Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct inaccuracies. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct the phrasing about views (use 'doesn't allow' instead of 'allows') and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes — there are several tall buildings near my home because I live close to the city centre. For example, a new high-rise is being constructed opposite my house. I don't really like the skyline since it blocks views of the trees and distant mountains.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give one or two concise, well-linked reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I don't usually take such pictures' not 'I don't used to') and use more natural vocabulary like 'landscapes' instead of 'sceneries'.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. Instead, I prefer taking landscape photos, such as mountains or birds in trees, because I enjoy natural scenery more than urban architecture.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific reason linked with a connective. Correct grammar and word choice ('Empire State Building', 'crowded', 'on my to‑do list'). Avoid short fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I would like to visit the Empire State Building because it is an iconic landmark. I visited New York once but didn't go inside because it was too crowded, so I have added it to my travel to‑do list.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then provide a specific reason with a linking word. Improve fluency by removing fillers ('um', 'uh') and use correct phrasing ('a one- or two‑storey house').

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't. Because I'm worried about earthquakes, I would feel anxious living in a tall building. For that reason, I prefer a one- or two‑storey house where I would feel safer.

× in front of my home they are constructing a tall building.

✓ In front of my home they are constructing a tall building.

No change in wording needed; sentence uses present continuous correctly to describe an ongoing action. Suggestion: keep subject and verb order for clarity: 'They are constructing a tall building in front of my home.' (Note: This entry is included because the original had acceptable tense but could be reordered for naturalness.)

× I don't enjoy much that view because it allows the exposure to trees and mountains and sunsets.

✓ I don't enjoy that view much because it blocks the view of trees, mountains, and sunsets.

The adverb placement 'enjoy much that view' is unnatural; 'enjoy that view much' or 'don't enjoy that view much' is correct. Also 'allows the exposure to' is incorrect and unclear; use 'blocks the view of' or 'doesn't allow me to see'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'enjoy that view' and 'blocks the view of'.

× I would like to take pictures about sceneries and mountains and maybe some birds that are on trees and that's the reason why I don't used to take those pictures.

✓ I would like to take pictures of scenery and mountains and maybe some birds in the trees, and that's why I don't usually take pictures of buildings.

Use 'pictures of' not 'pictures about'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun; use singular. 'Birds that are on trees' should be 'birds in the trees'. 'Don't used to' is incorrect: use 'don't usually' to express habit. Also clarify object 'those pictures' to 'pictures of buildings'.

× I've been once in New York City and I didn't visit it because it was really crowd.

✓ I have been to New York City once, and I didn't visit it because it was really crowded.

Use 'have been to' for visiting a place and place 'once' after auxiliary. 'Crowd' is a noun; the adjective is 'crowded'. Also keep consistent present perfect 'have been' with 'once' placement. Suggestion: 'I have been to New York City once, and I didn't visit it because it was really crowded.'

× So I just put that in my wish To Do List.

✓ So I just put it on my wish-to-do list.

Word order and capitalization are incorrect. Use pronoun 'it' to refer to visiting the building. Preposition 'on' is correct for lists. 'wish To Do List' should be 'wish-to-do list' or 'wish list'. Suggestion: use 'wish list' or 'to-do list' depending on meaning.

× if I'm living in a tall building, I would be scared all the time.

✓ If I lived in a tall building, I would be scared all the time.

This conditional expresses a hypothetical situation. Use the past simple 'lived' in the if-clause with 'would' in the main clause (second conditional). Using 'I'm living' suggests a real ongoing situation, which is inconsistent. Suggestion: use 'If I lived...' for unreal present situations.

× That's the reason why I prefer to live in a home of one or two, umm, pieces.

✓ That's the reason why I prefer to live in a home with one or two rooms.

'A home of one or two pieces' is incorrect; 'pieces' is not used for rooms. Use 'with one or two rooms' or 'a one- or two-bedroom home'. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns for house parts: 'rooms' or 'bedrooms'.