Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use singular/plural and passive/active forms), and avoid filler words. Add one short supporting detail using a linking word. For example, correct 'surround me' to 'surround me' -> 'surround my building' or 'surround the area'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several apartment towers line the main street, so the area feels quite urban.

Gợi ý: Use clearer tense and word choice. Say when and why you take photos, avoid vague phrases like 'this construction' and incorrect adjectives. Use linking words (because, when) and correct adjective forms ('beautiful', 'more modern than others').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I see new designs because I find them beautiful and more modern than older ones in the area.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct vocabulary: use 'architecture' instead of 'architects' and 'examples of architecture'. Give one clear reason and a specific place you'd like to visit. Avoid hesitations and repetition.

Ví dụ: No, there isn't any particular building I want to visit in my city because we lack notable examples of architecture. I would prefer to visit cities like Paris or Milan to see famous landmarks and modern designs.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar: use singular/plural agreement and proper phrasing ('panoramic views', 'it also feels quieter'). Provide one clear benefit and a linking word for coherence. Avoid extra words like 'or' in the middle.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers beautiful panoramic views of the city and, moreover, it often feels quieter. Also, having a balcony would be great for enjoying fresh air.

× Uh yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a flat and it's surround me.

✓ Uh yes, there are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in a flat and they're surrounding me.

The phrase 'it's surround me' is incorrect. 'There is/are' is fine earlier. The correct form uses the plural subject 'they' (referring to buildings) plus the present continuous passive-like active 'are surrounding' to show ongoing action. Use 'they're surrounding me' or 'surround me' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'they surround me' for simple present or 'they're surrounding me' for current continuous.

× Yes, I usually take photos of buildings when I don't see this construction before.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of buildings when I haven't seen this construction before.

The clause refers to a past experience up to now, so present perfect ('have/has' + past participle) is required: 'haven't seen' instead of 'don't see'. Using simple present 'don't see' is incorrect for unspecified past exposure. Use present perfect to indicate 'before this moment'.

× I think it's very beauty and more modern than I see before.

✓ I think it's very beautiful and more modern than what I've seen before.

'Beauty' is a noun; the adjective 'beautiful' should be used to modify 'it'. Also comparison with past experience requires present perfect 'I've seen' or 'I have seen' and inclusion of 'what' or 'that' makes the comparison clear. Use 'more modern than what I've seen before.'

× Now there isn't a building in my city that I want to visit because we don't have many interesting example of architects here.

✓ Now there isn't a building in my city that I want to visit because we don't have many interesting examples of architecture here.

'Example of architects' is incorrect: you need the plural 'examples' and the noun 'architecture' (not 'architects') to refer to buildings or designs. This fixes noun choice and number. 'There isn't a building' is acceptable for 'there is not'.

× I would prefer to go in another city like a parish or or Milan.

✓ I would prefer to go to another city, like Paris or Milan.

Use the preposition 'to' with verbs of movement: 'go to another city' not 'go in'. Also 'parish' is a misspelling; the intended city is 'Paris'. Remove the duplicated 'or'.

× Yes I want to live in a tall building because you get a beautiful panoramic views and or of the city and it's also feel quarter and you have balcony would be nice for enjoying fresh air.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because you get beautiful panoramic views of the city, it also feels quieter, and having a balcony would be nice for enjoying the fresh air.

Multiple errors: 'a beautiful panoramic views' mixes singular article with plural 'views' — remove 'a' and use 'beautiful panoramic views'. 'Get' is acceptable but matches 'you' informal; keep or use 'one gets'. 'and or of the city' is garbled — use 'views of the city'. 'it's also feel quarter' is wrong: use 'it also feels quieter' (third person singular present 'feels' + comparative adjective 'quieter'). 'you have balcony would be nice' is ungrammatical; use 'having a balcony would be nice'. Add 'the' before 'fresh air'.