Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
In a tall building, yes, I want.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏信息量和结构。建议用主题句直接回答后,补充1-2句具体细节(位置、数量或感受),并用连接词使表达连贯。例如说明这些建筑在什么方向、是否显眼或影响生活。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. They are mostly office towers along the main road about a ten-minute walk from me, and they make the skyline look quite modern.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答虽然肯定但仍不够详细。建议先给出直接回答,然后用1-2句说明拍摄原因、频率或喜欢拍摄哪类建筑,并使用连接词(because, so, when)让回答更自然具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I often take photos of historic buildings when I travel because I like their intricate details and unique facades.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答简单且没有说明想去的建筑是哪一座或原因。建议在肯定回答后补充建筑名称或类型,并说明想去的理由(例如设计、历史或个人兴趣),用连接词引出细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona because of its unusual architecture and the stories behind its design.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 句子语序不自然且缺少理由。建议先用自然的主题句直接回答(e.g. Yes, I would like to),然后用1-2句说明原因或条件(例如景观、设施或安全),并用because or however等连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views are great and many modern high-rises offer convenient amenities like gyms and security.
× In a tall building, yes, I want.
✓ Yes, I would like to.
该句在英语中语序和用法不自然,造成句子结构错误(对应类型26)。原句直译为“在高楼里,是的,我想要”,但回答意图是表达“我想住在高楼里”。正确且更礼貌的表达应使用情态动词或短语,如“I would like to”或“I want to live in a tall building”。建议:把地点短语放在句末或句中适当位置,使用完整动词短语。示例改写:"Yes, I would like to live in a tall building." 或更简洁的回答:"Yes, I would."