Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 主語と動詞の一致、冗長な言葉や躊躇表現を減らし、文を整理して具体的な情報を加えてください。また、接続語を使って情報を論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。例：どのくらい高いか、何階建てか、用途（オフィス・住宅など）を一つか二つ挙げるとよいです。

Ví dụ: Yes. The tallest building near my house is a 30-storey office tower. In my town there are also several hotels, restaurants and a couple of movie theaters, so the area feels quite busy.

Gợi ý: 文法（前置詞や語順）と語彙の選択を改善し、理由を一つか二つ具体的に述べてください。不要な繰り返しや曖昧な表現を避け、接続詞で理由を明確に繋げましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially at night, because the lights create beautiful reflections and the streets feel calmer. I usually focus on the facade and the lighting to capture atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 文の構造を整え、情報を整理して具体的に述べてください。例えば、どんな店があるのか、なぜそのモールが特別か（カフェ、映画館、遊び場など）を簡潔に述べ、冗長な繰り返しを避けましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the large shopping mall because it has a wide range of shops, a varied food court and a small indoor playground. I enjoy going there to relax, shop and try different restaurants.

Gợi ý: アイディアは良いので、文法と語彙の自然さを改善しましょう（例えば 'it feels more peaceful'）。理由を順序立てて述べ、具体例（景色のどの部分が好きか、利点）を一つ示すと説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to live in a tall building because the panoramic views are amazing, especially the city lights at night. It also feels more peaceful up high, and I find it relaxing to watch the skyline from my window.

× Yes, there is our tallest building near my house.

✓ Yes, our tallest building is near my house.

The original sentence misuses the existential construction 'there is' with a specific subject ('our tallest building'). Use a normal subject-verb order: 'our tallest building is near my house.' This places the specific noun as the subject and correctly links it with the verb 'is.'

× my town has a lot of kinds of building and some some umm, like hotels and restaurants something movie theaters a lot.

✓ My town has many kinds of buildings, such as hotels, restaurants and many movie theaters.

Use 'many' with countable plural nouns ('buildings') rather than the awkward phrase 'a lot of kinds of building.' Use plural form 'buildings' and parallel structure with 'such as' to list examples. Remove filler words and duplicate words for clarity.

× I usually take a photo with building so I prefer to see the building at night because there is a beautiful and it feel calms and then I like this.

✓ I usually take photos of buildings, and I prefer to see them at night because they are beautiful and calming.

Use plural 'photos' and the correct preposition 'of' with 'take photos.' 'With building' is incorrect. Replace 'there is a beautiful' with 'they are beautiful' to match plural subject and use adjective 'calming' rather than 'feel calms.' Also use pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'buildings.'

× Yeah, there is a large shopping mall in my town that I'd like to visit because it is many different shops and food court with various restaurant and the small indoor playground where where I can relax so so I can enjoying, uh, shopping.

✓ There is a large shopping mall in my town that I'd like to visit because it has many different shops, a food court with various restaurants, and a small indoor playground where I can relax, so I can enjoy shopping.

Maintain the 'there is' construction for existence but follow with correct verb 'has' to describe contents. Use 'many' with countable 'shops' and plural 'restaurants.' Use articles 'a' before 'food court' and 'small indoor playground.' Remove duplicated words and use correct verb form 'enjoy' instead of 'enjoying.'

× Yes I do, the first reason I love the panoramic view from the top of the tall building, especially the city at night.

✓ Yes I do. The first reason is that I love the panoramic view from the top of a tall building, especially of the city at night.

Split into two sentences for clarity. Use 'the first reason is that' to introduce the explanation. Use the indefinite article 'a tall building' when speaking generally, and 'of the city at night' to show what is seen.

× Also I it feel more pop, peaceful and I can relax while watching the light.

✓ Also it feels more peaceful, and I can relax while watching the lights.

Remove the extra pronoun 'I' after 'Also.' Use third person singular 'it feels' to agree with the subject 'it' (referring to the building or view). 'More pop' is unclear; remove it. Use plural 'lights' and correct adjective 'peaceful.'