Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and finish the thought. Use linking words to explain reasons and give one specific detail. Avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I choose to live outside the city because most buildings there are very high. For example, houses here are usually only three or four storeys, which I prefer because they feel quieter and more community-oriented.

Gợi ý: Correct word choice, grammar and article use; use linking words to connect ideas and give a specific example of what you photograph. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely photograph buildings. Instead, I prefer photographing nature, such as birds and wildflowers, because built environments feel too industrial to me. For instance, last weekend I spent an hour photographing butterflies in a nearby meadow.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons and correct vocabulary (e.g. exhibitions, cultures). Use linking words to organize points and avoid filler words like 'like'.

Ví dụ: I would love to visit the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York City, near Central Park. It appeals to me because it houses extensive art exhibitions from many cultures, so I could learn about global artistic traditions and see famous works in person.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence, correct collocations (e.g. 'barn-style', 'renovated'), and specific reasons with linking words. Remove fillers and repeated words.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building. I prefer a renovated, barn-style house because it would feel warmer and more spacious for raising children. For example, a small country home with a garden would let my family be close to nature and have outdoor space for kids to play.

× No, where I live there is no tall tall building.

✓ No, where I live there are no tall buildings.

The phrase 'there is' should match the plural noun 'tall buildings.' Use 'there are' for plural subjects. Also remove the duplicated 'tall' and make 'building' plural to agree with 'no.' Suggestion: use 'there are no + plural noun' for negative plural existence statements.

× I decide to not live in the city where the building are like too high.

✓ I decided not to live in a city where the buildings are too tall.

The original uses present-simple 'decide' though speaker refers to a past decision; 'decided' is appropriate. 'To not live' is awkward—use 'decided not to live.' 'The building are like too high' has several issues: subject-verb agreement ('building' -> 'buildings' and 'are'), wrong comparative word order ('too tall' instead of 'too high' for buildings), and filler 'like.' Suggestion: use past tense for past decisions, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid filler words like 'like.'

× I prefer to be in a town where the building don't exceed 3 to 4 floors.

✓ I prefer to live in a town where the buildings don't exceed three or four floors.

Subject-verb agreement: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'don't.' Also use 'live in' rather than 'be in' for residence, and write numbers consistently. '3 to 4' is better as 'three or four.' Suggestion: ensure plural nouns with plural verbs and choose appropriate verbs for meaning.

× I prefer that so I can have a better.

✓ I prefer that so I can have a better quality of life.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'a better' lacking a noun; it's an incomplete comparative. Provide the object of comparison, e.g. 'a better quality of life.' Suggestion: complete comparative expressions with the noun being compared.

× I never take pictures of buildings.

✓ I never take pictures of buildings.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple to express habitual action. No change needed.

× I prefer to take pictures of the natures, animals or even insects.

✓ I prefer to take pictures of nature, animals, or even insects.

'The natures' is incorrect; 'nature' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'the' in this context. Use commas to separate items in a list. Suggestion: use 'nature' without 'the' and format lists with commas.

× Sometimes I think that it give me the the feeling of industrial aspect that I don't really like when it's about buildings and infrastructure.

✓ Sometimes I think that it gives me the feeling of an industrial aspect, which I don't really like when it comes to buildings and infrastructure.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it give' should be 'it gives.' Remove duplicate 'the the.' Add article 'an' before 'industrial aspect.' Use 'which' or 'that' to connect clauses and 'when it comes to' is the natural phrase. Suggestion: check verb forms for third-person singular and eliminate repeated words.

× So I just take picture of the beauty of nature that you have made.

✓ So I just take pictures of the beauty of nature that exists around me.

'Take picture' should be plural 'take pictures.' The phrase 'that you have made' is odd unless addressing a creator; more natural is 'that exists around me' or 'that surrounds me.' Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' for habitual actions and choose appropriate relative clauses.

× The building I would love to visit is the Met Museum in New York City close to Central Park.

✓ The building I would love to visit is the Met Museum in New York City, near Central Park.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'close to' is acceptable; 'near Central Park' is more natural. Add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: prefer 'near' for location and use commas to separate location phrases.

× It's always been an interesting one because it has like a lot of artist exposition there and also it show you a lot of about different cultural worldwide, so it's interesting.

✓ It's always been interesting because it has many art exhibitions and also shows a lot about different cultures worldwide, so it's fascinating.

Several issues: remove filler 'like'; 'artist exposition' is incorrect—use 'art exhibitions.' Subject-verb agreement: 'it show' should be 'it shows.' 'A lot of about different cultural worldwide' is ungrammatical—use 'a lot about different cultures worldwide.' Replace the repeated 'interesting' with a stronger adjective to avoid repetition. Suggestion: avoid filler words, use correct collocations ('art exhibitions'), ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose concise vocabulary.

× Not at all.

✓ Not at all.

This short response is acceptable as an answer to the question 'Do you want to live in a tall building?' No change needed.

× My dream is to live in a barn like and renovated.

✓ My dream is to live in a renovated barn-like house.

Word order and form: 'barn like and renovated' is incorrect. Use the compound adjective 'barn-like' before the noun and place 'renovated' appropriately. Add 'house' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use hyphenated compound adjectives and include the noun they modify.

× I don't see the interest living in the in the tall building just probably to see like all around you.

✓ I don't see the point of living in a tall building just to see the view all around you.

'I don't see the interest' is non-native; use 'I don't see the point.' Remove duplicate 'in the.' 'Just probably to see like all around you' is awkward—'just to see the view all around you' is clearer. Avoid filler 'like' and unnecessary 'probably.' Suggestion: use natural idioms ('see the point') and simplify purpose clauses.

× But I prefer like a small and more like like warm and comfortable house where I can raise my kids and be close to nature.

✓ But I prefer a small, warm, and comfortable house where I can raise my kids and be close to nature.

Remove filler 'like' and duplicate 'like like.' Use commas to separate adjectives and maintain natural adjective order: size ('small') then qualities ('warm and comfortable'). Suggestion: avoid filler words, use commas between coordinate adjectives, and keep adjective order natural.