Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ неясный и содержит много ошибок грамматики и словоупотребления. Сформулируйте тему предложения прямо, избегайте лишних слов и исправьте лексические ошибки (например, "told you didn't care platform", "foods"). Дайте одно-два конкретных пояснения с использованием связующих слов (например, "because", "so").

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. For example, my area has mostly low houses, fields and trees, so it feels very open and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Ответ понятен, но содержит ошибки в словосочетаниях и порядке слов ("photograph interest in buildings", "because of the pictures help"). Сделайте тему ясной, используйте связку и конкретный пример, сократите фразы до 2–3 предложений и исправьте грамматику.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel. For example, I photograph historic churches because the pictures help me remember the trip and the architectural details.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит смысл, но много ошибок ("historical business buildings", "I'm playing a trip", "participate traditional buildings"). Формулируйте тему прямо, используйте связующие слова (например, "for example", "because") и приведите конкретный пример места, которое вы хотите посетить.

Ví dụ: I would like to visit historic temples and museums. For example, I'm planning a trip to Japan to see traditional buildings and contemporary architecture in Tokyo because I find the contrast between old and new fascinating.

Gợi ý: Ответ сильно неясен и содержит много бессмысленных фрагментов ("wouldn't tell buildings", "your premier air", "65 rises couldn't super"). Дайте чёткий топик-сентенс (Yes/No) и затем 1–2 конкретные причины с корректной лексикой и связкой (например, "because").

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I prefer the countryside. It is quieter and has more space, and I enjoy fresh air and a slower pace of life.

× I don't have any told you didn't care platform because I live in the countryside, there's a lot of nature around me, foods and trees, so the areas is mostly low houses and open spaces.

✓ I don't have any tall buildings near me because I live in the countryside; there's a lot of nature around me, such as fields and trees, so the area is mostly low houses and open spaces.

The original sentence contains multiple problems combined into a confused structure: incorrect word choice ('told you didn't care platform' is nonsensical), comma splices, plural/singular mismatch ('areas is'), and wrong vocabulary ('foods' instead of 'fields' or similar). Suggestion: simplify the sentence into clear clauses, use correct nouns ('tall buildings', 'fields'), fix subject-verb agreement ('area is'), and separate ideas with appropriate punctuation. Suggested practice: rewrite long sentences into shorter, clear clauses; check each noun for correct form; ensure verbs agree with their subjects.

× Sure, when I travel in the city, I always photograph interest in buildings, for example historic churches, because of the pictures help me remember the trip and the beautiful details of their architecture.

✓ Sure, when I travel in the city, I always photograph interesting buildings, for example historic churches, because the pictures help me remember the trip and the beautiful details of their architecture.

The phrase 'photograph interest in buildings' uses incorrect form; 'interesting' (present participle/adjective) should modify 'buildings'. Also 'because of the pictures help' is incorrect; use 'because the pictures help' or 'because the pictures help me...'. Suggestion: use adjectives formed from -ing to describe nouns ('interesting buildings') and drop unnecessary 'of' after 'because'. Practice: convert verbs to -ing adjectives when they describe nouns and check conjunctions introducing clauses.

× Oh, I really enjoy visiting historical business buildings, especially at temples and museums.

✓ Oh, I really enjoy visiting historical buildings, especially temples and museums.

'Historical business buildings' and 'especially at temples' are awkward: 'business' is inappropriate and 'at' is unnecessary before 'temples and museums'. Suggestion: use 'historical buildings' and omit 'at' when listing types of places visited. Practice: choose adjectives that match the noun's meaning and remove unnecessary prepositions in lists.

× And I'm playing a trip to Japan where I participate traditional buildings and contemporary architecture in Tokyo because I find the contrast between old and new architecture fascinating.

✓ I'm planning a trip to Japan where I hope to visit traditional buildings and contemporary architecture in Tokyo because I find the contrast between old and new architecture fascinating.

The original uses incorrect verbs: 'playing a trip' and 'participate traditional buildings' are wrong. The correct verbs are 'planning a trip' and 'visit traditional buildings'. Suggestion: use 'plan' for arranging a trip and 'visit' for going to buildings. Ensure verb phrases match intended meaning. Practice: list common collocations (plan a trip, visit a building) and replace incorrect verbs accordingly.

× No I wouldn't tell buildings.

✓ No, I wouldn't live in tall buildings.

'Tell' is the wrong verb and 'wouldn't' needs a complement; context asks about living in a tall building. Use 'live in tall buildings' for clarity. Also add a comma after 'No'. Practice: choose verbs that fit the context and verify pronoun/verb combinations.

× I usually in big cities and I prefer the countryside because it's quieter and has more space.

✓ I don't usually live in big cities; I prefer the countryside because it's quieter and has more space.

The original lacks the main verb in the first clause ('I usually in big cities'), causing a sentence without a verb. Add 'don't usually live' to express intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure every clause contains a verb and negative is placed correctly. Practice: identify missing verbs by checking if each clause can stand alone.

× I will enjoy rural life and your premier air.

✓ I would enjoy rural life and purer air.

'Your premier air' is incorrect vocabulary and phrasing. Likely intended 'purer air' and conditional 'would enjoy' fits with earlier 'I wouldn't live in tall buildings'. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives ('purer') and correct modal or conditional forms. Practice: review common adjective pairs (pure/purer) and use conditional modals consistently.

× So 65 rises couldn't super.

✓ So high-rise buildings wouldn't suit me.

This fragment is nonsensical: '65 rises couldn't super' should be 'high-rise buildings wouldn't suit me' to express preference. Suggestion: replace unclear words with correct terms and ensure subject and verb form a coherent clause. Practice: when unsure, rephrase simply: 'Tall buildings wouldn't suit me'.