to take pictures.

✓ Yes, I am a photography enthusiast and I like taking pictures of tall buildings. Whenever I go to Dubai, I can see the Burj Khalifa, which is a very tall and beautiful building, so I like to photograph it.

Errors: 'photaholic' is informal/nonstandard—use 'photography enthusiast' or 'photophile' (word choice). 'I would like to take a pictures' mixes modal + plural noun and article—should be 'I like taking pictures' (use gerund after like; remove unnecessary article). 'which is very beautiful' refers to 'tall buildings' (plural) but construction unclear; use 'which is a very tall and beautiful building' when referring to Burj Khalifa. Use definite article 'the Burj Khalifa'. Suggestions: use gerunds after verbs like 'like', ensure articles match proper nouns, and keep verb-number agreement.

× Yes, I would like to visit to the Dubai like Burj Khalifa which is a beautiful building that I know from the people and also watch on my phone and I mostly go whenever I go to the Burj Khalifa then I took pictures and as well as I can enjoy the nature beauty of the other buildings too.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. I know about it from other people and from videos on my phone. Whenever I go to the Burj Khalifa, I take pictures and enjoy the beauty of the surrounding buildings.

Errors: 'visit to the Dubai' — remove 'to' and do not use 'the' with Dubai (proper noun). 'know from the people and also watch on my phone' — use 'know about it from people' and 'from videos on my phone' (preposition choice). Tense inconsistency: 'I mostly go whenever I go ... then I took pictures' mixes present and past; keep simple present for habitual actions. 'nature beauty' is incorrect collocation — use 'natural beauty' or 'beauty'. Suggestions: correct prepositions with verbs (visit + object, know about, watch on/from), keep consistent tense for habits, and use natural collocations.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a lots of fear. But when I I have a chance in the future that in future so I can go with my friends to stay up there for one night to explore the nature and as well as the other beautiful sceneries.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a lot of fear. But if I have the chance in the future, I might go with my friends to stay there for one night to enjoy the scenery.

Errors: 'a lots of fear' — incorrect article and quantifier; use 'a lot of fear' or better 'I'm very afraid'/'I have many fears' depending on meaning. Repetition 'when I I have a chance in the future that in future' is redundant and ungrammatical; use conditional 'If I have the chance' or 'If I get the opportunity'. 'stay up there' is acceptable but 'stay there' is clearer. 'explore the nature' — use 'enjoy the natural scenery' or 'explore nature' (article/word choice). 'other beautiful sceneries' — 'scenery' is uncountable; use 'other beautiful sights' or 'beautiful scenery'. Suggestions: fix articles and quantifiers, remove redundancy, use correct uncountable nouns and conditionals for hypothetical future.