Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
No we aren't. We are not tall building near my home because I lived in the countryside so no tall building surround my house.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because it improve. It can help me improve my photography skills.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
I like to visit building IS10001 in Taipei and Google Museum in Taipei and also I like to department store in Shenzhou.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I want to live in a tall building because I think tall building is safety. For example my friend always lived in a tall building and there have a sense of freedom airs.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且语法正确,先用一句话回答问题,然后简要说明原因并加上连接词,使内容连贯。例如注意主谓一致、时态和冠词的使用。可以把句子控制在不超过五句。
Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. I live in the countryside, so most buildings nearby are low houses and farms. Because the area is rural, there isn't much demand for high-rise construction.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并用连词衔接,表达原因时用完整的句子并给出具体例子或情境,避免单词错误(如 improve 的用法)。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because it helps me improve my photography skills. For example, I practise capturing different angles and lighting when I visit old churches or modern skyscrapers, which gradually improves my composition and timing.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答应先明确一个或两个想访问的建筑,并说明原因和具体细节(比如风格、展览或购物体验),避免列举太多无关联的地点。注意冠词和介词用法以及地名的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Google Museum in Taipei because I'm interested in modern technology exhibits. I would also enjoy visiting the historic IS10001 building to see its architecture and learn about its history.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更准确表达原因并提供具体细节或例子,同时注意语法(如 'tall buildings are safe'、'my friend has always lived')和用词('sense of freedom')。用连接词使观点和例子衔接自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I feel it can be safer and more convenient. For example, my friend has always lived in a high-rise and enjoys better security and stunning views, which give a real sense of freedom.
× No we aren't.
✓ No, we aren't.
原句中缺少逗号和语气停顿。"No, we aren't." 是对否定问句的简短回答,需在 "No" 后加逗号以表示停顿和更自然的口语回答。
× We are not tall building near my home because I lived in the countryside so no tall building surround my house.
✓ There are no tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside, so no tall buildings surround my house.
原句存在多处问题:1) 主语和谓语结构不正确,必须使用 'There are' 表示存在(对应 Grammar Problem Type 3)。2) 'tall building' 应为复数 'tall buildings'(复数问题)。3) 时态应与现在情况一致,使用 'I live' 而不是 'I lived'(现在时问题)。4) 动词 'surround' 要与复数主语一致且用现在时 'surround'。建议使用 'There are no tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside, so no tall buildings surround my house.' 更符合语法并表达清楚。
× Yes I do because it improve.
✓ Yes, I do because it improves my skills.
原句缺少主语和时态一致:动词 'improve' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'improves' 来与隐含主语 'it' 或更明确的 'it' 指代保持一致(第三人称单数问题)。同时最好明确宾语(my skills)。并在 'Yes,' 后加逗号。
× It can help me improve my photography skills.
✓ It can help me improve my photography skills.
该句语法正确,无需修改。只是提醒:'can' 后接动词原形 'help' 和 'improve',句子结构正确,表达清晰。
× I like to visit building IS10001 in Taipei and Google Museum in Taipei and also I like to department store in Shenzhou.
✓ I would like to visit Building IS10001 and the Google Museum in Taipei, and I would also like to visit the department store in Shenzhou.
原句存在冠词和名词使用问题:1) 专有名词前 'Building IS10001' 可首字母大写并保留 'Building';2) 'Google Museum' 前需要定冠词 'the' 表示特定的博物馆(冠词错误);3) 'department store' 前需加动词 'visit' 并加定冠词 'the' 或不定冠词视具体语境;4) 使用礼貌表达 'I would like to' 比简单现在时更自然。建议按改正句使用。
× Yes I do, I want to live in a tall building because I think tall building is safety.
✓ Yes, I do. I want to live in a tall building because I think tall buildings are safe.
原句问题:1) 'tall building' 应为复数或与不定冠词一致,句中谈一般情况用复数 'tall buildings'(复数问题);2) 'is safety' 用词错误,应使用形容词 'safe' 来描述安全性(形容词与名词混用错误);3) 主谓一致:'tall buildings are safe'。另外在口语中分为两句更自然。
× For example my friend always lived in a tall building and there have a sense of freedom airs.
✓ For example, my friend has always lived in a tall building and has a sense of freedom.
原句问题:1) 时态与习惯应使用现在完成或现在完成进行 'has always lived'(现在完成时更合适,原句 'lived' 表示过去);2) 'there have' 用法错误,应该用主语 'my friend' 和动词 'has'(主谓一致);3) 'a sense of freedom airs' 是错误搭配,应为 'a sense of freedom'。改为 'my friend has always lived in a tall building and has a sense of freedom.' 更通顺。