Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 문장 구조를 바로잡고 응답을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 만들 필요가 있습니다. 단수·복수 형태(“a three-storey building” vs “buildings”)와 관사 사용을 고치고, 불필요한 단문들을 연결하여 1~2문장으로 정리하세요. 또한 ‘100 livings’와 같은 표현 대신 ‘about 100 residents’처럼 명확한 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a three-storey apartment building near my home. It houses about 100 residents.

Gợi ý: 발화의 흐름을 매끄럽게 하고 불필요한 반복과 음성 틱(uh, so when I)들을 줄여야 합니다. 또한 문장을 연결할 때 연결어(if/when/because 등)를 정확히 사용하고, ‘special shape building’ 대신 ‘uniquely shaped building’ 같은 더 자연스러운 표현을 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually take photos of buildings when I notice a unique shape, because pictures help me remember their distinctive features.

Gợi ý: 숫자와 수식어의 위치를 바로잡고 반복(“it it”)과 불필요한 발화 중단을 제거하세요. ‘a cafe in an 11-storey building’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 이유를 말할 때는 연결어(so/so that/because)를 정확히 사용해 한두 문장으로 명확히 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit a café in an 11-storey building because it's high up and quiet, which would help me concentrate on my studies.

Gợi ý: 문장 연결을 매끄럽게 하고 반복(“I I”)을 제거하세요. ‘more quiet’ 대신 ‘quieter’를 사용하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명해 보세요. 예를 들어 소음이 적거나 전망 때문에 기분 전환이 된다는 식으로 구체적 결과를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it's usually quieter and offers a nice view, which helps me relax and clear my mind.

× Yes, there is a three Storey buildings near my home.

✓ Yes, there is a three-storey building near my home.

The subject refers to a single building, so 'there is' is correct but 'buildings' should be singular. Hyphenate 'three-storey' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: use singular noun with correct adjective form: 'a three-storey building'.

× Specifically it is apartment.

✓ Specifically, it is an apartment.

The noun 'apartment' requires the indefinite article 'an' because it begins with a vowel sound. Also add a comma after 'Specifically' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'an apartment' and include proper punctuation.

× With 100 livings.

✓ It has about 100 residents.

'With 100 livings' is ungrammatical: 'living' isn't the correct noun for people; use 'residents' or 'units'. Also complete the sentence with a subject and verb. Suggestion: 'It has about 100 residents' or 'There are about 100 units.'

× Yes, I usually take photos of building when I so when I see uh, special shape building.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of buildings when I see a building with a special shape.

Use plural 'buildings' to match the general activity, and add article 'a' before 'building with a special shape'. Remove redundant words 'when I so when I' and place modifiers in correct order. Suggestion: 'take photos of buildings when I see a building with a special shape.'

× This is because I can memorize the special building easily by watching photos.

✓ This is because I can remember a distinctive building more easily by looking at photos.

'Memorize' is unnatural here; 'remember' fits better. Use 'a distinctive building' or 'a special building' and 'by looking at photos' is more natural than 'watching photos'. Suggestion: prefer 'remember' and 'look at photos.'

× Yes, I'd like to visit a cafe with UH-11 story building.

✓ Yes, I'd like to visit a cafe in an 11-story building.

Use 'in' not 'with' to indicate location, include the article 'an' before vowel sound '11', and hyphenate '11-story' as a compound adjective. Remove 'UH-' filler. Suggestion: 'a cafe in an 11-story building.'

× This is because it it is tall, so I can concentrate my studies with, uh, quiet.

✓ This is because it is tall, so I can concentrate on my studies in a quiet environment.

Remove duplicated 'it it'. Use 'concentrate on my studies' (correct preposition) and 'in a quiet environment' is grammatically and idiomatically correct. Suggestion: 'concentrate on my studies in a quiet environment.'

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no change. Keep as is. Note: no applicable error from the provided list.

× This is because it is more quiet and it has a nice view so I I take a breather.

✓ This is because it is quieter and has a nice view, so I can take a breather.

Use comparative 'quieter' rather than 'more quiet'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'can take a breather' to express possibility. Add comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: 'it is quieter and has a nice view, so I can take a breather.'