Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a short topic sentence stating whether there are tall buildings, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "tall building", "large store", "IKEA") and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid unclear phrases like "toll and whole scale" or "it has to embrace".

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a tall building near my home — an IKEA store. It is a large, multi‑storey furniture store that attracts many people, so it stands out in the neighbourhood.

Gợi ý: Good structure and content. Improve grammar (use plural/singular agreement), and add a linking word to make the second sentence flow. Be slightly more specific with examples of "mood" or background and keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually photograph buildings that look unique and photogenic. Also, when I decide what to shoot, I consider the background and the mood — for example, I prefer buildings framed by trees or warm evening light.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building and its location, then give two specific reasons to visit using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Correct small grammar issues and avoid repetition ("as well"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Namsan Tower in Seoul because it is a famous spot for both tourists and locals. Also, I want to ride the cable car up the mountain and enjoy the panoramic views of the city.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and then one or two precise reasons using linking words like "because". Fix grammar ("I've lived on the first floor", "I'm afraid of heights"). Avoid redundant phrases and keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Not really, because I have lived on the first floor my whole life and I am afraid of heights. For these reasons, I feel more comfortable living in a low‑rise building.

× Yes, there is toll and whole scale building nearby my home called IKEA.

✓ Yes, there is a tall, wholesale building near my home called IKEA.

Grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). The student used 'toll' instead of 'tall' (spelling/word choice) and 'whole scale' instead of 'wholesale' or 'a large-scale'. 'There is' can remain because IKEA (a singular building name) is being referred to. 'Nearby my home' is incorrect preposition use; use 'near my home' or 'close to my home'. Also add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'tall, wholesale'. Suggestion: use correct adjective 'tall' and 'wholesale' or 'large-scale', and 'near my home'.

× It has to embrace a lot of people and large furniture.

✓ It can accommodate a lot of people and large pieces of furniture.

Grammar problem type: 6 (Present tense/verb choice) and 8 (Verb + -ing form not applicable). The phrase 'has to embrace' is incorrect for meaning; 'has to' implies obligation. Use 'can accommodate' to express capacity. 'Large furniture' should be 'large pieces of furniture' or 'large furniture items' for count/clarity. Suggestion: use 'can accommodate' and 'pieces of furniture'.

× So it is.

✓ So it is.

Grammar problem type: 26 (Sentence structure errors) — The sentence 'So it is.' is grammatically correct but vague and unnecessary. No grammatical correction needed; consider expanding to clarify meaning, e.g., 'So it is popular.'

× Yes, I usually take photos of buildings which is look unique and photogenic.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of buildings that look unique and photogenic.

Grammar problem types: 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 26 (Sentence structure). The relative clause uses 'which is look' which is wrong. Use 'that look' (plural 'buildings' requires plural verb 'look') or 'which look'. Suggestion: use 'that look unique and photogenic'.

× But when I choose what I take, I focus on not only building itself but also the background and the mood of the place.

✓ But when I choose what to photograph, I focus not only on the building itself but also on the background and the mood of the place.

Grammar problem types: 26 (Sentence structure) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions). 'Choose what I take' is awkward; use 'choose what to photograph' or 'what to take photos of'. 'Not only building itself' needs articles and preposition: 'not only on the building itself'. Also include 'on' before 'the background'. Suggestion: restructure to 'choose what to photograph' and use 'focus not only on... but also on...'.

× Yes, I want to visit Namazen tower in Seoul.

✓ Yes, I want to visit Nam-san Tower in Seoul.

Grammar problem type: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns/name) and 22 (Article errors possibly). The proper name appears misspelled: 'Namazen tower' likely refers to 'Namsan Tower' or 'N Seoul Tower'. Use correct proper noun capitalization and spelling: 'Namsan Tower' or 'N Seoul Tower'. No tense change needed. Suggestion: check proper names and capitalize them.

× It's well known to foreign visitors as well as Koreans and famous as dating place as well.

✓ It's well known to foreign visitors as well as Koreans and is also famous as a dating spot.

Grammar problem types: 26 (Sentence structure) and 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article) and 13 (word choice). The sentence misses 'is' before 'famous' and 'dating place' is better as 'dating spot' or 'place for dates' with the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' and use 'a dating spot'.

× And if I go there I can take even cable car so I want to visit.

✓ And if I go there I can even take the cable car, so I want to visit.

Grammar problem types: 20 (Adverb placement) and 11 (Prepositions/articles). 'Even' should modify 'take' and is better placed before the verb or 'the cable car'. Use the definite article 'the cable car'. Add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: place adverb 'even' before 'take' or before 'the cable car' and include 'the'.

× Not really because I've lived in first floor for my whole life so tall building is not familiar to me actually and also I have I'm fearing high place so I prefer.

✓ Not really, because I've lived on the first floor my whole life, so tall buildings are not familiar to me, and I am afraid of high places, so I would not prefer to live in one.

Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 1 (Singular/plural issue), 12 (Pronoun/auxiliary misuse), 6 (Present tense/verb forms), 26 (Sentence structure). Corrections: use 'on the first floor' (preposition and article), 'my whole life' (remove 'for'), pluralize 'tall buildings are' to match general reference, 'I have I'm fearing high place' is incorrect — use 'I am afraid of high places' or 'I fear heights'. 'So I prefer' is incomplete; specify 'I would not prefer to live in one' or 'I would prefer not to'. Suggestion: break into clearer clauses, correct prepositions, use idiomatic expressions 'afraid of heights'.