Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences), and add one specific detail to support your feeling. Use linking words for coherence and correct verb forms (e.g., "when I travel"). Avoid unclear words like "reservation."

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the green countryside very calming. For example, last weekend I watched fields and small villages pass by, which helped me relax during the journey.

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence flow, remove redundancy ("enjoy" repeated), and give one specific example of what you photograph. Use a linking phrase to connect ideas, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially of wide green fields and rivers. For instance, I recently captured a sunset over the hills, which looked beautiful in photos and made the trip more memorable.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar ("I prefer going on hikes"), and provide one specific supporting detail or brief reason. Use a linking word to connect reason and example, and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and outdoor activities. For example, I often go on weekend hikes with friends, where we explore trails and camp overnight, which I find more exciting than beach trips.

× Of course, I usually look out the window at the beautiful lush greenery view when I traveling by bus or car and any other public transport, so I feel it very mesmerizing along with reservation.

✓ Of course, I usually look out the window at the beautiful, lush scenery when I travel by bus, car, or any other public transport, and I find it very mesmerizing.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'traveling' after 'I' (present simple requires 'travel'), awkward noun phrase 'greenery view' (use 'lush scenery'), unnecessary phrase 'along with reservation' (unclear meaning). Suggestions: use present simple 'travel' for habitual actions, replace 'greenery view' with 'lush scenery' or 'greenery', remove or clarify 'reservation' if needed, and add commas for clarity.

× I usually enjoy taking photos of the large greener view outside the car window or bus and also I enjoy witnessing the outstanding view that I find very rejuvenating alone.

✓ I usually enjoy taking photos of the lush scenery outside the car window or bus, and I also enjoy witnessing the outstanding views, which I find very rejuvenating when I am alone.

Errors: 'large greener view' is ungrammatical; use 'lush scenery' or 'greener views'. Sentence structure is run-on and missing 'when I am' before 'alone'. Suggestions: use noun 'scenery' or plural 'views', keep 'taking photos' (correct -ing form), add 'when I am alone' for clarity, and split clauses with commas or conjunctions.

× Actually I prefer the mountains because I love hiking and also I love adventurous trips or activities.

✓ Actually, I prefer the mountains because I love hiking and enjoy adventurous trips and activities.

Errors: repetitive 'I love' is stylistic but not grammar; missing comma after 'Actually'. Suggestions: combine verbs to avoid repetition, add comma after introductory adverb, and use 'and' to link similar items.

× For example, I prefer go to hikes with my friends or families members.

✓ For example, I prefer going on hikes with my friends or family members.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'prefer go' — after 'prefer' use gerund 'going'; incorrect preposition 'to hikes' — use 'on hikes'; 'families members' is wrong pluralization — use 'family members'. Suggestions: use 'prefer going on hikes', correct preposition 'on', and use 'family members' for members of one's family.