Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, give 1–2 specific supporting details, and avoid unclear words. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "because" or "and"). Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in a part of the city called the Bengals, and there are many skyscrapers and modern high-rise buildings nearby. I especially like their modern glass facades and interesting shapes, because they make the skyline look very dynamic.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, concise statement and give specific examples of what you photograph and why. Use linking words such as "for example" or "because". Avoid filler words (uh, um) and mixed metaphors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings. For example, when I visit the city centre I take pictures of high-rise towers from different angles to capture their scale and unique details, because I enjoy studying architectural styles and light on façades.

Gợi ý: Answer directly naming the building and explain briefly why you want to visit using clear grammar. Use one or two specific reasons and linkers like "because" or "so". Avoid vague expressions and repetitions.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because I have seen it in films and photos and I am fascinated by its height and modern design. I want to see the observation deck and experience the city's skyline from the top.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in one sentence and support it with 1–2 specific reasons. Use linkers like "because" and avoid hesitations. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer a one-story house with a garden. I value outdoor space for relaxing and spending time with my family during holidays and free time.

× Uh yes I live in the Bengals.

✓ Yes, I live in Bengal.

Article and noun form: 'the Bengals' is incorrect for a place name. Use 'Bengal' (no definite article) or 'the Bengal region' if intended. Also 'Uh' is filler and removed. Grammar problem type ID:22:Article errors

× There are signs, skyscrapers and high rise modern building.

✓ There are signs, skyscrapers and high-rise modern buildings.

Singular/plural and compound adjective errors: 'building' should be plural to agree with 'skyscrapers' and 'There are'. 'High rise' as an adjective should be hyphenated 'high-rise' and 'modern' should come before 'buildings'. Grammar problem type ID:1:Singular and plural issue

× So I do love the architectures and the buildings.

✓ So I really love the architecture and the buildings.

Count noun and article use: 'architecture' is an uncountable noun when referring to style in general, so 'the architectures' is incorrect. Use 'architecture' or 'architectural styles'. 'Do' for emphasis is acceptable but 'really' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Trying all these Harris building.

✓ I enjoy visiting all these high-rise buildings.

Fragment and word choice: The original is a fragment missing a subject and verb. 'Harris' is likely a mis-heard word; 'high-rise' fits context. Use 'I enjoy visiting' to form a complete sentence. Grammar problem type ID:26:Sentence structure errors

× Yes, uh, I like to gather the portraits and landscapes that I mean like the different perspectives and different size or the bishops or the bedroom, especially sometime when I, when I visited to the city center, I love to take the pictures or high rise.

✓ Yes, I like to take portraits and landscape photos; I mean, I enjoy capturing different perspectives and sizes, whether it's buildings or interiors. Especially when I visit the city center, I love taking pictures of high-rises.

Multiple issues: 'gather' is unnatural—use 'take' for photos. 'Landscapes' and 'portraits' are types of photos, so 'take' is preferred. 'Different size' needs plural 'sizes'. 'Bishops' and 'bedroom' are incorrect words here—likely meant 'buildings' or 'businesses' and 'bedrooms'; clarified to 'buildings or interiors'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'visited to' should be 'visit'. Verb forms adjusted for consistency. Grammar problem type ID:14:Incorrect use of quantifiers

× especially sometime when I, when I visited to the city center, I love to take the pictures or high rise.

✓ Especially sometimes when I visit the city center, I love to take pictures of high-rises.

Tense and preposition: Use simple present 'visit' to match habitual action 'I love to take pictures'. Remove incorrect preposition 'to' after 'visited'. Use plural 'high-rises'. Grammar problem type ID:5:Past tense issue

× I yeah, exactly. Uh, the in the divide there is a uh, I mean, like this is uh, a big weird, but when I watch their movies and I see that building, I really into visitor.

✓ Yes, exactly. In the city there is a building I find strange, but when I see it in movies I really want to visit it.

Disfluent and incorrect word forms: The original contains fillers and wrong words ('divide', 'big weird', 'into visitor'). Rephrase to a clear sentence: 'In the city there is a building I find strange' and 'I really want to visit it'. Use 'want to visit' for intention. Grammar problem type ID:26:Sentence structure errors

× I really wanted to visit her to Dubai and I want to visit.

✓ I really want to visit Dubai.

Pronoun and preposition errors: 'her to Dubai' is incorrect and unnecessary. Use 'visit Dubai'. Keep tense consistent: use present 'want' for desire. Grammar problem type ID:11:Incorrect use of prepositions

× Always come to living in umm strawberry.

✓ I have always considered living in a high-rise building.

Meaning and word choice: 'strawberry' is likely wrong; context asks about living in tall buildings, so clarify intent. Original lacks subject and proper verb form. Use 'I have always considered' to express ongoing thought. Grammar problem type ID:12:Incorrect use of pronouns

× Honestly, I don't, I don't want to live in is umm, I love to live in the umm one story building, uh, with a garden and I went to play with uh, my job O on the garden in my holidays and my free time.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to live in a tall building. I would prefer to live in a one-story house with a garden where I can relax and play with my dog during holidays and free time.

Multiple errors: Double negatives and filler words removed. 'One story' should be 'one-story house' with hyphen. 'I went to play with my job O' is unintelligible—likely 'play with my dog'. Use 'would prefer' to express preference. Tense and word order corrected for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26:Sentence structure errors