Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
No, there are no tall buildings in my hall because my home is near the countryside and all the home, all the house near my home are very small, not tall.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to take photo of the building because I've found to keep that moment and when I come back home, I can, uh, see the pictures when I come back home and when I go to travels, I will take many beautiful photos, uh, for the building.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes, I very enjoy to visit many buildings and I prefer to the I prefer to visit the top building more, uh, more than uh, low rise buildings because when I go to the top buildings, when I go to the top, I can visit the cities.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy to live in a tall buildings because I think, uh, living a tall building, I can enjoy the paranormal view of the cities and I can uh, stay alone and I can didn't interact by my neighborhood.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并直接回应问题,避免重复与语法错误。可用一到两句说清位置和原因,并补充一条具体细节(例如周围是农田或低层住宅)。注意冠词和复数形式(house → houses,in my hall → near my home)。
Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. Most houses around me are small, one- or two-storey cottages surrounded by fields.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要结构清晰:先给出主句,然后用一到两条具体原因或习惯来支持。避免重复(eg. "when I come back home" 出现多次)并用连接词(because, so, when)使句子连贯。注意动词形式和名词复数(photo → photos, travel → travelling/trips)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because it helps me remember places. For example, when I travel I often take photos of historic façades and modern skyscrapers so I can look back at them later.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更明确地提名想参观的建筑或类型,并解释原因。避免重复短语(I prefer… more)和语法错误(enjoy to visit → enjoy visiting)。使用连接词(because, so)并给出具体例子(例如观景台、教堂、博物馆)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit a famous skyscraper like the Shanghai Tower because I enjoy going to observation decks. From the top you get a panoramic view of the city which helps you understand its layout and architecture.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要纠正语法和用词错误,并更具体说明原因。请使用自然表达(enjoy living in, panoramic view 而非 paranormal, live alone rather than stay alone),并说明优缺点以显示思考深度。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers a panoramic view of the city. It also feels more private, since high-rise flats usually have fewer interactions with neighbours, though they can be more expensive and less convenient for outdoor space.
× No, there are no tall buildings in my hall because my home is near the countryside and all the home, all the house near my home are very small, not tall.
✓ No, there are no tall buildings near my home because my home is in the countryside and all the houses near my home are very small, not tall.
错误类型:可数名词单复数及短语搭配错误。问题出在 'home' 和 'house' 的使用不当以及介词搭配。应使用 'near my home'(靠近我家)而非 'in my hall';表示多栋房子应使用复数 'houses';'in the countryside' 更自然地表示位于乡下。建议:注意可数名词单复数形式,确认固定搭配(in the countryside, near my home)。
× Yes, I like to take photo of the building because I've found to keep that moment and when I come back home, I can, uh, see the pictures when I come back home and when I go to travels, I will take many beautiful photos, uh, for the building.
✓ Yes, I like to take photos of buildings because I find it keeps that moment, and when I come back home I can see the pictures. When I travel, I will take many beautiful photos of buildings.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式和其他动词形式使用不当。原句中 'take photo' 应为复数 'take photos' 或 'take a photo';'I've found to keep that moment' 结构错误,应为 'I find it keeps that moment' 或 'I found that it keeps the moment';'go to travels' 应改为 'travel' 或 'go travelling';'for the building' 应为 'of buildings'。建议:注意固定搭配(take photos, find it + 从句/形式),动词时态与不定式/动名词的正确用法。
× Yes, I very enjoy to visit many buildings and I prefer to the I prefer to visit the top building more, uh, more than uh, low rise buildings because when I go to the top buildings, when I go to the top, I can visit the cities.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy visiting many buildings and I prefer to visit tall buildings more than low-rise buildings because when I go to the top of a tall building, I can see the city.
错误类型:介词及动词搭配错误。问题包括 'very enjoy to visit'(应为 'really enjoy visiting',enjoy 后接动名词)、多余或错误的 'to the I prefer to'、'top building' 应为 'tall building' 或 'the top of a tall building','visit the cities' 表达不当,应为 'see the city' 或 'see the cities' 根据语境。建议:动词 enjoy 后用动名词,注意介词短语 'go to the top of...',用词更准确(tall vs top)。
× Yes, I enjoy to live in a tall buildings because I think, uh, living a tall building, I can enjoy the paranormal view of the cities and I can uh, stay alone and I can didn't interact by my neighborhood.
✓ Yes, I enjoy living in a tall building because I think living in a tall building I can enjoy the panoramic view of the city, I can live alone and I don't have to interact with my neighbours.
错误类型:单复数及其他结构错误。原句 'a tall buildings' 单复数混用,应为 'a tall building' 或 'tall buildings';'enjoy to live' 用法错误,enjoy 后接动名词 'enjoy living';'paranormal view' 用词错误,应为 'panoramic view'(全景视野);'I can didn't interact by my neighborhood' 时态与介词错误,应为 'I don't have to interact with my neighbours' 或 'I don't need to interact with my neighbours'。建议:注意可数名词单复数一致、enjoy 后接动名词、使用正确词汇(panoramic)及正确的否定形式和介词(interact with)。