Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and simple correct sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence about whether there are tall buildings, then give one or two specific supporting details (location, purpose). Avoid filler sounds and word repetition. Pay attention to basic grammar: singular/plural, articles, and verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes. There are a few tall buildings near my home, such as a shopping mall called Winkham Plaza. It is quite large and houses many shops and a supermarket, so it is a busy place for locals.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize ideas with linking phrases. Begin with a clear statement about whether you take photos, then explain why using concise reasons and one example. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words like "usually" excessively.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I go out with friends. I like to record memories, especially of interesting stone buildings, because their architecture makes me happy and reminds me of that day.

Gợi ý: Be specific about which building you want to visit and why. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect your reasons. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid vague phrases like "many tall building."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest skyscraper in our city because it looks very elegant and modern. I think visiting it would give me a sense of luxury and a great view of the city.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, balanced answer (yes or no or maybe) and then provide two concise reasons, one positive and one negative, using linking words (however, but). Fix grammar (conditionals, articles) and avoid unclear phrases like "install meeting" or "hell of."

Ví dụ: I am unsure whether I would like to live in a tall building. On the one hand, it would offer beautiful views and a pleasant atmosphere; however, I worry about safety issues such as fires or emergency evacuations.

× 'Yes, how many stone building near my home is usually a uh supermarket is priced go supermarket or Winkham Plaza. Yes it's usually tone and very big to sell many thing many.'

✓ 'Yes. There are several stone buildings near my home, usually a supermarket such as Go Supermarket or Winkham Plaza. They are usually tall and very big, selling many things.'

'Errors: singular/plural issues and sentence structure. Reason: "building" should be plural "buildings" to agree with "how many" and "several"; "is usually a supermarket" is incorrect use of there be and noun phrases; "priced go supermarket" is unintelligible and likely a naming/misordering error; "tone" should be "tall"; "many thing many" should be "many things". Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable items, use a clear subject and verb (There are ...), place modifiers close to nouns, and proofread for word choice.'

× 'Yes, I usually take local building because when I go out with my friend, I usually like to take photo, record memory with my friend and usually take this stone building make me happy and people.'

✓ 'Yes, I usually take photos of local buildings because when I go out with my friends, I like to take photos to record memories with them; these stone buildings make me and other people happy.'

'Errors: subject-verb agreement and pluralization (photos, buildings, friends), pronoun use (them instead of my friend repeated), sentence structure. Reason: countable nouns need plural forms when talking generally (photos, buildings, friends); "take photo" should be "take photos" or "take a photo"; "make me happy and people" needs clearer phrasing: "make me and other people happy." Suggestion: ensure noun number matches meaning, vary sentence structure to avoid repetition, and use correct pronouns.'

× 'Yes, I feel love to visit many tall building because it's look like it's fancy and wonderful. If I try to uh, understand this, it's make me have a luxury feeling.'

✓ 'Yes, I would love to visit many tall buildings because they look fancy and wonderful. If I try to understand them, they make me feel a sense of luxury.'

'Errors: present tense and subject-verb agreement. Reason: "feel love to visit" is incorrect; use "would love to visit" for desire. "building" should be plural "buildings"; "it's look like" should be "they look" to match plural subject; "it's make me have" should be "they make me feel". Suggestion: use correct verb forms for desires (would like/would love), ensure verb agrees with subject number, and use natural collocations like "feel a sense of luxury." '},{