Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, câu chủ đề rõ ràng và ngắn gọn; tránh tiếng lắp và diễn đạt sai ngữ pháp. Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể liên quan đến cảm xúc hoặc ví dụ, dùng từ nối để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: "Yes, I always look out of the window because I enjoy seeing the changing landscape. For instance, I like watching fields and rivers pass by because it helps me relax."

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel. I enjoy watching the changing landscape because seeing trees and rivers makes me feel relaxed, and sometimes I notice little details like farmers working in the fields.

Gợi ý: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn, dùng liên từ để nối ý. Ví dụ: "Yes, I often take photos to keep memories; for example, I photograph sunrise or interesting landscapes."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery to keep memories of my trips. For example, I usually photograph sunrises or unusual buildings so I can look back at them when I pack my photos.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng với cấu trúc chính-sao sau đó giải thích cụ thể. Tránh dịch từ tiếng Việt trực tiếp như "very fast and cold" — dùng từ chính xác (cooler, fresher). Có thể đưa lý do cụ thể và một so sánh ngắn. Ví dụ: "I prefer the mountains because the climate is cooler and the air feels fresher than in the city."

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because the climate is cooler and the air feels fresher compared to the city. For example, I enjoy hiking in pine forests where the temperature drops and I can escape the heat.

× Yes, of course I already do that because on the way to the location where I'm travel is many beautiful sceneries.

✓ Yes, of course I already do that because on the way to the location where I travel there are many beautiful scenes.

Student used incorrect verb form and word choice: 'I'm travel' is wrong; correct is 'I travel' (simple present) for habitual action. 'is many beautiful sceneries' mixes singular verb with plural noun and uses uncountable 'scenery' incorrectly. Use 'there are' for existence with plural noun and use 'scenes' or 'scenery' (uncountable) appropriately. Improve by using subject-verb agreement and correct existential 'there are'. Suggestions: use 'where I travel' or 'where I am traveling' for progressive context; use 'there are many beautiful scenes' or 'there is a lot of beautiful scenery.'

× So in there, umm uh, see it make me feel very relaxed and.

✓ So being there and seeing it makes me feel very relaxed.

Original sentence fragments and wrong verb forms. 'So in there' is awkward; 'see it make me' lacks appropriate verb agreement and structure. Use a gerund phrase 'being there and seeing it' as the subject and 'makes' for third-person singular. Remove filler words and finish the sentence. Suggestion: form complete clause with proper subject and verb agreement.

× Yes, I do because it is the way how to, how am, uh, take my memory about the trip, uh, to and I can when I pack, I can see all of them, uh, of that and can remember the trip.

✓ Yes, I do because it is a way to keep memories of the trip, and when I look through my photos later I can remember the trip.

Sentence contains incorrect infinitive and verb forms: 'how am, uh, take my memory' is ungrammatical. Use 'a way to keep memories' (infinitive 'to keep') and 'when I look through my photos later' for clarity. Remove filler words and ensure correct verb forms and word order. Suggestion: use 'a way to remember the trip' or 'to keep memories of the trip' and place time expression 'later' appropriately.

× I think I refer more to travel to the mountain because now I live in the city with the weather always hot, so I think the mountain is very fast and cold more uh.

✓ I think I prefer to travel to the mountains because I now live in the city where the weather is always hot, so I find the mountains much cooler.

Multiple issues: 'refer more to' is wrong verb choice — use 'prefer'. 'the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' for general preference. 'with the weather always hot' needs a relative clause 'where the weather is always hot'. 'the mountain is very fast and cold more' is meaningless; likely intended 'much cooler'. Also correct article and word order. Suggestion: use 'prefer to travel to the mountains' and 'I find the mountains much cooler'.