Building— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct grammar, and add one supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain and give a specific example. Watch subject-verb agreement and article use (e.g., “a village”, “tall buildings”).

Ví dụ: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small village where most houses have only one or two floors, and the landscape is mostly rice fields and low farms, so the skyline is very low.

Gợi ý: Be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use one clear topic sentence and add a reason with a linking word. Correct phrases like “go to CD” (clarify location) and grammar (e.g., plural agreement).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel to cities. Because tall or historic buildings have interesting details, I like to capture their facades and unique designs for my travel album.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a specific building, correct names and facts, and give one reason with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “its own historical buildings” and check proper nouns (e.g., “Pisa Tower” in Italy).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the Leaning Tower of Pisa in Italy because its unusual tilt and long history make it a fascinating example of medieval architecture. Also, seeing it in person would help me appreciate how it has survived for centuries.

Gợi ý: Organize into two clear sentences: state your current preference, then explain your future preference with a linking word. Improve grammar (e.g., “working age” or “when I retire”) and use concise vocabulary like “amenities” and “retire.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building during my working years because high-rise apartments are usually close to shops and have modern amenities. However, when I retire I would prefer a quiet, low-rise area where I can enjoy a slower pace of life.

× No there is not because I live in village so you can find rice fields and buildings with one floor or a maximum two floors.

✓ No, there are not, because I live in a village, so you can find rice fields and buildings with one floor or a maximum of two floors.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there is not' with plural nouns; use 'there are not' for plural. Also missing articles: 'a village' and 'a maximum of two floors.' Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: match 'there be' form to the number of the noun and include necessary articles.

× So there is no tall buildings.

✓ So there are no tall buildings.

'There is' should be used with singular nouns; 'tall buildings' is plural, so use 'there are.' Also remove the article 'no' is fine but verb must agree. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural subjects.

× When I go to CD I always take a picture of every single place.

✓ When I go to the city I always take a picture of every single place.

'CD' is unclear and may be intended as 'city.' This sentence is otherwise grammatically acceptable, but needs the definite article 'the' before 'city' and clarity on the noun. Suggestion: use clear nouns and include 'the' for a specific place.

× Like every place that has tall buildings are the best view I will take the picture.

✓ Places that have tall buildings make the best views, so I take pictures of them.

The original mixes singular/plural and word order: 'every place that has tall buildings are' incorrectly pairs singular 'every place' with plural verb 'are.' Also 'take the picture' is awkward. Correction aligns subject and verb and uses plural consistently. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and use natural word order.

× Yes, of course I have a big interest in Europe because of its own historical buildings such as Pizza Tower in Italia and England.

✓ Yes, of course I have a great interest in Europe because of its historical buildings, such as the Leaning Tower of Pisa in Italy and buildings in England.

Use 'great interest' rather than 'big interest.' 'Its own' is unnecessary. 'Pizza Tower in Italia' is incorrect: the landmark is the 'Leaning Tower of Pisa' and country name should be 'Italy.' Suggestion: use appropriate adjective collocations and correct proper nouns.

× The history is so dramatic and make me amazed.

✓ The history is so dramatic and makes me amazed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'history' (singular) requires 'makes,' not 'make.' Also 'amazed' is acceptable but 'amazes me' is more natural. Suggestion: match verb form to singular subject and prefer 'amazes me.'

× In my productive age I would say yes because I need to find public places with modern facilities but when I am pension I hope I can live in quiet place and do slow living.

✓ In my working years I would say yes because I need access to public places with modern facilities, but when I am retired I hope I can live in a quiet place and practice slow living.

Several word choice and tense issues: 'productive age' is nonstandard—use 'working years.' 'When I am pension' is incorrect; use 'when I am retired.' 'Live in quiet place' needs article 'a.' 'Do slow living' is unnatural; use 'practice slow living.' Keep modal 'would' and 'hope' consistent. Suggestion: use standard collocations for life stages and natural verbs for lifestyle descriptions.