Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc chủ đề + chi tiết. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (thiếu mạo từ, thì và trật tự từ). Thêm liên từ phù hợp nếu cần mở rộng thông tin và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về môi trường xung quanh (ví dụ: cánh đồng, vài ngôi nhà thấp). Giữ không quá 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. Most structures are low houses and farm buildings, and there are open fields around us.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp trả lời rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như “photos of beauty”; dùng từ phù hợp (e.g. historic buildings, architecture). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về khi nào hoặc loại tòa nhà bạn chụp để làm phong phú nội dung.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially old or historic ones. I enjoy capturing their architectural details, such as ornate windows and facades, when I travel or walk around my town.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng tên và mô tả tòa nhà, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thời và mạo từ), và tránh tiếng lắp (uh). Bổ sung lý do cụ thể vì sao bạn muốn thăm (ví dụ: kiến trúc, lịch sử, triển lãm) và một chi tiết cụ thể về điều bạn mong đợi thấy. Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the UMM historical building because it has a rich history and beautiful architecture. I especially want to see the old rooms and take photographs of the intricate decorations.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều tiếng lắp; cần sửa từ không chính xác (’low rice house’ nên là ‘a low-rise house’). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: yên tĩnh, gần thiên nhiên, dễ di chuyển). Loại bỏ tiếng thừa và giữ 2-3 câu mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to live in a tall building. I prefer a low-rise house because it is quieter and closer to nature, and it's easier to get in and out without using elevators.

× Because my home located in rural area so there's not a lot of buildings near my home.

✓ My home is located in a rural area, so there are not a lot of buildings near it.

The sentence has multiple structure problems: missing auxiliary verb 'is' with 'located', missing article 'a' before 'rural area', and awkward combination of 'Because' and 'so'. Use a single connector 'so' and correct subject reference 'it'. Also use plural agreement 'are' with 'a lot of buildings'. Suggestion: form one complete sentence with correct verb and articles.

× Yes, I do take photos of beauty because I think it's pretty aesthetic to take some photos of it.

✓ Yes, I take photos of beautiful buildings because I think they look aesthetic.

The phrase 'photos of beauty' is ungrammatical; use 'photos of beautiful buildings' or 'beautiful things'. 'Do take' is unnecessary for simple present; use 'take'. Replace 'it' with plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'buildings'. Also simplify wording: 'look aesthetic' is more natural. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and match noun/pronoun forms.

× Of course, there's UMM in the ancient room buildings, uh, because it's had a lot of interesting history behind it and you can take some beautiful photos out of it to make a memory.

✓ Of course, there is the UMM in the old building; it has a lot of interesting history and you can take some beautiful photos there to remember it.

Use 'there is' with article 'the' before 'UMM' if it's a specific place. 'Ancient room buildings' is incorrect — use 'old building' or 'historic building'. 'It's had' incorrectly uses present perfect when simple present 'it has' describing a current characteristic is better. 'Take photos out of it' is wrong; use 'take photos there' or 'of it'. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases, proper tense and natural prepositions.

× No, I prefer a low rice house because it's more convenient for me and not close to the city center so it would be less noise 'cause I'm pretty a MMM. Oh yeah.

✓ No, I prefer a low-rise house because it is more convenient for me and not close to the city center, so it would be less noisy because I am quite shy.

Multiple issues: 'low rice house' is a misspelling of 'low-rise house'. 'Not close to the city center' needs to be linked properly with commas. 'Less noise' should be adjective 'less noisy'. The phrase ''cause I'm pretty a MMM' is unclear; likely intended 'because I'm pretty shy' — use 'because I am quite shy'. Suggestion: use correct compound adjectives, adjective forms, and complete expressions to convey meaning.