Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), and use precise vocabulary. You can mention a brief specific example or area to add content and use one linking phrase if needed.

Ví dụ: Yes. I live in Delhi, and there are many tall buildings in the New Delhi area, especially around Connaught Place and the business districts.

Gợi ý: Avoid vague phrasing and redundancy. Give a concise direct answer, then add one or two specific details using a linking word (for example, because/so). Remove informal endings like 'And yeah.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often photograph high-rise buildings because I like their exterior designs, and I keep the photos as memories or for inspiration.

Gợi ý: Be more direct and accurate. Start with a topic sentence naming the building, avoid hesitations, and add a specific reason or detail (what you want to do there). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the CN Tower in Toronto because it is an iconic landmark; I want to go up to the observation deck and try the restaurant with its panoramic views.

Gợi ý: Make the response clearer and more fluent. Remove fillers and hedging words (kind of, uh). Use one or two concrete benefits (e.g., view, convenience) and a linking word to structure the reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Living in a tall building would offer great views of sunrises and sunsets, and it often provides convenient amenities like a gym or rooftop terrace.

× I live in Delhi and there are lots of skyrocketing buildings in, uh, New Delhi.

✓ I live in Delhi and there are lots of very tall buildings in New Delhi.

The phrase 'skyrocketing buildings' is incorrect because 'skyrocketing' is a verb/adjective relating to rapid increase and not used to describe building height. Use an adjective like 'very tall' to describe tall buildings. Also remove the extra comma before 'New Delhi'. Suggestion: use clear descriptive adjectives (tall, high-rise) and avoid metaphorical verbs as adjectives.

× Yes, every now and then whenever I see high rise buildings and with the beautiful outdoor walls, I take pictures of them which makes my memories.

✓ Yes, every now and then, whenever I see high-rise buildings with beautiful exterior walls, I take pictures of them to preserve my memories.

Problems: 'high rise' should be hyphenated as 'high-rise' when used as a compound adjective; 'outdoor walls' is unnatural, 'exterior walls' is better; 'which makes my memories' is ungrammatical – use purpose 'to preserve my memories'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use hyphenated compound adjectives and express purpose with 'to' + base verb.

× And yeah.

✓ (Omit)

'And yeah' is a fragment that does not add information and is inappropriate in formal responses. Either expand into a full sentence or omit. Suggestion: avoid fillers in formal speaking; replace with a complete sentence if needed.

× So I believe, uh, yes, there is a building in Canada that uh, named as CN Tower and that's the biggest building in Toronto and I really want to go and see that and I want to enjoy the height and the restaurant there.

✓ So I believe yes, there is a building in Canada named the CN Tower; it's the tallest structure in Toronto, and I really want to go and see it and enjoy the view and the restaurant there.

Problems: 'named as CN Tower' is incorrect — use 'named the CN Tower' or 'called the CN Tower'; 'that's the biggest building' better as 'it's the tallest structure' for clarity; use 'see it' (pronoun) not 'see that'; 'enjoy the height' is awkward — 'enjoy the view' is natural. Also combine clauses for fluidity. Suggestion: use correct article 'the' with proper nouns and use natural collocations like 'the CN Tower' and 'enjoy the view'.

× If I get a chance, I would love to live in a tall building because the view from the top is kind of, uh, different, and the sunrise and sunset seems very visible and interesting, so it's a beautiful, uh, way to live in a scenery.

✓ If I get a chance, I would love to live in a tall building because the view from the top is different, and the sunrise and sunset seem very clear and interesting, so it's a beautiful way to live surrounded by scenery.

Problems: 'is kind of, uh, different' contains a filler and weak modifier—use 'is different'; subject-verb agreement: 'sunrise and sunset seems' should be 'sunrise and sunset seem' because plural subject requires plural verb; 'very visible' is awkward—'very clear' is better; 'live in a scenery' is incorrect preposition/noun usage — use 'surrounded by scenery' or 'in a scenic setting'. Suggestion: remove fillers, ensure subject-verb agreement, choose natural collocations for visibility and scenery.