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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many tall building near my home. Because I live in a apartment, there are many apartment blocks nearby.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of buildings?

Thí sinh

Not really, I don't like taking picture of the buildings, but uh, if the building is very special and leave a deep pressure on me, I will take pictures.

Giám khảo

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Thí sinh

No, there isn't. I'm not interested in buildings at the tourist attraction. I care more about the local food.

Giám khảo

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Thí sinh

No I don't Amazon rather live in a big house and I want to have a garden with it.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there tall buildings near your home?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意语法和发音错误,同时让回答更简洁、更自然。可将两句合并为一到两句,开头用主题句直接回答,然后用具体细节补充。例如修正单复数(building → buildings,a apartment → an apartment)并避免重复信息。

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in an apartment in a densely populated area, so there are many tall apartment blocks around me.

Do you take photos of buildings?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 改善表达的自然度和用词准确性,减少口头语(uh)并修正不恰当的词汇(picture → pictures;leave a deep pressure → leave a deep impression)。可以用一两句说明什么时候会拍照并举例。

Ví dụ: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings, but I will take pictures if a building looks unusual or makes a strong impression on me, for example an old cathedral or a modern skyscraper with unique design.

Is there a building that you would like to visit?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接有效,但可用更自然的搭配和衔接词,使表述更流畅。避免生硬的否定后接解释,建议用一两句先肯定再解释原因并给出替代兴趣点。

Ví dụ: Not really. I'm not particularly interested in visiting famous buildings; I prefer exploring local food markets and restaurants when I travel.

Do you want to live in a tall building?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 修正明显的词语错误(Amazon → am)并使句子更自然。先给出简短直接的回答,然后用1–2句解释原因并提供具体细节(如喜欢花园、更多空间等)。

Ví dụ: No, I don't. I'd rather live in a spacious house with a garden because I enjoy gardening and want more outdoor space for relaxation and activities.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there are many tall building near my home.

Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.

句子中名词“building”在被数量词“many”修饰时应使用复数形式“buildings”。建议:遇到表示多数量的词(many、few、several、some等)时,确保名词为复数。

Article errors

× Because I live in a apartment, there are many apartment blocks nearby.

Because I live in an apartment, there are many apartment blocks nearby.

冠词“a”应与后接单词的发音关联,apartment以元音音素开头,需用不定冠词“an”。建议:在以元音音素(a, e, i, o, u)开头的单词前使用“an”,以辅音音素开头的单词前使用“a”。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Not really, I don't like taking picture of the buildings, but uh, if the building is very special and leave a deep pressure on me, I will take pictures.

Not really, I don't like taking pictures of buildings, but if a building is very special and leaves a deep impression on me, I will take pictures.

本句存在多处问题: 1) “picture”应为复数“pictures”,因前有一般动词短语“taking”表示习惯性/泛指行为,且被动词like后接动名词时要用复数或非限定名词。2) “of the buildings”在此语境不需要定冠词,改为复数复指“buildings”。3) “leave a deep pressure on me”用词不当,应为“leave a deep impression on me”(给我留下深刻印象)。4) 主语“building”为第三人称单数,谓语应为“leaves”。建议:注意动名词短语的名词形式(单复数)、适当使用冠词,并使用常见搭配(deep impression)。

There be issue

× No, there isn't. I'm not interested in buildings at the tourist attraction. I care more about the local food.

No, there isn't. I'm not interested in the buildings at tourist attractions. I care more about the local food.

1) “buildings at the tourist attraction”中的名词短语更自然的复数形式为“the buildings at tourist attractions”或去掉定冠词改为“buildings at tourist attractions”。2) 原句“the tourist attraction”在泛指多个景点时应使用复数或去掉“the”。建议:根据语境选择单数或复数,并保持与泛指/特指的一致。

Sentence structure errors

× No I don't Amazon rather live in a big house and I want to have a garden with it.

No, I don't. I would rather live in a big house, and I want to have a garden with it.

原句有结构混乱: 1) 出现了错误词“Amazon”可能是口误或拼写错误,应删除。2) “I don't”后需接完整内容或用补充句表明偏好,常用结构为“I would rather...”。3) 在表达愿望时使用“would rather”更自然。4) 在复合句中添加逗号以提高可读性。建议:去掉无关或误写词,使用正确表达偏好的固定搭配(would rather),并保持句子完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
DeepIn depth; Intense; Profound; Rapt; Far down
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
TallIn height; Demanding
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