Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more accurate and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'I think' when certain, and give a specific detail about location or number. Use correct names and grammar. Keep it to 1–2 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes. My neighborhood has many tall buildings, such as Landmark 81 and several modern office towers near my MTR station. They dominate the skyline and are easy landmarks when I give directions.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer: state frequency then give one clear specific example. Use correct prepositions and concise phrases. Avoid vague phrases like 'one of the school' and unnecessary repetition.

Ví dụ: Sometimes. Every summer I visit Landmark 81 with my classmates and take many photos of its exterior and the observation deck to capture the view.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear reason with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words briefly (because, since, for example) and avoid filler sounds. Specify what attracts you (views, restaurants, observation deck).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because it has a high observation deck and restaurants with panoramic city views, which I think would be breathtaking.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and support with two clear reasons using correct word forms (e.g., 'breathtaking view'). Use linking word 'because' and avoid repeating ideas. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would prefer to live in a penthouse because it offers more space and is usually more convenient, with excellent, breathtaking views of the city.

× Yes, I think there's a lot of buildings in Hong Kong city.

✓ Yes, I think there are a lot of buildings in Hong Kong.

The original uses 'there's' (there is), which is singular, with the plural noun 'a lot of buildings.' This is a subject-verb agreement error between 'there is' and a plural noun. Use 'there are' for plural subjects. Also simplified 'Hong Kong city' to the more natural 'Hong Kong.'

× Example like Landmark 81 and BE Tesco.

✓ For example, Landmark 81 and B.E. Tesco.

'Example like' is not a correct phrase; use 'For example' to introduce examples. 'BE Tesco' is likely a proper noun and may be written with periods or as 'B.E. Tesco' or simply 'Tesco.' Also no article is needed before these proper nouns. Use correct punctuation and capitalization.

× Yes, I sometimes take a photo of buildings.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings.

'a photo of buildings' is awkward because 'buildings' is plural; use the plural 'photos' to match. The present simple tense 'take' is correct for habitual actions, but number consistency needs fixing.

× Example every summer I go to Landmark at one of the school to visit and take a lot of photos in there.

✓ For example, every summer I go to Landmark with one of my classmates to visit and take a lot of photos there.

Multiple preposition and phrasing errors: 'Example' should be 'For example'; 'at one of the school' is incorrect — likely meant 'with one of my classmates' or 'with one of my school friends'; 'in there' is redundant when 'there' is sufficient. Use 'with' to indicate accompaniment, possessive 'my' for 'classmates,' and place adverb 'there' without 'in.'

× Yes, I would like to visit landmark 81 because in this place there are fur and very uh, breath talking sight.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 because there are beautiful and very, uh, breathtaking sights there.

Several errors: 'landmark 81' is a proper noun and should be capitalized; 'in this place there are' is wordy—use 'because there are' or 'because it has'; 'fur' is incorrect word choice (likely 'beautiful' or 'famous'); 'breath talking' should be 'breathtaking'; 'sight' should be plural 'sights' to match 'there are.' Also add 'there' at end for clarity. Adjust article usage and word forms.

× I prefer to live in penthouse because I think it's a very convenient, a large place and have a breath talking site.

✓ I would prefer to live in a penthouse because I think it's very convenient, spacious, and has a breathtaking view.

'In penthouse' needs the indefinite article 'a penthouse.' 'I prefer' can be 'I would prefer' to answer hypothetically—both are acceptable but 'would prefer' is more natural here. 'A very convenient, a large place' is ungrammatical; combine adjectives correctly (convenient, spacious). 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with 'a penthouse' (third person singular). 'Breath talking site' should be 'breathtaking view.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage.