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Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Of course, there are many tall buildings near my home. As you know, I live in the city center, so there are some tall buildings such as the Oriental Pro TV tower and the Mall tower.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I love taking photos and I think taking photos of buildings is a remember of the place where I go.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

Of course I do. I like to visit the hotel in Beijing. It's a old kind of buildings which symbolize the old day in Beijing.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

No, I don't because I want to leave a place, a big place. So I think tall building is too small for me.

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Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但有一些小问题:1) 提高准确性(例如检查专有名词拼写/搭配),2) 用一两句补充更具体的信息并使用连接词让表达更连贯。建议在第二句用连接词说明原因或举例位置、数量等细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city centre. For example, there is the Oriental Pro TV Tower and the Mall Tower, both within a ten-minute walk, and several office skyscrapers line the main avenue.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点但语言有错误与不够具体:1) 注意语法(如时态、名词形式:'a remember' 应为 'a reminder' 或 'a way to remember'),2) 提供具体例子或频率使内容更丰富,并用连接词衔接理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often photograph buildings when I travel because architectural details help me remember a place. For instance, I took photos of traditional courtyards and modern facades last weekend to compare styles.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答含义大致明确,但存在语法和表达问题:1) 注意冠词和单复数('a old' → 'an old';'buildings' 应与前文一致),2) 用更具体的细节说明为什么想去(历史、建筑风格、位置等),并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit an old hotel in Beijing because it reflects traditional architecture and history. For example, the hotel has classic wooden beams and courtyards that symbolize Beijing's past, so I want to see those features up close.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答明确但表达混乱与重复:1) 改正词语选择('leave a place' 应为 'live in a spacious place'),2) 用连接词给出具体原因(如空间、阳台、噪音),3) 控制句子数量不超过五句并更有条理。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer a spacious home with a garden. In a tall apartment I would miss outdoor space and privacy, so a low-rise house suits me better.

Ngữ pháp

There be issue

× Of course, there are many tall buildings near my home.

Of course, there are many tall buildings near my home.

无更改。句子使用 there are 描述存在多个高层建筑,主谓一致且语法正确。

There be issue

× As you know, I live in the city center, so there are some tall buildings such as the Oriental Pro TV tower and the Mall tower.

As you know, I live in the city center, so there are some tall buildings such as the Oriental Pro TV Tower and the Mall Tower.

主要是专有名词中单词首字母应大写(Tower),这不属于列出的语法类型,但保持一致性。句子中的 there are 用法正确,描述存在性无误。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I do. I love taking photos and I think taking photos of buildings is a remember of the place where I go.

Yes, I do. I love taking photos and I think taking photos of buildings is a reminder of the places I visit.

原句中使用 remember(动词)作为名词是不正确的,应使用名词 reminder(提醒、纪念物)。此外,'the place where I go' 在语义上更自然为复数 'the places I visit'。这些错误属于动词/名词形式和句子结构调整,按要求属于“Verb + -ing form”类别中关于动名词和名词形式的相关问题。改为 reminder 表示“能让我想起去过的地方”。建议:区分动词和名词形式(remember vs. reminder),并使用更自然的固定搭配(places I visit / the places I go to)。

There be issue

× Of course I do. I like to visit the hotel in Beijing. It's a old kind of buildings which symbolize the old day in Beijing.

Of course I do. I would like to visit a hotel in Beijing. It's an old kind of building that symbolizes the old days in Beijing.

存在多处错误:1) 'I like to visit' 可保留,但在表达愿望时更常用 'I would like to visit'(不是必需,视语境)。该句主要语法问题按清单应归为 'There be issue' 并非完全匹配,但实际错误涉及冠词、单复数和关系代词使用,应对应以下几点: - 冠词错误:'the hotel' 改为 'a hotel'(泛指某类酒店); - 冠词与元音音素:'a old' 应为 'an old'; - 单复数一致:'kind of buildings' 应为 'kind of building'(指一种建筑类型时用单数); - 关系代词与从句:使用 'that' 或 'which' 均可,但 'that symbolizes the old days' 更自然; - 词语搭配:'old day' 应为复数 'old days' 或 'the old days' 指过去时代。 建议:注意冠词 a/an 的使用(根据发音),名词单复数一致,以及常用搭配 'the old days'。

Present tense issue

× No, I don't because I want to leave a place, a big place. So I think tall building is too small for me.

No, I don't, because I want to live in a big place. So I think tall buildings are too small for me.

原句主要错误有: - 'I want to leave a place' 用词错误,应为 'I want to live in a place'(live 表示居住,而 leave 表示离开); - 冠词和数的一致性:'a big place' 可以保留,但后句 'So I think tall building is too small for me' 中 'tall building' 应使用复数 'tall buildings' 或加定冠词 'the tall building',且动词需与主语一致,故改为 'tall buildings are'。 这些问题属于“Present tense issue”与“Singular and plural issue/Subject-verb agreement”的混合,但按任务要求仅按给定类型报告,故列为“Present tense issue”。建议:区分 live 和 leave;注意名词单复数以及主谓一致(buildings → are)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
TallIn height; Demanding
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