Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article and plural/singular forms, and add one short supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a very tall building near my home; it is the Sky Tower in Auckland. It’s a well-known landmark and I can see it from many parts of the city.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and a logical sequence. Begin with a present-habit statement if you still do it, or a past experience if you don’t. Use linking words (for example, because/so) and give one specific detail about the photo or moment.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings. For example, when I first arrived in Auckland I thought the Sky Tower looked amazing, so my husband and I took a picture together in front of it.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and correct vocabulary (fear of heights, not fellow height). Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you would like to visit a building and add a reason with a specific detail using linking words.

Ví dụ: I wouldn’t like to visit the Sky Tower because I have a fear of heights. However, I would like to visit the museum in the Domain because it has interesting historical exhibits.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, concise statement and correct grammar (articles, word order). Use one linking phrase to explain your reason and give a specific preference (e.g. ground floor). Avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building because I have a serious fear of heights. If I had to, I would prefer a low floor or the ground floor for safety and comfort.

× Yes, there are the tallest building in Auckland it called Sky Tower.

✓ Yes, there is the tallest building in Auckland; it is called the Sky Tower.

Errors: incorrect plural verb 'are' with singular noun, missing verb for second clause, and missing definite article before building name. Type: article errors and subject-verb agreement. Correct by using singular 'is' for 'building', add 'it is' for the second clause, and include 'the' before 'Sky Tower' as a proper name reference. Also use a semicolon or period to separate clauses.

× Yes, I took a picture when I came here first.

✓ Yes, I took a picture when I first came here.

Word order is awkward. Place the adverb 'first' before the verb phrase 'came here' to form a natural past-time expression. Tense (past) is correct.

× When I saw the first time, it was wonderful, I think.

✓ When I saw it for the first time, it was wonderful, I think.

Missing object 'it' and incorrect word order 'saw the first time'. Use the phrase 'for the first time' and include the object 'it'. The tense remains past for the experience; 'I think' can remain present to indicate current opinion.

× So I took a picture with my husband.

✓ So I took a picture with my husband.

This sentence is grammatically correct as a past action. No change required.

× I have fellow height so I don't want to visit Sky Tower, but I'd like to visit some kind of museum located in Domain Park.

✓ I am afraid of heights, so I don't want to visit the Sky Tower, but I'd like to visit a museum located in the Domain.

Replace incorrect phrase 'I have fellow height' with the idiomatic 'I am afraid of heights'. Add 'the' before Sky Tower as a well-known landmark. Use 'a museum' rather than 'some kind of museum' for natural phrasing, and 'the Domain' is the common name for the park. These are pronoun/phrasing and article choices.

× I don't want to live in tall building because I have a fear of heights seriously.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I have a serious fear of heights.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'tall building' and awkward adverb placement 'seriously'. Use adjective 'serious' before 'fear of heights' for natural expression. Tense and meaning remain present.

× And even if I live in tall building but I don't I don't want to high floor I prefer.

✓ And even if I lived in a tall building, I wouldn't want to live on a high floor; I prefer a lower floor.

Sentence has multiple structural problems: missing articles, incorrect tense and modal usage, repetition 'I don't I don't', and missing preposition 'on' before 'a high floor'. Use the conditional 'if I lived' with 'wouldn't' to express hypothetical preference, add 'a' before 'tall building' and 'high floor', and clarify preference for 'a lower floor'.