Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğrudan ve düzenli olmalı. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan yanıt verin, ardından kısa bir bağlaç ile detay verin. Örneğin konum ve mesafe hakkında net ifadeler kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ví dụ: Not really. I live in a residential area of Istanbul, so the tall buildings are mostly concentrated in the city centre, which is quite far from my home.

Gợi ý: Cümleleri daha kısa ve akıcı kurun, dolgu kelimelerini (uh, um) azaltın ve neden fotoğraf çektiğinizi açıkça belirtin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak sebep-sonuç ilişkisi verin ve somut örnek ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings, especially when I travel abroad, because architectural details remind me of the place. For example, when I visited a historic district I photographed the facades to remember the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Cevap net ve mantıklı ancak tekrarlar ve dolgu sesleri azaltılmalı. Neden gitmek istediğinizi daha spesifik nedenlerle destekleyin (mimari özellik, gözlem güvertesi deneyimi vb.) ve kısa bir bağlama yer verin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai, and I want to see its observation deck because the views and the building's modern architecture are impressive; I would also take photos from the top.

Gợi ý: Daha doğal ve doğru dil kullanımı gerekli. Konu cümlesiyle doğrudan cevap verin, ardından iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle nedenlerinizi açıklayın. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (e.g. "at the top", "I can always").

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy panoramic views. Living near the top would let me look over the city every morning and take photos of the skyline.

× No, there are a few tall buildings far away from my home in Istanbul where I live and have a lot of tall buildings in the center.

✓ No, there are only a few tall buildings near my home; most tall buildings are far from where I live in Istanbul, and there are many tall buildings in the city center.

The original sentence mixes locations and plurality confusingly. Use 'a few' or 'only a few' to indicate small number and keep plural 'buildings'. Clarify clauses with punctuation and conjunctions to show contrast: 'near my home' versus 'in the city center'. Use 'many' for large numbers in the center. Suggestions: split into two clauses and use commas or a semicolon to separate ideas.

× Yes, I am very interested in capturing of the view uh, especially if I have overseas, I would like to take a photo of uh, the buildings or the towers.

✓ Yes, I am very interested in capturing views; when I travel overseas, I like to take photos of buildings and towers.

Remove the incorrect preposition 'of' after 'capturing' and use plural 'views' or 'the view' correctly. 'If I have overseas' is ungrammatical; use 'when I travel overseas'. Use 'take photos' (plural) for general habit. Suggestions: use 'capturing views' or 'capturing the view' and 'when I travel overseas' for clarity.

× It helps me uh, feel more individuals than I have been on my daily life because uh, when I look at the towers or and I.

✓ It helps me feel more like an individual than I do in my daily life because when I look at towers I feel different and inspired.

Original is fragmented and unclear: 'feel more individuals' is incorrect; use 'feel more like an individual'. 'Than I have been on my daily life' is incorrect tense and preposition; use 'than I do in my daily life'. The clause 'when I look at the towers or and I' is incomplete. Suggestions: complete the thought, use proper comparatives and a clear concluding clause.

× Yes, I would like to visit Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai before but I have heard many good uh, views, uh, about the city and the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest buildings in the world.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa. I have never been to Dubai, but I have heard many good things about the city and the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world.

Use the article 'the' with specific buildings: 'the Burj Khalifa'. 'Heard many good views' is incorrect; use 'heard many good things' or 'heard many positive reviews'. 'It is the tallest buildings' is wrong number agreement; use singular 'building'. Suggestions: use correct articles and ensure singular/plural agreement with 'tallest building'.

× So I would like to see the view from the top and take some photos.

✓ So I would like to see the view from the top and take some photos.

Sentence is correct; no preposition error. Keep as is. Explanation: 'from the top' is correct prepositional phrase, and 'take some photos' is appropriate. No change needed.

× Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. It's my dream because I think that if I live at top of the buildings, I always can watch the landscape and the capture of the view.

✓ Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. It's my dream because I think that if I live at the top of a building, I could always watch the landscape and enjoy the view.

Use article 'the top' with 'at the top' and singular 'a building' for a general statement. 'I always can' has unusual word order; use 'I could always' or 'I would always be able to'. 'The capture of the view' is awkward; use 'enjoy the view' or 'capture the view with photos'. Suggestions: correct article use, modal placement, and choose natural verbs like 'enjoy' or 'take photos'.

× That's why I always move to tall buildings in east.

✓ That's why I would always move to tall buildings in the east.

Use 'would' or 'want to' for hypothetical/future preference: 'I would always move' or 'I always want to move'. 'In east' is missing the article 'the' and needs 'the east' or a direction like 'the eastern part of the city'. Suggestions: add 'the' and use correct modal or verb form for preference.