Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้กระชับและถูกไวยากรณ์ มากกว่าการใช้ประโยคยาวที่มีข้อผิดพลาด ให้ใช้ประโยคหัวเรื่องแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดที่เชื่อมด้วยคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น "because" และปรับคำนามให้ถูกต้อง (buildings, houses, three-storey) รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ชัดเจนเช่น "skylight" หากหมายถึงเส้นขอบฟ้าให้ใช้คำว่า "skyline"

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. The nearby houses are mostly townhouses and only about three storeys high, so the skyline is low.

Gợi ý: ตอบให้ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับช่วงเวลาปัจจุบันหรืออดีต อย่าผสมกันโดยไม่ชัดเจน และใช้คำนามเป็นพหูพจน์หรือเติม -ing ให้ถูกต้อง (photos, photographing). อธิบายให้เฉพาะเจาะจงว่าชอบถ่ายอะไร เช่น รายละเอียดสถาปัตยกรรม รูปทรง และใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น "because" หรือ "so" เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล

Ví dụ: I used to enjoy taking photos of buildings when I was in grade 10, about three years ago, because I want to become an architect. I especially like photographing architectural details and interesting shapes.

Gợi ý: แก้ชื่อสถานที่และคำที่ใช้ให้ถูกต้อง (เช่น Baiyoke Tower) และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัด เช่น ระบุเหตุผลด้วยคำเชื่อม "because" อธิบายสั้นๆ ว่าทำไมถึงอยากไป เช่น วิวสูง หรือความมีชื่อเสียง นอกจากนี้ปรับไวยากรณ์และคำเชื่อม (famous with Thais and foreigners)

Ví dụ: I would like to visit the Baiyoke Tower in Bangkok because it is very famous with both Thai people and foreigners, and it offers spectacular views as the tallest building in Thailand.

Gợi ý: หลีกเลี่ยงการซ้ำคำซ้อน เช่น "I want to live" ซ้ำหลายครั้งและปรับไวยากรณ์ (two-storey, skyline, scenery) ให้ถูกต้อง ใช้ประโยคหัวข้อแล้วให้รายละเอียดสนับสนุนด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น "because" หรือ "so" และอธิบายให้สั้นชัดเจนว่าทำไมต้องการ เช่น เพื่อชมวิวหรือความสะดวกสบาย

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would like to live in a tall building in Bangkok because my current home is only a two-storey house and living higher up would give me great skyline views and scenery I’ve never seen before.

× No, there are not any tall building near my home because I live in a rural area.

✓ No, there are not any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area.

The noun 'building' should be plural 'buildings' after 'any' when referring to multiple items. Use plural nouns with 'any' in negative sentences about countable items. Suggestion: Use 'buildings' and keep the negative structure: 'there are not any tall buildings'.

× The house nearby are mostly townhouse and they are only about 3 story high, so the skylight is quite low.

✓ The houses nearby are mostly townhouses and they are only about three stories high, so the skyline is quite low.

Multiple issues: 'house' should be plural 'houses' to agree with verb 'are'; 'townhouse' should be plural 'townhouses'; the number and noun should be plural 'three stories'; 'skylight' is incorrect for the city view, use 'skyline'. Suggestion: Ensure nouns agree in number with verbs and use correct vocabulary ('skyline').

× I like taking photo of building about 3 years ago when I was in grade 10.

✓ I liked taking photos of buildings about three years ago when I was in grade 10.

Tense mismatch: the time phrase 'about 3 years ago' requires past tense 'liked'. Also 'photo' and 'building' need plural forms 'photos' and 'buildings' when speaking generally. Use past tense for past time references. Suggestion: Use past simple 'liked' and plural nouns 'photos of buildings'.

× I want to become an architect so I enjoy photographing architectural detail and entering shape.

✓ I want to become an architect, so I enjoy photographing architectural details and interesting shapes.

'detail' should be plural 'details' when speaking generally. 'Entering shape' is incorrect; likely intended 'interesting shapes'. Maintain present simple 'enjoy' for current habitual actions. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and choose correct adjectives ('interesting shapes').

× I want to visit Bayok Tao by your building in Bangkok because by your building is very famous from Thai people and also foreign.

✓ I want to visit Baiyoke Tower in your city in Bangkok because your building is very famous with Thai people and foreigners.

'By your building' is incorrect preposition and phrase for location; use 'in your city' or 'in your area'. The building name spelled 'Baiyoke Tower'. 'Famous from Thai people and also foreign' is incorrect: use 'famous with Thai people and foreigners'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for location and 'famous with/among' plus 'foreigners'.

× It's the highest building in Thailand.

✓ It's the tallest building in Thailand.

While 'highest' is not ungrammatical, 'tallest' is the more natural superlative for building height. Use 'tallest' when comparing height. Suggestion: Use 'tallest' for clarity when describing building height.

× If I have a chance, I want to live in a tall building in Bangkok because my home is only two-story building and I want to live in a tall building because I want to see a skyline and a beautiful scenery that I never see.

✓ If I have a chance, I would like to live in a tall building in Bangkok because my home is only a two-story building and I want to live in a tall building to see the skyline and beautiful scenery that I have never seen.

Use conditional modal 'would like' for hypothetical desire. 'Two-story building' needs an article 'a'. 'See a skyline' should be 'see the skyline' or just 'the skyline'; 'a beautiful scenery' is incorrect—'scenery' is uncountable so no 'a'. Past perfect/present perfect 'have never seen' is required to describe experience up to now. Suggestion: Use 'would like' for polite hypothetical wishes, include articles for singular countable nouns, avoid 'a' with uncountable 'scenery', and use present perfect 'have never seen'.