Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct noun forms and collocations (e.g. "at a junction", "a tall tower", "the tallest building in Korea"), and avoid unclear words like "rotted" and "overwhelmed." Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live at a busy junction, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a very tall tower opposite my house which is the tallest building in Korea, and its lights are visible at night.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and clear place names. Start with a direct sentence, then give a specific reason and one example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately and avoid repetition (e.g. "various" twice). Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Photographing buildings is one of my hobbies because it helps me relax, and I often go to Yoydo where there are many different styles of architecture, such as modern glass towers and old brick buildings.

Gợi ý: Be accurate with facts and place names (Burj Khalifa is in Dubai, UAE). Avoid repeating phrases. Give a clear reason and one specific detail about what you'd do there. Use linking words like "because" or "and" to connect ideas and keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. If I get the chance, I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from the observation deck. Also, I would enjoy shopping in the luxury stores there since I am a big fan of shopping.

Gợi ý: Be fluent and avoid hesitations like "umm" or "uh." Start with a clear topic sentence, give a concise reason and one specific preference. Correct phrasing: "I live in a tall building on the 33rd floor" or "my building has 33 floors." Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I currently live in a tall building that has 33 floors, and I like the views and quiet atmosphere, so I would prefer to live in a building with over 50 floors if I had the chance.

× Yes, I live in junction so there are a lot of tall buildings nearby my house.

✓ Yes, I live at a junction, so there are a lot of tall buildings near my house.

Use of prepositions: 'in junction' is incorrect; use 'at a junction' or 'in a junction area'. Also 'nearby my house' is incorrect word order; use 'near my house' or 'nearby my house' is uncommon. Suggestion: say 'I live at a junction' and 'near my house'.

× So in front of my house there is a rotted tower and the tower is the tallest building in the Korea so I always overwhelmed.

✓ So in front of my house there is a tall tower, and it is the tallest building in Korea, so I am always overwhelmed.

Errors: 'rotted' describes decay and is unlikely for a tower; use 'tall' or 'old' depending on meaning. Article use: 'the Korea' is incorrect; use 'Korea' without 'the'. Tense/verb: 'I always overwhelmed' lacks correct copula; use 'I am always overwhelmed'. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective (tall/old) and use correct verb 'am overwhelmed'.

× Yes I do because one of my hobbies is taking a photo of buildings so I usually went to the yoyo because at the yoydo I can take more various buildings because in the place there are various types of building so it takes my mind off daily stress.

✓ Yes, I do because one of my hobbies is taking photos of buildings, so I usually go to the Yoyo because there I can photograph many different buildings; being there takes my mind off daily stress.

Multiple tense and word choice issues: 'taking a photo' is fine but plural 'photos' sounds natural for a hobby. 'I usually went' is past tense but context requires present habitual 'I usually go'. Place name inconsistent 'yoyo'/'yoydo'; use consistent proper noun 'Yoyo'. 'More various buildings' is incorrect collocation; use 'many different buildings' or 'a variety of buildings'. 'In the place there are various types of building' is awkward; simplify to 'there are various types of buildings'. Use gerund phrase 'being there' or 'it' to refer to the activity that 'takes my mind off daily stress'.

× Yes, if I get the chance, I'd like to visit Burj Khalifa in Saudi because the building is the tallest in the world.

✓ Yes, if I get the chance, I'd like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because the building is the tallest in the world.

Geographical/name correction and article: 'Burj Khalifa' is in Dubai, United Arab Emirates, not 'Saudi'. Use the definite article 'the Burj Khalifa' when referring to the specific building. Ensure accuracy of location. No tense change required.

× Tallest building in the world.

✓ It is the tallest building in the world.

Fragment: the original is a sentence fragment missing subject and verb. Add subject and verb to make a complete sentence: 'It is the tallest building in the world.'

× Also in the Burj Khalifa there are a lot of high friend shopping store because I'm a big fan of shopping so.

✓ Also, in the Burj Khalifa there are many high-end shopping stores, and I'm a big fan of shopping.

Word choice: 'high friend shopping store' is incorrect; use 'high-end shopping stores' or 'luxury shops'. Quantifier: 'a lot of' is informal; 'many' fits better with countable 'stores'. Sentence ending 'so.' is incomplete; join ideas with 'and'.

× Yes, I do actually. Umm, these days I'm living in a tall building because my house is 33 floors, so I think it is enough to talk.

✓ Yes, I do, actually. Umm, these days I'm living in a tall building; my apartment is on the 33rd floor, so I think that is tall enough for me.

Clarity and word choice: 'my house is 33 floors' is incorrect; use 'my apartment is on the 33rd floor' or 'my building has 33 floors'. 'I think it is enough to talk' is unclear; likely meant 'tall enough for me'. Keep present progressive 'I'm living' but 'these days' with present progressive is acceptable.

× But if I have the chance I would like to live in uh, more than 50 stories.

✓ But if I have the chance, I would like to live in a building with more than 50 stories.

Use of 'more than 50 stories' needs noun 'stories' attached to 'building' or say 'in a building with more than 50 stories' or 'in a building over 50 storeys tall'. Also add comma after introductory clause. 'I would like to' correctly expresses conditional desire; keep it. Replace filler 'uh' when speaking in formal answer.