Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid redundancy and correct article/plural usage (e.g., 'two- or three-storey houses').

Ví dụ: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. Most houses here are simple, two- or three-storey houses, so the skyline is quite low.

Gợi ý: Avoid fillers and repetitive phrases. Begin with a direct answer, then use a linking word to give a specific example. Use natural verbs like 'prefer' correctly (prefer doing something) and reduce hesitation sounds.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. For example, when I visit historical sites such as the Red Fort in Delhi, I prefer taking photos to capture the details; however, I usually don't photograph ordinary modern buildings.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and be specific. Use correct names and concise phrasing, and add a brief reason why you want to visit. Avoid awkward phrases like 'it's about' and incorrect spelling of place names.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several I want to visit. For instance, I would love to explore the Red Fort in Delhi and Kangra Fort in Himachal Pradesh because I am interested in Indian history and traditional architecture, and I would enjoy going with friends.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, grammatical statement and support it with one specific reason. Avoid contradictory phrases and repeated 'however'. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I don't prefer' → 'I don't prefer living in').

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't prefer to live in a tall building. I prefer a small house because I value privacy and closer family relationships, and a house feels more homely than an apartment.

× No, in my locality there are no tall buildings available because I live in a rural area so people have a simple and two to three Storey homes.

✓ No, in my locality there are no tall buildings because I live in a rural area, so people have simple one- to three-storey homes.

Plural and number expressions were inconsistent: 'a simple and two to three Storey homes' mixes singular and plural and uses incorrect phrasing. Use parallel structure and consistent number expression: 'simple one- to three-storey homes.' Use hyphens for compound numbers and lowercase for 'storey.' Also remove redundant 'available.'

× So there is no any biggest building in my.

✓ So there is no very big building near my home.

Sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete: 'no any biggest building in my.' Use correct determiner and adjective order: 'no very big building' or 'no big buildings.' Also complete the location with 'near my home.' Avoid double negation 'no any.'

× When I go outside and go with my friends to explore historical buildings like uh, Red Fort in Delhi, then I prefer to take pictures.

✓ When I go out with my friends to explore historical buildings like the Red Fort in Delhi, I prefer to take pictures.

Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' for this context and avoid repeating 'go.' Include the definite article 'the' before 'Red Fort.' Remove unnecessary 'then.' Present simple 'prefer' is correct for habitual action; streamline sentence for clarity.

× However, when I see normal buildings, I never prefer to click pictures.

✓ However, when I see ordinary buildings, I do not prefer to take pictures.

'Never prefer to click pictures' is awkward and uses informal 'click' for photos. Use 'do not prefer to take pictures' and 'ordinary' instead of 'normal.' Use auxiliary 'do' to form negative in present simple.

× Of course, in my bucket list, there are two to three buildings I really want to visit and explore.

✓ Of course, on my bucket list there are two or three buildings I really want to visit and explore.

Use preposition 'on' with 'bucket list.' Use 'two or three' rather than 'two to three' in spoken list context. Remove unnecessary commas for smoother sentence.

× It's about Indian traditional and historical buildings like Red Fort in Delhi and the famous Kangada Kila in Himachal Pradesh.

✓ They are Indian traditional and historical buildings like the Red Fort in Delhi and the famous Kanggaru/Kangada Kila in Himachal Pradesh.

Subject 'It' is unclear for plural 'buildings' so use 'They are.' Also include 'the' before 'Red Fort.' Check correct name spelling for 'Kangada Kila' (provide corrected local name if known). Ensure adjective order 'Indian traditional and historical' is acceptable but 'traditional and historical Indian buildings' is smoother.

× I really like to visit with my friends.

✓ I would really like to visit them with my friends.

Verb 'like to visit' needs an object ('them' referring to the buildings). 'Would like' expresses desire more naturally. Place the object before the prepositional phrase.

× To be honest, I'm not prefer to live in tall buildings because I want to live in home, not a building.

✓ To be honest, I do not prefer to live in tall buildings because I want to live in a house, not in an apartment building.

'I'm not prefer' is incorrect; use 'I do not prefer.' 'Live in home' is ungrammatical; use 'live in a house.' Clarify 'building' vs 'house' and use articles correctly.

× However, it's only a work of art.

✓ However, they are only works of art.

Reference is unclear: likely referring to tall buildings in general. Use plural 'they are' and plural 'works of art' or rephrase: 'However, tall buildings are only works of art.' Ensure subject agrees with predicate.

× However, we made a strong relationships with our family members then we live happily in small.

✓ However, if we build strong relationships with our family members, we can live happily in a small house.

Original mixes tenses and has number agreement errors: 'made a strong relationships' incorrect; use 'build strong relationships' or 'have strong relationships.' 'Then we live happily in small' lacks article and noun: 'in a small house.' Use conditional 'if' to express the idea and modal 'can' for possibility.