Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "around me are located").

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home. I live in a suburban area, so most houses nearby are townhouses or single-family homes, and I live in one of them.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: give a clear direct response, then one or two specific reasons linked logically. Reduce fillers and repeated words. Use linking words like "because" and "sometimes" correctly.

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer taking photos of people and memorable events because they are more meaningful to me. However, sometimes I photograph buildings to show my husband the style of house I would like to have in the future.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct statement, then give specific reasons using clear linking words. Fix grammar ("presentation representation" unclear) and use precise vocabulary like "example of" or "a masterpiece of".

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the Palace of Versailles in Paris. I want to see it because it is extremely beautiful and is a masterpiece of classical French architecture, which fascinates me.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, correct grammatical errors, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrasing with clear examples (e.g., noise, elevator problems).

Ví dụ: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building. Mainly because there are many neighbors which can mean more noise, and if the elevator breaks down it would be inconvenient to use the stairs on high floors.

× Not really, I live in a suburban area so mostly around me are located townhouses or single family houses and I live in one of them.

✓ Not really. I live in a suburban area, so there are mostly townhouses or single-family houses around me, and I live in one of them.

The original sentence has awkward word order and missing articles/hyphenation. 'Mostly around me are located townhouses' is unnatural; use 'there are mostly townhouses... around me' to follow English subject-verb-object order. 'Single family' should be hyphenated as 'single-family' when used as a compound adjective. Also split into two sentences or use commas to improve clarity. ID:26

× Not really. Do I like taking photos of the buildings? And the first reason is because it's umm, I I like having people on the photos or capturing some memorable events in my life.

✓ Not really. Do I like taking photos of buildings? The main reason is that I like having people in photos or capturing memorable events in my life.

Use 'in photos' not 'on the photos'—we say people are 'in' photographs. 'The first reason is because' is wordy and not ideal; 'The main reason is that' is clearer. Remove filler words and duplicate 'I'. Also plural 'buildings' without 'the' is more natural here. ID:12

× And uh, sometimes I can take photos of the buildings only just to show my husband what kind of building I would like to have in the future.

✓ Also, sometimes I take photos of buildings just to show my husband what kind of building I would like to have in the future.

Extraneous words 'can' and 'only just' create awkward meaning; 'take photos' is sufficient. Remove 'the' before 'buildings' unless referring to specific buildings. Start with 'Also' to link ideas. Keep verb tense simple present for habitual action. ID:26

× There is one building that I would like to visit in the future. That is Versailles, which is located in Paris.

✓ There is one building I would like to visit in the future: the Palace of Versailles, which is located near Paris.

'Versailles' commonly refers to the Palace of Versailles and is located in the town of Versailles, near Paris; specifying 'the Palace of Versailles' is more precise. Use a colon or rephrasing to link sentences; 'which is located in Paris' is slightly inaccurate geographically. ID:3

× And the reason I want to visit it is because it's, it's very beautiful.

✓ The reason I want to visit it is that it is very beautiful.

Avoid redundancy 'it's, it's' and the colloquial 'because' after 'reason'. Use 'is that' for formal clarity. Also expand contraction for clarity in test context. ID:13

× And that also the, uh, presentation representation of an ancient architecture, which fascinates me a lot.

✓ It is also a fine example of historic architecture, which fascinates me a lot.

Original phrase 'presentation representation of an ancient architecture' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'a fine example of historic architecture' or 'a representation of classical architecture'. 'Ancient' is less appropriate for Versailles; 'historic' fits better. Remove fillers and correct article use. ID:13

× I don't really want to live in a tall building, a high rise buildings are not for me.

✓ I don't really want to live in a tall building; high-rise buildings are not for me.

Mixes singular and plural incorrectly: 'a high rise buildings' is wrong. Either singular 'a high-rise building' or plural 'high-rise buildings'. Also 'high-rise' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity. ID:1

× So when you leave on a high floor, you usually have a lot of neighbors and it can be very inconvenient to use the stairs if the elevator is not working.

✓ When you live on a high floor, you usually have a lot of neighbors, and it can be very inconvenient to use the stairs if the elevator is not working.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect in this context; should be 'live'. 'Leave' changes meaning entirely. Add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. The rest is grammatical. ID:11