Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ более естественным и прямым: начните с короткого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-две конкретные детали. Избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «there aren't any buildings» вместо «they aren't any buildings») и сокращённых длинных фраз. Также используйте связку для перехода к будущему плану.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small residential area with mostly low houses, but in the future I hope to move into a high-rise apartment because I like city views and convenient transport links.

Gợi ý: Уменьшите запинки и сделайте ответ более чётким: начните с простой темы, затем уточните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because) и избегайте лишних слов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. I keep many pictures on my phone because I enjoy capturing unusual shapes and architectural details; for example, I recently photographed an old factory with interesting brick patterns.

Gợi ý: Уберите заполнители («uh», «umm») и сформулируйте предложение плавно: назовите здание, объясните почему, приведите одну конкретную причину или ожидание. Исправьте порядок слов и артикли (the Museum of the Future in Dubai).

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit the Museum of the Future in Dubai. I want to see it because its distinctive shape and futuristic design look fascinating, and I hope to learn about new technologies and innovations there.

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ связным и грамматически корректным: начните с прямого ответа, затем назовите место и причину. Избегайте обрывистых фраз и добавьте конкретику о том, что именно вам нравится (вид, удобства).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, preferably an apartment in Manhattan, New York. I dream of that because I love the city view, easy access to parks and cultural activities, and the vibrant urban lifestyle.

× No they aren't any buildings.

✓ No, there aren't any buildings.

Comma needed after 'No' and correct contraction placement: 'aren't' follows subject; the original lacks comma causing slight flow issue. Use 'there aren't any buildings' for natural negation.

× I live in a small area but I believe that in future I will live in a high rise apartment.

✓ I live in a small area, but I believe that in the future I will live in a high-rise apartment.

Add comma before 'but' to join clauses; use article 'the' with 'future' in this context; 'high-rise' is hyphenated as a compound adjective; maintain future simple 'will live' is correct.

× I like taking photos of buildings in my, uh, phone galleries have a lot of, uh, pictures that I made by myself and uh, the buildings associated with something unusual for me.

✓ I like taking photos of buildings. My phone gallery has a lot of pictures that I took myself, and the buildings are associated with something unusual for me.

Break run-on sentence into two. Use 'phone gallery' (singular) and present simple 'has'. Use 'took' (past simple) for photos taken; 'made' is unnatural here. Use 'are associated with' to form correct verb phrase and adjust word order for clarity.

× I hope that in the future, uh, I will visit uh, Museum of future in the Dubai.

✓ I hope that in the future I will visit the Museum of the Future in Dubai.

Use definite article 'the' before named institutions 'the Museum of the Future' and remove unnecessary article before 'Dubai'. Also capitalize proper name and remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× Because of the shape of this museum very unusual and I think it is interesting museum.

✓ Because the shape of this museum is very unusual, and I think it is an interesting museum.

Add verb 'is' to complete the clause. Place 'very' before 'unusual' is correct; include article 'an' before 'interesting museum'. Use comma before coordinating conjunction.

× My dream is live in the USA, uh, in New York, umm, in the Manhattan apartment, uh, it is my dream because this apartment need to be a large park uh, and the view of this apartment is very.

✓ My dream is to live in the USA, in New York, in a Manhattan apartment. It is my dream because this apartment needs to be near a large park, and the view from this apartment would be great.

Use infinitive 'to live' after 'My dream is'. Use 'a Manhattan apartment' (not 'the Manhattan apartment') and split into two sentences. Use 'needs' for third person singular. 'Near a large park' is correct prepositional phrase. 'The view... is very' is incomplete; change to 'would be great' to express desirability.