Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and grammar mistakes (e.g. plural/singular agreement), and limit to supporting details that are specific and relevant. Use linking words for coherence (for example, "for instance" or "as a result").

Ví dụ: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For instance, a recently built 20-story residential block is a ten-minute walk away, and it has changed the skyline and provided more housing options.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear reason, but correct word choice and concise phrasing would improve naturalness. Replace inaccurate words ("factors", "Skyscopers") and avoid adding extra words like "also" awkwardly. Use one or two specific examples to support the main idea.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings because their architectural details and styles interest me. For example, I focus on the ornate facades of historic buildings and the clean lines of modern skyscrapers.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer and avoid colloquial or unclear phrases. Correct repetition and use precise names and descriptions (e.g. "Louvre Museum"). Keep to two or three supporting details and use linking words like "because" or "for example".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Louvre Museum in Paris because it combines historic architecture with world-famous art collections. For example, I want to see the Mona Lisa and the ancient sculptures on display.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fix grammar and word choice errors (e.g. "more privacy", "pro privacy" incorrect, "working up to" unclear). Provide one or two specific supporting reasons and link them logically. Keep sentences concise and avoid unfinished fragments.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building because it usually offers better views and more privacy than low-rise homes. For example, a high-floor apartment could overlook the city skyline or distant mountains and often has better security and amenities.

× Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home, many more than apartment complexes and office towers.

✓ Yes, there are a few tall buildings near my home, many more than apartment complexes and office towers.

No grammatical change needed for this sentence; it correctly uses plural nouns with 'are' and compares counts. (Kept for completeness.)

× For example, a recently built 20 story residential blocks is just, uh, 10 minutes with walkway, which has changed the skyline and provided more housing options.

✓ For example, a recently built 20-story residential block is just, uh, a 10-minute walk away, which has changed the skyline and provided more housing options.

'Blocks' (plural) conflicted with the singular verb 'is'; change to singular 'block'. Use hyphenated compound adjectives: '20-story' and '10-minute'. 'Walkway' is a noun that does not fit here; use 'walk' or 'walk away'. These fixes resolve singular/plural agreement and improve phrase correctness.

× Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find architectural details and different styles fascinating.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find architectural details and different styles fascinating.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present tense and '-ing' usage are appropriate, so no change is necessary.

× For example, I enjoy capturing the ornate factors of historical structures and the clean lines of modern Skyscopers also.

✓ For example, I enjoy capturing the ornate features of historical structures and the clean lines of modern skyscrapers.

'Factors' is the wrong noun; 'features' or 'details' is correct. 'Skyscopers' is a misspelling and wrong word; use 'skyscrapers'. Remove redundant 'also' at the end. This corrects word choice and adjective-noun collocation.

× Y'all see it's a building.

✓ You can see the building.

'Y'all' is colloquial and inappropriate in this context; use 'you' or 'you can'. 'See it's a building' is awkward; 'you can see the building' is natural and clear. This corrects pronoun choice and phrasing.

× I would like to visit the Lower Museum in Paris.

✓ I would like to visit the Louvre Museum in Paris.

'Lower Museum' is a mispronunciation/transcription error of 'Louvre Museum'. Correcting the proper noun is necessary for meaning and accuracy.

× I'm fascinated by its combination of historic, historical architecture and world famous arts, art collections such as the Mona Lisa and ancient sculptures.

✓ I'm fascinated by its combination of historic architecture and world-famous art collections, such as the Mona Lisa and ancient sculptures.

'Historic' and 'historical' together are redundant; choose 'historic' or 'historical' depending on meaning. 'World famous arts, art collections' is repetitive; use 'world-famous art collections'. Hyphenate 'world-famous'. These changes fix adjective use and remove repetition.

× Visiting the lower.

✓ Visiting the Louvre would be wonderful.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and clear subject. Provide a complete sentence that matches the context and completes the thought. This resolves the sentence structure error (fragment).

× Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building because it often offers better views and more pro privacy than low rise homes.

✓ Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building because it often offers better views and more privacy than low-rise homes.

'Pro privacy' is incorrect; use 'privacy'. 'Low rise' should be hyphenated as 'low-rise' when used as an adjective. These fixes address incorrect phrase and adjective formation.

× For example, working up to a city skyline or distant mountains would be very advanced and high rise apartments usually have enhanced.

✓ For example, waking up to a city skyline or distant mountains would be wonderful, and high-rise apartments usually have enhanced security and facilities.

The original contains incorrect words ('working' instead of 'waking', 'very advanced' is inappropriate) and is a sentence fragment at the end. Replace with 'waking up' to express the intended idea, use 'wonderful' instead of 'very advanced', hyphenate 'high-rise', and complete the fragment by specifying what is enhanced (e.g., 'security and facilities'). This corrects word choice and completes the sentence.