Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Thí sinh
Well, I think. There are many buildings near my home because. It is a city centre and it's full of many writing buildings for officers.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of buildings?
Thí sinh
But no, I just taking photos about the restaurants. There are many interesting foods and with the light atmosphere I want to take photos.
Giám khảo
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm not only visit, but also. I. Join the project in the buildings that at last summer holiday I'm was a Internet.
Giám khảo
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Thí sinh
Well I don't want to live in a tall building because I think with a leader is too long and waste time. I just want to leave the lower house. I think it's very comfortable and save time.
Are there tall buildings near your home?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 简短回答时要更直接并保持句子完整,避免断断续续。描述时提供具体细节并使用连接词,例如说明高楼的类型、数量或位置。注意语法:city centre 改为 city centre,'writing buildings for officers' 应改为 office buildings。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the city centre. Most are office buildings and apartment towers clustered along the main street, so the skyline looks quite dense.
Do you take photos of buildings?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并用正确时态和搭配。说明原因时用清晰的连接词(for example, because, so)并给出具体细节,如喜欢哪类餐厅或什么氛围。把非谓语改为完整句子:I just take photos of restaurants。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't photograph buildings. I prefer taking pictures of restaurants because they have interesting dishes and a warm atmosphere that looks good in photos.
Is there a building that you would like to visit?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答非常混乱且语法错误多。先直接回答愿不愿意参观,再提供清晰的细节。说明是哪座建筑、原因和相关经历。注意时态和句子连贯性,避免碎片化表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a tech company’s headquarters near my city because I'm interested in their work. Last summer I joined an online project with them, so visiting in person would help me understand their offices and meet the team.
Do you want to live in a tall building?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并使用恰当词汇(elevator 而不是 leader,live 而不是 leave)。给出具体原因并用连接词连接观点和解释,例如因为电梯等待和疏散不便。保持句子完整不超过五句。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because using the elevator can take too long and wastes time. I prefer a low-rise house because it's more comfortable, quicker to go in and out, and easier in emergencies.
× Well, I think. There are many buildings near my home because. It is a city centre and it's full of many writing buildings for officers.
✓ Well, I think there are many buildings near my home because it is a city centre and it's full of many office buildings.
句子中时态和用词需要统一为一般现在时来描述事实("there are", "it is")。原句断句不连贯且用词错误:"writing buildings for officers" 不通顺,应该用 "office buildings" 表示写字楼或办公楼。此外移除多余的句点并合并成完整句子,使表达连贯。建议用一般现在时陈述常态事实。
× But no, I just taking photos about the restaurants.
✓ No, I just take photos of restaurants.
动词使用错误:在一般现在时中主语后应使用动词原形(第三人称除外),不是进行时的 "taking"。此外搭配错误:应使用介词短语 "take photos of" 而不是 "taking photos about"。建议将句子改为一般现在时的简单现在时表达习惯性动作。
× There are many interesting foods and with the light atmosphere I want to take photos.
✓ There are many interesting dishes, and because of the pleasant atmosphere I want to take photos.
介词和词汇搭配错误:"interesting foods" 更自然的表达是 "interesting dishes" 或 "foods" 加修饰语;"with the light atmosphere" 不地道,应改为 "because of the pleasant atmosphere" 或 "because of the nice lighting/atmosphere"。调整连接词使句子更通顺。
× Well, I'm not only visit, but also. I. Join the project in the buildings that at last summer holiday I'm was a Internet.
✓ Well, I not only visited, but I also joined a project in those buildings last summer during the holiday while I was working on the internet.
原句结构混乱,时态和语序错误。"not only ... but also" 结构应完整连接两个并列成分;描述过去发生的事应使用过去时(visited, joined)。"at last summer holiday I'm was a Internet" 完全不符合英语语法,应该表达为 "last summer during the holiday" 或 "last summer" 并用过去时 "I was on the internet" 或 "while I was working online"。建议重组句子并使用一致的过去时态。
× Well I don't want to live in a tall building because I think with a leader is too long and waste time.
✓ Well, I don't want to live in a tall building because I think using the elevator takes too long and wastes time.
时态问题不大,但词汇和动词形式有误:"with a leader" 显然是误用,应为 "the elevator"。此外谓语动词要与主语一致:"waste time" 应为第三人称单数形式 "wastes time"。建议使用明确名词并保持主谓一致。
× I just want to leave the lower house. I think it's very comfortable and save time.
✓ I just want to live in a lower house. I think it's very comfortable and saves time.
冠词和词汇使用不当:原句 "leave the lower house" 意义不明,推测想说 "live in a lower house"(住在矮层/低楼层的住房)。动词时态和主谓一致:"save time" 应为第三人称单数 "saves time"。建议使用正确动词(live)和一致的谓语形式。