Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat untuk menjadi lebih alami dan ringkas. Gunakan kalimat topik langsung diikuti oleh satu atau dua detail yang relevan, dan hubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung yang tepat. Contoh fokus: konsistensi tense, penggunaan continuous/gerund setelah "love" (loving/looking), serta penggabungan dua kalimat pendek menjadi satu yang lengkap.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery relaxes me and sparks new ideas. For example, seeing different landscapes often makes me think about places I’d like to visit and inspires my sketches.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki ungkapan tidak baku dan tata bahasa: hindari slang seperti "gonna", gunakan bentuk kata yang benar (e.g., "when I look back"). Jelaskan alasan dengan spesifik dan tambahkan linking word untuk koherensi.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the window because I like to capture aesthetic moments for my Instagram and to create keepsakes that I can look back on later.

Gợi ý: Jawab langsung dan ringkas seperti sudah dilakukan, tetapi buat kalimat lebih natural dengan memperbaiki frasa "walk on it" menjadi "walk on the beach" dan tambahkan satu detail spesifik atau perbandingan. Gunakan linking word untuk alasan lebih jelas.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the warmth of the sun when I walk on the beach. I also enjoy watching sunsets over the water, which I find more calming than mountain views.

× Yes I do all the time. I love look at the view through the window because it's healing me and it makes me think about something that I have never thinking before. Makes me more relaxed, creative.

✓ Yes, I do all the time. I love looking at the view through the window because it is soothing to me and it makes me think about things I have never thought about before. It makes me more relaxed and creative.

The sentence contains errors with verb + -ing form and verb tense. 'Love look' should be 'love looking' (verb + -ing after 'love'). 'Healing me' is unnatural; use 'soothing to me' or 'calms me.' 'I have never thinking' mixes present perfect with an -ing form incorrectly; it should be 'I have never thought about' (past participle after have). Also the fragment 'Makes me more relaxed, creative.' lacks a subject; add 'It' and join adjectives with 'and'. Suggestions: use 'love + -ing' for activities, use present perfect with past participle (have + past participle), and include subjects for complete sentences.

× Yes, I always do. I love taking aesthetic pics to pose on my Instagram and maybe it's gonna be memories if I looking back at the photo.

✓ Yes, I always do. I love taking aesthetic pictures to post on my Instagram, and maybe they'll be memories if I look back at the photos.

Errors include incorrect use of verb + -ing and informal/future form. 'Pose on my Instagram' is better as 'post on my Instagram'. 'It's gonna be memories' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'they'll be memories' or 'they will become memories.' 'If I looking back' should be 'if I look back' (conditional clause needs base form, not -ing). Suggestions: use 'taking' correctly after 'love', use 'post' instead of 'pose' for uploading images, use proper future 'will' and correct verb form in conditional clauses.

× I prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the feel of the sun when I walk on it, and I love sunset.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the sound of the waves and the feeling of the sun when I walk on the beach, and I love sunsets.

Problems: 'walk on it' uses vague pronoun and inappropriate preposition for 'sun' — you usually 'walk on the beach' to feel the sun. 'The feel of the sun' is acceptable but 'the feeling of the sun' is more natural. 'I love sunset' should be plural or 'the sunset' depending on meaning; 'I love sunsets' expresses a general preference. Suggestions: specify 'walk on the beach', use 'feeling' for noun consistency, and pluralize 'sunset' to indicate habit.