Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition and fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct word choice (e.g., 'apartment buildings') and reduce hesitations to sound more fluent.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in Brampton and there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, most are office towers and apartment buildings, so the neighbourhood feels quite urban and busy.

Gợi ý: Eliminate repetition and grammar mistakes. Use correct verb forms and provide one clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' but avoid stuttering and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because they often reflect a city's history and culture. For example, I like taking pictures of old town halls and churches that show historical architecture.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Give one clear statement then add a short reason or plan with linking words ('because' or 'next month'). Remove filler words and correct past participles ('been', 'gone').

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the CN Tower in Toronto because it offers great views of the city. In fact, I plan to go next month and take photos from the observation deck.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear direct answer and follow with a concise reason. Avoid fillers and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and include a specific detail or example about rural life to strengthen the response.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I prefer living in a rural area. For example, a small house near fields would help me relax after a busy workday and enjoy nature.

× Yes, I live in Brampton and there are several buildings close to my home. These buildings are generally related to the office and apartment living apartments and the area, uh, looks quite urban and busy due to these buildings.

✓ Yes, I live in Brampton and there are several buildings close to my home. These buildings are generally offices and apartment buildings, and the area looks quite urban and busy because of them.

The original sentence repeats 'apartments' and mixes count nouns awkwardly. Use plural forms consistently and simplify noun phrases: 'offices and apartment buildings' is clear. Replace 'due to these buildings' with 'because of them' for natural phrasing. Suggested improvement: remove repetition, choose correct plural noun forms, and use concise connectors like 'and' or 'because of'.

× Yes, of course, I'm really fond, fond of taking photos of buildings because some buildings show the show the, uh, historical value of the city or the country.

✓ Yes, of course, I'm really fond of taking photos of buildings because some buildings show the historical value of a city or a country.

The phrase 'fond of taking' correctly uses the present participle; the mistake was repetition and incorrect article use. Remove doubled words 'fond, fond' and 'show the show the'. Use 'the historical value of a city or a country' to be general and grammatical. Suggested improvement: avoid repetition, and ensure nouns have appropriate articles (use 'a city' or 'a country' for general statements).

× And I, I haven't take so many pictures of historical.

✓ And I haven't taken so many pictures of historical buildings.

After 'haven't' the verb must be in past participle form 'taken' (present perfect). Also 'historical' is an adjective and needs a noun such as 'buildings'. Suggested improvement: use correct past participle after 'have/has' and include the noun that the adjective modifies.

× Yes, there is one dream building that I want to visit. It is uh, CN Tower building.

✓ Yes, there is one dream building that I want to visit. It is the CN Tower.

Proper nouns like 'CN Tower' usually take the definite article 'the'. Also 'building' after 'CN Tower' is unnecessary. Use 'the CN Tower.' Suggested improvement: learn which landmarks require 'the' and avoid redundant nouns after names.

× I haven't, uh, I haven't went uh, in Toronto to see the CN Tower.

✓ I haven't been to Toronto to see the CN Tower.

After 'haven't' the correct past participle is 'been', not past tense 'went'. Also use 'been to' for visiting a city. Remove unnecessary 'in'. Suggested improvement: use present perfect 'have/has been to' when talking about experiences.

× Uh, I will probably uh, in next month going to visit this place.

✓ I will probably visit this place next month.

The original mixes future forms incorrectly. Use 'will probably visit' or 'am probably going to visit'. Place 'next month' after the verb phrase. Remove extraneous words. Suggested improvement: choose one future construction (will + verb or be going to + verb) and place time expressions correctly.

× Really said, I don't want to live in a building because I, uh, I love to uh, stay in home, uh, in, in a rural area because it will give some relaxation to me from hectic schedule while enjoying the natural beauty.

✓ Actually, I don't want to live in a building because I prefer to stay at home in a rural area; it helps me relax from a hectic schedule and enjoy the natural beauty.

The original has disfluencies, incorrect word choices ('stay in home' should be 'stay at home'), and awkward phrasing. Replace 'Really said' with 'Actually' or 'To be honest'. Use 'prefer' instead of 'love to stay' for clarity, 'stay at home', and 'relax from a hectic schedule' rephrased as 'helps me relax from a hectic schedule'. Suggested improvement: remove fillers, use correct prepositions ('at home'), and simplify sentences for clarity.