Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise, and include a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words for coherence and avoid redundancy (e.g., "honestly speaking" is unnecessary). Also correct countable noun forms and capitalization.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small town. Most houses are only two or three storeys, and there are many open spaces and parks nearby, so the area feels green and spacious.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar: use correct verb forms, countable nouns, and clearer linking words. State a direct topic sentence (yes/no) then explain why with a specific example. Avoid confusing phrases like "don't take two photos" and "until" used incorrectly.

Ví dụ: Not usually. I prefer photographing natural scenes like parks and plants because they feel more peaceful. However, I will take photos of buildings if they are unique landmarks, such as an old cathedral with interesting architecture.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear desire to visit; tighten grammar and phrasing, and keep within five sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb forms (e.g., "go up to watch"). Add one specific detail to make it more vivid.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris with my husband. It’s an iconic landmark famous for its evening lights and spectacular views. I’d like to go up to watch the sunset and perhaps the sunrise for a memorable view of the city.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using appropriate linking words (e.g., "because" and "also"). Replace "until" with "also," correct articles and plural forms, and avoid overlong sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because of the amazing views of the skyline, busy streets and city lights. I would also appreciate the security and modern facilities, such as a gym and swimming pool, which make life more convenient.

× 'Honestly speaking, there are no tall building around my home because I live in a small town, most houses are two or three Storey and there are lots of open spaces and parks nearby, so the area feels quite green and spacious.'

✓ 'Honestly speaking, there are no tall buildings around my home because I live in a small town. Most houses are two or three storeys and there are lots of open spaces and parks nearby, so the area feels quite green and spacious.'

'building' should be plural 'buildings' to agree with 'there are no'. 'Storey' is a count noun and in this context should be plural 'storeys' (or 'stories' in American English). Also the original run-on sentence is clearer if split into two sentences. Suggestion: make nouns number agree and separate clauses for clarity.'

× 'I don't take two photos of any building because I love to capturing the natural scenes, plants and peoples until the building are unique infrastructure and beautiful landmark.'

✓ 'I don't take many photos of buildings because I love capturing natural scenes and plants, unless the building is a unique piece of architecture or a beautiful landmark.'

'to capturing' is incorrect after 'love' because 'love' is followed by the base verb or gerund; use 'love capturing'. 'two photos of any building' is awkward; use 'many photos of buildings' or 'two photos of any building' changed to 'many photos of buildings'. 'peoples' is incorrect when referring to people; use 'people'. 'until' is wrong in this context; 'unless' expresses the intended exception. 'building are' needs subject-verb agreement: singular 'building is' or plural 'buildings are'. Also 'unique infrastructure' is unnatural; 'unique piece of architecture' is better.'

× 'I don't take two photos of any building because I love to capturing the natural scenes, plants and peoples until the building are unique infrastructure and beautiful landmark.'

✓ 'I don't take many photos of buildings because I love capturing natural scenes and plants, unless the building is a unique piece of architecture or a beautiful landmark.'

'building are' is incorrect; the verb must agree with the noun number. Use 'building is' for singular or 'buildings are' for plural. In the corrected sentence 'building is' matches the singular noun after 'unless the'.'

× 'I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris one day with my husband. It's a truly iconic structure, famous for its stunning lights and breathtaking views of the city. I would like to go up for watch the sunset and sunrise.'

✓ 'I would love to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris one day with my husband. It's a truly iconic structure, famous for its stunning lights and breathtaking views of the city. I would like to go up to watch the sunset and sunrise.'

'go up for watch' is ungrammatical. Use the infinitive 'to watch' after 'go up' to express purpose: 'go up to watch'. This keeps the sentence in an appropriate future-desire context.'

× 'Yes, of course I love to live in tall building because of amazing view of striking sky, bustling streets and city lights from the top roof. Until the best security system and modern facilities are available in the building like swimming and gym for the comfortable and convenient lifestyle.'

✓ 'Yes, of course I would love to live in a tall building because of the amazing views of the striking sky, bustling streets, and city lights from the rooftop. Also, the best security systems and modern facilities, such as a swimming pool and a gym, are available in such buildings for a comfortable and convenient lifestyle.'

'tall building' should be 'a tall building' (singular with article) or 'tall buildings' (plural). 'amazing view' should be plural 'amazing views' because multiple scenes are described. 'top roof' is redundant; use 'rooftop'. 'Until' is incorrect; use 'Also' or 'Furthermore' to add information. 'security system' and 'modern facilities' should match plural/singular consistently: 'security systems' and 'facilities' or keep singular with 'the'. 'swimming and gym' is incorrect; use 'a swimming pool and a gym'. Ensure articles ('a', 'the') are used appropriately.