Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer shorter and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid unclear phrases like "makes me sit there."

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. My area is mainly rural with bungalows and low houses, so if I want to see high buildings I visit the nearby city. I enjoy looking at them when I go there.

Gợi ý: Give a clear main sentence and then specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, when, because) and fix tense/word choice errors. Replace vague phrases with precise ones and keep to three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit towns. I do this because photos help me remember interesting designs and details, and later I can look at them on my phone. For example, I recently photographed an old church with beautiful carvings.

Gợi ý: Clarify which building you mean and explain why you want to visit it. Avoid unclear or mixed phrases; use one or two well-structured sentences with specific reasons and correct grammar. If you mean a religious site, name it clearly and give concrete motives.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Baba Torah center in the city. I am interested because I have heard about its historical importance and beautiful architecture, and I hope to join a guided tour when I have time and money.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear position (yes or no) and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, however). Fix vocabulary and word choice (e.g., 'searing', 'rousy' are incorrect). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to live in a tall building. Although high-rises can be attractive and spacious, I prefer small houses because they are quieter and feel more comfortable for me, and I do not like heights.

× No they are not in my geographical setting and location it's majorly of bungalows and small buildings cause my setting is more of a rural area but when I want to explore high buildings I go to the main city town where they are presence that makes me sit there.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings in my area; it is mainly bungalows and small houses because my setting is rural. When I want to explore tall buildings, I go to the main city where they are located.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: run-on sentences, missing punctuation, incorrect word order ('they are presence'), and informal connectors ('cause'). Break into shorter sentences, use correct existential 'there are' and proper nouns ('main city' rather than 'main city town'), and replace informal 'cause' with 'because'. Use 'located' instead of 'presence'. Suggestion: separate ideas into clear sentences, use 'there are' for existence, and choose precise verbs like 'located'.

× Yes I do. Whenever I go to the city or towns to look at houses, I take photos to keep the memories alive. So when is I tend to look at it and I'm no opportunity to move out to those cities. I glance from my phone and it's a good sightseeing for me.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I go to the city or towns to look at houses, I take photos to keep the memories alive. When I want to look at them but have no opportunity to travel to those cities, I look at the photos on my phone; it is good sightseeing for me.

Pronoun reference errors and awkward expressions: 'when is I tend to look at it' and 'I'm no opportunity' are ungrammatical. Replace with 'When I want to look at them but have no opportunity to travel...' Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'houses'. Use 'look at the photos on my phone' for clarity. Also fix punctuation and sentence flow. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use correct auxiliary verbs ('have no opportunity').

× Yes, there is reading the Bible and hearing of the Torah of Baba. I have so much envisioned myself in going society It's and I would love to do that, but one time and resources permit. I would really love to explore the tour of Baba.

✓ Yes. I would like to visit the place where Baba reads the Bible and teaches the Torah. I have often imagined myself going there, and I would love to do that when time and resources permit. I would really love to join Baba's tour.

Original contains many structural and lexical errors: unclear phrasing ('there is reading the Bible and hearing of the Torah of Baba'), incorrect word order ('I have so much envisioned myself in going society It's'), and wrong connectors ('one time and resources permit'). Clarify the intended meaning: express desire to visit a place where religious teaching happens, use 'when time and resources permit', and tidy repeated ideas. Suggestion: rewrite unclear phrases into direct statements, use standard time clause 'when time and resources permit', and choose precise verbs like 'visit' and 'join'.

× I love the beauty it gives in the space it creates, but I still prefer my small houses.

✓ I love the beauty and the space it provides, but I still prefer my small house.

Mismatch and word choice errors: 'the beauty it gives in the space it creates' is awkward; use 'the beauty and the space it provides'. Also 'my small houses' conflicts with singular possessive preference; context suggests singular 'my small house'. Ensure adjective-noun agreement and natural collocations ('provides' rather than 'gives in'). Suggestion: use natural collocations and consistent number for nouns.

× It's more concise and searing for me, especially as my rural area mostly in the cities.

✓ It feels cozier and safer to me, especially since I grew up in a rural area and do not like cities much.

Wrong adjective choices: 'concise' and 'searing' are incorrect in this context. Likely intended 'cozier' and 'safer'. Also 'my rural area mostly in the cities' is contradictory and ungrammatical. Clarify by explaining rural preference versus cities. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match meaning and ensure logical consistency between clauses.

× It's too rousy and noisy and I don't really like heights so I prefer my small building.

✓ Cities are too raucous and noisy, and I don't really like heights, so I prefer my small house.

Spelling and word choice errors: 'rousy' is not the correct word; 'raucous' or 'rowdy' fits. Also 'my small building' is unnatural; use 'my small house'. Add 'cities are' to clarify the subject. Suggestion: use correct spelling and natural collocations, and ensure subject clarity.